Others NekoNTR [v0.0.11b] [nekoaddict]

[GammaReborn]

windows blocked this executable. is it safe? i ask because it wasn't defender that blocked it, and there was the option to run it. so i'm unsure what it means.

False Positive.

 

[Raferu]

False Positive.

Not exactly, since it didn't come from Widows Defender. It's more like, "Are you sure you want to execute this program that we don't know anything about?"

 

[GammaReborn]

Not exactly, since it didn't come from Widows Defender. It's more like, "Are you sure you want to execute this program that we don't know anything about?"

Oh. Thats not windows blocking it then, its just warning you that it doesn't know what it is.

 

[_PSY_]

For me the one of best, if not the best NTR game out there.
While I do agree with some here that Vanilla did go into super slut too fast on OnlyFyans, I also really hope she will finally get the real dick in next version of the game

PROS:
1. Art is amazing, all characters are really well made (Don't know why people are so against AI art, its just another tool and its not easy to make such consistent quality of images)
2. UI is really well made and super responsive
3. Story is superb and very engaging
4. I like the way dev chose to give a player a view on what is happening behind MC's back
5. Diary is a nice touch that gives you even more insight on what is going on in Vanilla's head
6. I love that female characters don't have huge tits or asses

CONS:
1. Waiting for next update
2. I don't like that MC has micro penis
3. Not a fab of Anal (I wish it could be optional)
4. Humiliation and degradation of sweet vanilla
5. MC's fantasies about vanilla with other guys

Suggestions:
1. On NTR path those fantasies could be turned into nightmares
2. Just follow on what you imagined for this game, its amazing and it shows you have a lot of love for this project


For NTS i don't really care honestly

 

[Raferu]

Oh. Thats not windows blocking it then, its just warning you that it doesn't know what it is.

I mean, it is technically blocking the execution until you tell Windows that you trust that application. It's just not a Windows Defender alert like the ones we see shared in this site every week.

 

[melantha]

2. I don't like that MC has micro penis

i remember there was an option for this.
you get to choose your size.

though i dont replay previous chapters on new versions.
is it still there or was it removed?

 

[_PSY_]

i remember there was an option for this.
you get to choose your size.

though i dont replay previous chapters on new versions.
is it still there or was it removed?

There was, I don't know if it still exist but either option is still really silly small dick compared to just about everyone else

 

[Serenity Life]

There was, I don't know if it still exist but either option is still really silly small dick compared to just about everyone else

Yes, there is a choice. This choice is an important part of the plot…

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[Serenity Life]

I’ve just finished the full translation. Version 0.0.9d. And I tried making a cover. Hope you like it.
But if you’re going to throw tomatoes at me, make sure they’re ripe… I’ll catch them, they’ll go in the salad… =))
Anyway, Nekoaddict, don’t be mad that I used your renders.
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Я на недавно закончил полный перевод. Версия 0.0.9d. И попробовал сделать обложку. Надеюсь вам понравится. Но если будете помидорами в меня кидать, кидайте спелые... а я их буду ловить, на салат пойдут... =))

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P.S.
Version 0.0.10 will come later. But I might wait until there’s something significant in the novel, or after Vanilla’s October break.
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П.С.: Версия 0.0.10 будет позже. Но, возможно, я подожду, когда либо будет что-то значимое в новелле, либо после Октябрьских Каникул Ваниллы.

 

[112358f13]

NGL, as much as I'm looking forward to Vanilla finally going all the way with the NTR, I kinda hope it doesn't happen right after the current cliffhanger. I'd rather not see her make that leap while heavily intoxicated with some random fuckboi she just met, rather than someone like Darren after being worn down by her friends, or agreeing to meet up with Daiki as her biggest fan. Maybe if they continue hanging out during the rest of her vacation she could give in by the end before she heads home, but I think for now I'm hoping for a scenario where he takes her to try on some of his mom's prototypes and she just changes in front of him unthinkingly, and maybe sucks him off or something to thank him.

 

[Serenity Life]

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I’ve got this idea: the MC wants to give Vanilla something luxurious.

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And now I can’t help but wonder—how will Vanilla get herself out of this?
(Though of course I already know; I came up with the scene myself, heh.)

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А у меня такая идея: ГГ захотелось Ванилле что-то подарить из одежды.

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И вот мне интересно, как выпутается Ванилла (хотя я точно знаю, я же сам эту сцену придумал, хехе)

 

[rotelor27]

What I don't like about this type of game (and even this type of story) is that the MC is always taken for a fool, under-equipped at the bottom, and the FMC is too easily manipulated and drastically changes its way of thinking (literally, becoming a professional liar too quickly).

NTR is far too anchored in its own stereotypes, which makes the stories very boring and redundant!

While this game has its qualities (including the interface), it's far from what I would consider a "Good Game," unfortunately!

 

[Htoon]

I think what should be considered a "good game" should be independent of one's personal preference.

If you happen to not like chocolate ice cream, you don't have to eat it. And you certainly don't have to go around saying that's bad ice cream, when your issue with it isn't its taste but its flavour.

 

[Serenity Life]

I think what should be considered a "good game" should be independent of one's personal preference.

