ESM13
I think your definition of good and evil is a strange....to say it courteous.
You think it is good to reject and hurt a girls feelings just because she is not your girlfriend? How is it good to break a heart?
Just using them for pleasure would be evil, trying to manipulate/control them through their feelings would be evil, but he cares about the girls and their feelings, there is nothing wrong with poly relationships, its only wrong to hurt or use people.
You consider cheating as bad, okay, but what about just being honest? You wrote the girls yourself, if given the choice to share you or never getting any closer to you, what so you think would be the main vote? The girls are desperate for your love...is it really the good path if you leave a trail of crying girls, hurt feelings and broken hearts on your way to impregnate a girl? I consider this the evil path, totally ruthless.
If you already include the classic angel and demon conflict, then dont use the corrupted morals human idiots wrote in holy books and think about the nature those beings share in ALL religions any myths..the evil demon, selfish and ruthless, prefers corruption, suffering, control and carnal lust...the good angel, helpful and caring, prefers empathy, joy, free will and love. Do you really think the angel would be pissed if you make your sister happy? Or the demon could enjoy seeing her become happy?
Okay, that peeping event is a little gray, noone got hurt but someone who locks a door dont wants to be seen. This could be seen neutral or evil. But making girls happy or love in general is far from evil. Besides, monogamy is a deviate concept invented by men, not by nature or any gods.
The plot is good, the renders are very good and the whole concept could make a really good game...but the morals are gamebreaking wrong defined. I mean... what you think you did was giving the protagonist the love of his live and lots temptations to lose her...but what you really did was sending the protagonist straight to hell because lots of girl loves him and he is forced to be a fucking asshole and hurt all of them just to be good enough for one...sounds more like a demon in disguise than a girlfriend to me.
This post was proudly presented by a poly lesbian after a fucking long 18h workday in her woman shelter.
Now excuse me, big sis is horny and needs my attention before bed, i may comment other stuff
later tomorrow.