New update Oliver not being obnoxious anymore is the same as the rewriting of Tolkien's orcs into family oriented, misjudged people. It might work for new readers, but not for the ones that were here from the start and saw the whole debacle live. You did not even bother to write up a reason that fits the story, he just magically returned with a future Laura bullshit...bad writing on the same level as "Somehow Palpatine returned".
Oh, I understand how it works. I did not make myself clear when I said you decided to alienate patrons. My bad. The point I was actually trying to make was that vote should not have happened in the first place. Whatever the result was, you would lose patrons trust/opinion.
I understand it perfectly. You can't write optional characters in your story. Somehow you can write Ashley and Tara as optional, but not Oliver...I know, you're gonna tell me the story is centered around Laura, so it's easy to write off female characters.
It feels to me that you are arguing in bad faith, maybe I'm wrong and too stubborn to realize. The forum/patrons seem to be dominated by a crowd of people that want Laura to become a rag for everyone to fuck, they enjoy it that way, kudos to them. The story was always going in this direction, you clearly don't know how to write an open relationship dynamic from a dominant male point of view (some haters would say that's not possible, since sharing is inherently a submissive thing to do). You wrote a whole lot of rules and tendencies, there was a lot of communication between Laura and MC, but you somehow argue that the most important one, the choice of partners, is not something that you can write around.
Thanks for taking the time to respond, much appreciated. I guess I can take a hint, do the democratic thing (since the vote didn't go my way) and just shut up from now on. I said my piece, if there's anything you can take away from that it's up to you.
On a totally different topic, is this a typo ? Doesn't seem to be something that should show up on the stag route.