- May 6, 2017
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The animation is a bit off. Too fidgety. The girl chatters during sex so much that it seems that she is about to fall apart. And there is not enough feedback. It would be nice to see some kind of reaction to the MC's actions, other than leg cramps and wild shaking. And most importantly, there is no suspense. The plot jumps right off the bat. No development. MC just took it and fuck it. And it gets boring very quickly.
In general, the idea is very attractive, but so far it looks more like a demo. I really hope that DEV will make something good out of this, in the future.
p.s. The sister's sprites are overexposed. They could use a little contrast.
p.p.s. At least draw a picture of a kiss! Is it really that hard?
In general, the idea is very attractive, but so far it looks more like a demo. I really hope that DEV will make something good out of this, in the future.
p.s. The sister's sprites are overexposed. They could use a little contrast.
p.p.s. At least draw a picture of a kiss! Is it really that hard?