Visuals seem to be done with care, but I don't think I've played a VN on here that was as lazily written as this one - not that I begrudge the Fallout 4 - Bethesda writing team branching out into make porn games, but come on.
Most emblematic was perhaps when you find that house burning.
Do you alert any sort of rescue service? Medical aid? Neighbors? Naw. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Wake up next day. Got a second wife. Somehow after living for years on that island you don't know about a weirdly specific rule, and of course your first wife doesn't care. You also don't think you need to tell your daughter. Or your best friend. Or anyone, really. Nobody cares. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Does your new wife get her own room? Does she need clothes? Is she traumatized by the experience? Does she have a job? Who knows. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Why was there a fire? Does that need investigating? Is there any danger? Does something need to be retrieved from the home? Are the ruins just left to smolder? Nobody knows. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
But the entire game is like that. You got a wife and daughter and get told that all men get sick and die. Eh, no bother ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
You surprise your wife with anal sex. "Are you surprised?" "No" "Cumming" "Yes". Wow, the eroticism. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Rare fragments of a mystic rock that might have caused everything that happens on this island? Just randomly on the couch. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Half the time the dialogue doesn't have speech indicators, that's how little the game cares about any sort of writing ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I'm vaguely reminded of a fantasy setting in which every person has a limited, arbitrary number of words during their life time. If you speak too much you just drop dead. I just want to assure the author that writing an extra sentence here or there won't kill anyone. Even when applying porn logic in a porn logic setting with porn characters you can still at least cover some reasonable grounds while having all the porn fun ^^
But, again, visuals are pretty good. Certainly that is done with a level of passion. Seems wasteful to then not at least care a little about anything else.