If you happen to not like chocolate ice cream, you don't have to eat it. And you certainly don't have to go around saying that's bad ice cream, when your issue with it isn't its taste but its flavour.

Hi.
You’re mistaken.
He’s not talking about tastes or preferences in genres. He’s talking about logic, about perception, about the fact that making the character dumber than even in anime is the height of absurdity.
The only way to justify this stupidity is a personal fetish—the MC pretends not to understand, thereby provoking feelings of jealousy and adrenaline. In other words, in the story, he chooses to put on the mask of a complete idiot so that the experience feels as intense as possible.
However, the same effect could be achieved using subtler, more literary methods. No need to bring a sledgehammer to swat a fly. Yes, making someone dumb always works. But that’s lazy writing. And this laziness shouldn’t be justified with other tastes or ice cream.

 

[Morpher215]

Hi.
You’re mistaken.
He’s not talking about tastes or preferences in genres. He’s talking about logic, about perception, about the fact that making the character dumber than even in anime is the height of absurdity.
The only way to justify this stupidity is a personal fetish—the MC pretends not to understand, thereby provoking feelings of jealousy and adrenaline. In other words, in the story, he chooses to put on the mask of a complete idiot so that the experience feels as intense as possible.
However, the same effect could be achieved using subtler, more literary methods. No need to bring a sledgehammer to swat a fly. Yes, making someone dumb always works. But that’s lazy writing. And this laziness shouldn’t be justified with other tastes or ice cream.

It's important to label things properly . It isn't necessarily lazy writing . The writer could just be unaware of how to make it better , so inexperience is more appropriate but regardless I do see the writer trying and putting in effort . So I wouldn't say it's lazy . If you think you can help by pointing them in the right direction of better literary devices then do proceed to do so .

 

[Htoon]

Hi.
You’re mistaken.
He’s not talking about tastes or preferences in genres. He’s talking about logic, about perception, about the fact that making the character dumber than even in anime is the height of absurdity.
The only way to justify this stupidity is a personal fetish—the MC pretends not to understand, thereby provoking feelings of jealousy and adrenaline. In other words, in the story, he chooses to put on the mask of a complete idiot so that the experience feels as intense as possible.
However, the same effect could be achieved using subtler, more literary methods. No need to bring a sledgehammer to swat a fly. Yes, making someone dumb always works. But that’s lazy writing. And this laziness shouldn’t be justified with other tastes or ice cream.

I don't want to be rude. But whatever this spam you're writing is supposed to achieve is beyond me.
Tropes are used in basically every form of storytelling.
Clueless MC, small dick etc.. are ntr tropes. It's ok if you find them annoying, you're entitled to it.
But you can't just say that fundamental parts of the story so far are "lazy, and the same thing could be achieved in a subtler way" and pretend you're providing constructive criticism or something.

Moreover tropes aren't lazy, or bad. They frame the story, and make it easier for people to get into it. Or something, I'm not a writing expert or whatever. go look it up yourself.
If ntr tropes are boring and repetitive, because you've read so many stories with the same tropes, well.. That sounds like a you problem, not a story problem.

You clearly like the story, since you've been active in this thread, and have translated it. So maybe think more about what the implications of your "suggestions" actually are?

And remember that this is not a novel, it's porn. Really well written porn compared to most of it out there.

 

[melantha]

It isn't necessarily lazy writing
inexperience is more appropriate

wow this needs to be said more often, and not just in terms of the writing.

Yes, making someone dumb always works. But that’s lazy writing. And this laziness shouldn’t be justified with other tastes or ice cream.

people saying this and that are lazy.

it's as if you're expecting everyone to be born with the skills
and it's the laziness that makes the quality drop

these solo devs go through learning processeses, many of them making their first game

it crazy to brand it as lazy just because it falls under certain tropes and doesnt progress like the perfect game in your mind

However, the same effect could be achieved using subtler, more literary methods.

then say skill issue? not laziness. but even that label i dont totally agree with.
it looks like you know how to write more than the average of us here?
but the way you label others work doesnt seem appropriate.

 

[kumasaki]

Hey nekoaddict, can you please add a scaling option for the game? It's going through my screen and I can't get back to the menu.


sorry for traslation

 

[Serenity Life]

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I like your response, so here's a "like."

Spoiler: But let me correct you.

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Experience is the most important part of abilities because it brings new knowledge. But what I called lazy/laziness is a state of fatigue. Nothing more.

Yes, I admit, I wanted to write something sharp. But I wasn't trying to belittle the author with it.

Spoiler: aaaand.....

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И как же я зае....устал с этой хернёй. Понимать английский - легко. Переводить НА английский.... так же, как для вас - изучать русский. Проблемы в понимании тонкостей. Но нет проблем для тех, кто учил.... а значит - надо учить. НАДО... но лень - та ещё сука... =)

 

[Serenity Life]

It's important to label things properly . It isn't necessarily lazy writing . The writer could just be unaware of how to make it better , so inexperience is more appropriate but regardless I do see the writer trying and putting in effort . So I wouldn't say it's lazy . If you think you can help by pointing them in the right direction of better literary devices then do proceed to do so .

Hi. Yes, and just above I already explained this... strange situation.

Spoiler: Спой, Лер.... ну спой, зараза ты такая....

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