This is not an actual complaint about the game because I think it's great storytelling overall, and you get SO much story in this game, but I hate it when games get you so involved with your initial LI, before you have even MET the other potential LI, so now you feel like a scumbag when/if you decide to explore the new potential LI just to see what they are like. Who doesn't fall for Eliza right off of the bat, and that's WELL before you even meet the other 3 potential LI. And with Selena it really makes you feel kind of scummy if you decide to explore her at all, due to the way it's portrayed as sneaky. But personally I'm suspicious of Selena already, she reeks of bad news. Eliza4Ever!Good game dev , there were few minor typos in the game and I noticed some dialogues and it was confusing and i wasn't able to tell whether they were thinking it or saying it and one dialogue where MC cousin dialogues shows as MC but overall loved fantasy aspect of the game . And loved the wholesome childhood story between MC and Alice . And my one suggestion would be don't overdo branching paths and focus on the story as too much branching like 10 to 15 paths will be difficult for a single dev .
Funny how people are complaining about the game , idk whether they have played it .This is more of a slowburn wholesome romance game and MC isn't a guy who is only for sex like in most games ( nothing wrong with it ) but here there is a story and he rejects a girl who flirts with him in tavern on his own and only 2 major LI on the banner are introduced and we are getting to know them and if you want to go monogamous you can and so far I love both Alice , Eliza and if we get option to pursue both in the future , I'll choose them without any doubt and with some more LI to be introduced in the future , if they are good I would love to add them to the Harem but that being said like dev explains in his patreon it's not going a typical Harem story where all girls wants MC for his cock , you have your work cut out for you if you want Harem ( which I like and looking forward to it ) or you can stay monogamous if you prefer it but some people saying / hoping things like that this game should never have a harem even as on optional is not an opinion it's just childish behaviour .
I'd say the reason she knows MC's personality so well is likely due to his decisions he makes when around her and she's probably been keeping an eye on him since he first arrived. either that or she knows some form of magic that let's her watch him wherever he isFeels really weird that Eliza suddenly knows MC's whole entire personality and motivation despite only knowing him for one day. Also, the writer does a good enough job with the dialogue that a lot of the character thoughts feel like extra, unneeded text.
I used DA's port and had no issuesHas anyone had problems with the android version? I'm getting evo-gen swearing and asking to uninstall. This is the first time I've encountered this, especially in a port from Ghost. Threw it in virustotal to check.
Yeh she survives, it was already in this thread. Question is how, and in what way. Will she be injured, how bad? Can she walk at all? Will he use his powers, to revive her? Damn I hate cliffhangers.well this episode ended with an illegal cliffhanger ... It's obvious she survives since the story starts with them older and stronger but the question is how? Also i saw that this episode there was the Harem option but i liked Eliza so much that the other LI aren't interesting to me
What are you even talking about? She doesnt know him after one day but considering the mc saved her life twice at this point, she feels safe and comfortable around him, which is plausible if she was on her own for quite some time before they met.Feels really weird that Eliza suddenly knows MC's whole entire personality and motivation despite only knowing him for one day. Also, the writer does a good enough job with the dialogue that a lot of the character thoughts feel like extra, unneeded text. In fact, this would make more logical sense if it was Alice as the main companion rather than Eliza. If Alice said all the things that Eliza was saying, it'd be way more believable.
Fully agreed. An evil Mc has already proven himself fully willing to kill anyone attacking them. Not killing her would make absolutely no sense. A great problem this game has is Eliza. Her introduction early on ruined every other love interest. I suspect that he will use her being crippled to bring the MC away from her to spend time with others, but even if we spend as much time with the others and do as many things with them, it won't be the same as we have already done it with Eliza. It's a hole one cannot dig themselves out off. She was made too perfect and got to spend an incredible amount of time with you, bonding, learning, training etc. Even if the other LI's are as good, we still did it with her first.Right. A few points.
1- Do not fucking Acting Lessons this shit. Seriously. That won't earn you any points. And paralyzing a love interest is damn near as bad as killing her. If you go that route you HAVE to make it avoidable somehow. Nephilim powers for divine healing (even on the "evil" path), divine intervention by Angel-dad to prevent the MC going ballistic. Something. Because if not the next update is essentially the MC literally nuking that entire town, possibly the world, then it's time to roll credits. Anything less is out of character and makes no sense.
