VN Ren'Py Naughty Neighbours [v0.30] [OuterRealm3D]

[DurumMurud]

I would argue that graphically (static images) was good and fun, BUT, storytelling was very bad.

Mom is discovering herself with erotic pictures but she used to film porn videos with the husband?
Mom is surprised by teens cocks but she used to go to nudist beach and pose with the cliché black bulls?
Mom is hesitant to touch any other man than her husband but she used to play swinger?

Why when the neighbour showed her porn pictures she didnt remember the ones on her PC? For example... Flashbacks are breaking the mom character too much, I dont know who Susan actually is and Im loosing interest in her, its starting to fall into the Anna or Myriam side of things rather than early Sophia in AWAM (current is BS too).

If author wants to write a STORY, then he needs to take more care about the timeline and her character. If author just want to do a sequence of sex clichés like Project Myriam, then dont waste time with flashbacks and exploring her past. This in between is "meh".

 

[Lust & nipple]

I would argue that graphically (static images) was good and fun, BUT, storytelling was very bad.

Mom is discovering herself with erotic pictures but she used to film porn videos with the husband?
Mom is surprised by teens cocks but she used to go to nudist beach and pose with the cliché black bulls?
Mom is hesitant to touch any other man than her husband but she used to play swinger?

Why when the neighbour showed her porn pictures she didnt remember the ones on her PC? For example... Flashbacks are breaking the mom character too much, I dont know who Susan actually is and Im loosing interest in her, its starting to fall into the Anna or Myriam side of things rather than early Sophia in AWAM (current is BS too).

If author wants to write a STORY, then he needs to take more care about the timeline and her character. If author just want to do a sequence of sex clichés like Project Myriam, then dont waste time with flashbacks and exploring her past. This in between is "meh".

I agree, but it seems to me that he simply cannot do better, many projects miss a lot of small details that successful and high-quality ones have.
I like this game, but it lacks normal dialogues and narration, this is a direct problem, since it is clear that the author simply cannot implement it well, in the future I think he will become much better if he pays attention to this, I think this is not his last project.
But I think he did a great job, he chose a difficult theme for the game, but yes, you need to work on renderings and lighting, and sometimes there are not enough renderers, for example, when characters touch each other, it's literally 1 static render ( although, on the contrary, it should be the peak point of the event, and it should be shown as best as possible ), it's not very good for fap content, I want to see actions and descriptions.
This game could be a hit (MC MOM) in general, I think he will grow up and he will succeed

 

[Sexcultist]

Made a quick 'n dirty incest patch. Extract and put in "game" folder. Removed the "step" from the relations and changed "college" to "school". You can open zz_relationships.rpy in text editor and change the relations / age to your liking. Make 'em 18 instead of the default 19 or whatever

simple_human is working on a proper patch here. I strongly recommend waiting for his patch instead, my coding skills are sub-par to say the least

 

[Stivler]

Whats new on this Game? Is thus have incest?

 

[daggers97]

Half this game is good there's just too much filler to not have a skip button

 

[Overlord070]

Can you share that screenshot that flashes at the ending credits where Susan is blow drying her hair and then like every 10 seconds a quick image flashes of her naked surrounded by dicks with writing all over her body everytime I try to make a save it comes out blurry, this is the image i was talking about 10 seconds after this screen it quick flashes this image
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Thankfully it's rare but I hate that nose thing, makes the women look disgusting every time I see it.

 

[totonr2]

second password?

susie laptop is Suzie123

 

[Gabo69780]

They have been blue for a long time?

 

[Stivler]

Boring Update