Create and Fuck your AI Slut -70% OFF
x

rspkers

Member
Sep 20, 2017
258
1,809
365
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Exactly, and it's not even that singular scene. Many of the "dark path" dialogue options just seem either full on scorched earth 0-100, or just random petty asshole behaviour. I was hoping the dark path had the MC be more calculated, cautious, and results driven. Instead, the dark path is your typical B-movie villain that makes really bizarre decisions that don't make much sense at all.

It's less Dark Lord, and more Edge Lord. :KEK:

I guess I was just hoping for more creative choices when being "evil"?
 
  • Like
Reactions: qaywsx and kartolas

kartolas

Well-Known Member
Apr 10, 2021
1,090
1,734
287
Exactly, and it's not even that singular scene. Many of the "dark path" dialogue options just seem either full on scorched earth 0-100, or just random petty asshole behaviour. I was hoping the dark path had the MC be more calculated, cautious, and results driven. Instead, the dark path is your typical B-movie villain that makes really bizarre decisions that don't make much sense at all.

It's less Dark Lord, and more Edge Lord. :KEK:

I guess I was just hoping for more creative choices when being "evil"?
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
 
Last edited:
  • Like
Reactions: qaywsx

UnoriginalUserName

Forum Fanatic
Sep 3, 2017
5,174
18,728
910
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Yeah...I was honestly pretty disappointed with that choice. My MC was already more or less dark-side except when it came to doing something to make Eliza smile, but he's going to be burning down anything in his way from now on. That said, while I have absolutely no problem killing Selena's sister in front of her, leaving Selena herself alive afterwards is just stupid. That's when you pull out the laser eyes and cook her, man. Or at least give us an option to let the sister live but still kill Selena.

I get that you may have plans for her in the future, but this is a story branch that is glaringly obviously needed, in my opinion.
 

undead_sun

Member
Jan 24, 2021
208
149
149
Killing only the sister does not sound all that "dumb" to me. Selena did everything for said sister. It was her purpose this whole time. She was still doing things for her, as she was going to send her away to hide her. Crushing everything she worked for works as revenge because it leaves her with nothing but despair. You punish her in the cruelest way for her actions without killing her, you make her suffer the most you could. It's not dumb, it's pure evil and it gives the author some choices in how he wants to shape Selena's character going forward. Will she be a lifeless husk, submissive to Noah? Will she look for revenge and eventually die herself, cursing her life to the end?

That said I am more interested in why these characters never use a horse to travel through the woods, the early parts of the story kept me thinking about that. Also no weapons, why was Eliza not armed to begin with? She barely got a dagger after joining the guild.
 

ImperialD

Message Maven
Oct 24, 2019
12,243
12,575
1,001
remember evil begets evil ... theres no return from that , once you start down that path ... and females are more attracted to love than hate :)
 

HentaiKami

Engaged Member
Jan 27, 2019
2,841
4,249
451
Killing only the sister does not sound all that "dumb" to me. Selena did everything for said sister. It was her purpose this whole time. She was still doing things for her, as she was going to send her away to hide her. Crushing everything she worked for works as revenge because it leaves her with nothing but despair. You punish her in the cruelest way for her actions without killing her, you make her suffer the most you could. It's not dumb, it's pure evil and it gives the author some choices in how he wants to shape Selena's character going forward. Will she be a lifeless husk, submissive to Noah? Will she look for revenge and eventually die herself, cursing her life to the end?

That said I am more interested in why these characters never use a horse to travel through the woods, the early parts of the story kept me thinking about that. Also no weapons, why was Eliza not armed to begin with? She barely got a dagger after joining the guild.
Weapons and horses might be quite expensive. Horse riding was rare in medieval times, unless you were noble, and weapons were also expensive for commoners.
 
  • Heart
Reactions: BuuPlays

UnoriginalUserName

Forum Fanatic
Sep 3, 2017
5,174
18,728
910
Killing only the sister does not sound all that "dumb" to me
Leaving an enemy alive is a stupid, stupid idea. No matter how weak and "not a threat" she may seem to be now, you never know. Case in point : the current quest for the cup. Oh gee, this magic divine thing exists and it can perform miracles. And right next to it in the cave happens to be a magic minigun of killing angels and shit. See my point?
 

Kadajko

Well-Known Member
Oct 28, 2021
1,102
2,047
387
Last edited:

desmosome

Conversation Conqueror
Sep 5, 2018
6,754
15,264
864
There are some things that really stick out visually, like the sad puppy facial expression that is used excessively and the MC's parents looking exactly the same and wearing the same clothes 10 years apart. It's not a simple fix, as it will basically require the dev to get better at DAZ, but there is something else you could remedy.

It's incredibly silly that MC's parents are perpetually referenced as Mama and Papa, even by the adult MC and the narration. You could give them a name... and let this grown ass hard boiled MC refer to them as Mother/Father instead of Mama/Papa.
 
3.90 star(s) 113 Votes