2- MC needs the option to kill Selena if he isn't on her route / is on Eliza's route (or hell, even if he is on it), and he needs to be able to do it without any negative impact to his relationship with Eliza. In fact she should be down with it. This was a complete betrayal and people are way too forgiving of that kind of thing. Actually, it wasn't even a betrayal because she was apparently only using them from the start. "Oh, it was for her sister." No, fuck that, don't care, burn them both.
3- When payback and death eventually comes for Taron, it has to be exquisitely painful and gruesome. We're talking ripping out his spine and feasting on his soul as he watches while still barely alive kind of pain.
Just my 2 cents.
Fully agree with both of you, im really curious how the dev manages the Selena betrayal considering shes one of the (not so many) LI's so far, i really hope we arent forced to forgive her after hearing her sob story invovling her sister but i could imagine it as were quite early in the story and i imagine it would be a (too) big path-split having the rest of the game evolve with her alive or dead, depending on your decision.Fully agreed. An evil Mc has already proven himself fully willing to kill anyone attacking them. Not killing her would make absolutely no sense. A great problem this game has is Eliza. Her introduction early on ruined every other love interest. I suspect that he will use her being crippled to bring the MC away from her to spend time with others, but even if we spend as much time with the others and do as many things with them, it won't be the same as we have already done it with Eliza. It's a hole one cannot dig themselves out off. She was made too perfect and got to spend an incredible amount of time with you, bonding, learning, training etc. Even if the other LI's are as good, we still did it with her first.
Yeah, this right here. Eliza is my MC's love, and his anchor. You don't fuck with that.
Would be a different story if she had lead the mc himself in a trap, thats forgivebale.
Exactly. I honestly don't see how this will progress in any desirable way. Eliza's death would honestly make me leave the game, though I doubt it would happen. Not killing Selena will be completely out of character for the MC, yet how would one branch off the story this early? She is still a Love interest, so obviously she is not going to die in all senarios. Perhaps an evil mc will develop some mind control powers to fit her into the story? The dev might have some grand plan about how to go with this, but if so I really don't see it. The romance between him and Eliza is fantastic and incredibly well written. It can also really apeal to most if not all players. Eliza have both a domineering and a submissive personality. Sometimes she mouths off and decides things on her own, yet she still follow the mc, really letting him decide. It makes the player not feel overruled or dominated by her, but it also doesn't feel like your completely dominating her, it is a breath of fresh air from the usual porn relationship tropes on this site. We already have this near perfect relationship. I cannot for the life of me see how anyone is expected to pick somebody else, no matter how interesting characters they are. I may be wrong and might not see some bigger picture, but I feel like the developer has painted himself into a corner.Fully agree with both of you, im really curious how the dev manages the Selena betrayal considering shes one of the (not so many) LI's so far, i really hope we arent forced to forgive her after hearing her sob story invovling her sister but i could imagine it as were quite early in the story and i imagine it would be a (too) big path-split having the rest of the game evolve with her alive or dead, depending on your decision.
Maybe she's somehow able to flee even if we decide to kill her or something like that or she dies anyway even when we forgive her. Imo even on the fully good path i would kill her lol. How else do you want to make sure that nobody fucks with the people you care about? If a good sob-story or being forced into betraying you is good enough to forgive it.
Would be a different story if she had lead the mc himself in a trap, thats forgivebale. But she used Eliza after she sneaked herself into their little group of friends, thats not acceptable, no matter what. Selena made a gamble, she had to consider who's more dangerous, Taron or the MC and she was sure Eliza and MC would be dead after the encounter and she would therefore live. There has to be proper consqeuences .. she could have revealed the whole thing to the mc and eliza and ask them to rescure their sister. But she did decide against it and even taunted Eliza in her cell ..
And i agree that the dev kinda trapped himself a bit about how good Eliza as a LI is, even trying to take her out of the picture due to injuries/kidnapping/important appointments whatever to give the player the possibility the explore other LI's will always feel kinda bad at this point already and like artificial ways to keep you away from you LI which could even lead to the other LI's feeling more annoying as youre forced to spend time with them even when they are fine themselves.
To be honest, even if she would have died, all future romances would still feel kinda tarnished and i would probably prefer a non-Li playthrough afterwards lol.
One reason is the romance between the two of them being so damn good and another one being the setup i think. Like getting a blowjob and licking a pussy of a virgin in medieval times feels more commiting than doing the same drunk at a college party lol.