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Shikharisfree

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what does the corruption entail?. I mean I always confused it with Mind Control & Cheating. Is it personality manipulation?.
Personality degredation / changes over slow periods of time based on events that the person wouldn't do usually but has gradually grown to accept it.
 

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Don't do that.

There is and old saying:
The one who tried to please them all, ended up pleasing no one

Everyone like (or don't like) different things. Some don't like mother-son, and you already cut that part of a story. But now some will come with idea that you should cut the lesbian story or put some yakuza or samurai characters (if the story is in Japan that it must have them). Or to put gay or god forbite futa story or some other weird shit. And at the end even you will not be happy with the story (because you cut some very good staff).
The point is that you already have very good story and you should tell it the way you feel is right.

ashitanojoe is right about marketing, maybe about Steam platform. Most people trust paying only with PayPal, so Steam is more trustworthy.
I'm not sure that he is right about splitting the story in two parts, one with only Kiara and one full story. Problem with corruption story is that most people care only for MC. So if you split, 95% (or even 99%) will play only Kiara part, and that part will have plot holes, because some events are triggered by side characters (and you won't see that in Kiara only story). Patrons will not be satisfied with full story, because when they pay they will expect more content on Kiara (preferably more sexy scene). But they will end up with side characters that they don't care about, because they have not been long enough in Kiara only version.
He mentioned Innocent or money as good example. That is very good story, but it is also great example where side characters are irritating as fuck.
Instead of cutting the story, maybe you should start releasing one update a month. That update will be big enough to contain the side characters story (that is important to main story) but will also have enough content on Kiara (especially sexy content) that will make everyone happy.
About Kiara and Mia. You are right that Asian women look younger that Western. But the problem is that Mia is looking one or two years younger than she should. And Kiara is looking year or two older than she should. And you lose 20 years gap between them, now it looks like 15 years, and not 20 years, difference between them. But for me that is not the problem.

Updates are already coming like bullet train, I don't remember other game where updates are coming this fast. Try working on marketing, maybe try to fix grammar errors and price errors (in cosplay section) and everything will be fine.
No no , I am replying to joker's comment . He is from chapter 1 days actually back when the the original version ( you can look it up at page 1) , It was quite convoluded since i had real time swappintg between characters . As in if japan it was 2 am , I'd show 4 pm in ny .

So yeah that's what i had told him got fixed , all scenes and side stories are still in . but i changed the format to Kiara whole day first , then ny segments.

Also I'm gonna market once i have 0.5 finished , because then majority of the story stuff is done of ch 2 and then.


Lastly , I'm not splitting or scrapping anything.

The only scene i cut in sachiko now is her and her son having few nsfw scenes.

Now instead i am just doing what she was supposed to do in plot in 0.5 later , SPOILER -> She's gonnna help sofia and mia by distracting john in their plan to recover memory files for kiara.

and give jennifer one more pep talk and then leave the story until the ending.


So np , nothing is cut.


Kiara is prioritized more and more now because of not just player complains , but because in script we are also at that point.
 

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When will the story of João and Veronica begin? I'm really looking forward to this story especially if by some chance John manages to get Veronica to submit to him without any blackmail, at least after a while
Joao the mexican cousin of john?

lmao jk ,

but anyway it happens after evelyn leaves for japan so.. 0.5 ig yeah
 
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The Dev been shorting the side story because he is trying to please every player type including the ones that are moaning about the side content, which is unfair for him and the original story that his team wanted to tell, there is a really good and very well written story within this game, a story that would make a prefect movie (without the porn) and has beautiful renders, all credit goes to the team making it as they are all talented

I support the dev and his team and this game to how he originally wanted the game to be on the script that is written for the full game, the side content does not bother me and other patreons that are supporting the game

Day 1 is about getting Kiera safe in Japan away from her father that forced Kiera to be the way she is, From day 2 it's about protecting Kiera and keeping her in Japan and you are able to skip the side content, so players already have a choice to see it or skip it already, from day 3 it's all about Kiera rebuilding her life and memories and on day 4 the recent last patreon update has been all about Kiera and her past and she starts to remember things and is really very well written as if you have a heart, it even made me tear up

Some players want sex and rape from the start, those players are the ones moaning and giving the dev death threats, that should not be happening, this is not like the dev for A Wife & Mother game or a few other games where the dev takes your money and takes a few months just to make one update, there are real people including me that help fund the game to be made so it has a future because we like the game and story and the dev vision for the game


Patrons will not be satisfied with full story, because when they pay they will expect more content on Kiara (preferably more sexy scene)

That is not actually true, as a patreon myself and has been for 4 months, I and others patreons support the game because of the full story, Kiera, her family, and the side content, all makes the story, it's the story and script that got me to support this game in the first place and will support it till the end

Exactly , I'm obviously going to deliver you top tier nsfw elements and content regarding the mc

That exists no doubt on it.

However I'd prefer supporters that actually believe in me / my team and the project rather than just "oi tiddies"

If you are there for that , you won't be disappointed either . But i just don't want the game to be another simulator of corruption.

This has everything , Corruption elements , incest and story.


So writing all that while takes time , will be done properly.


Trust me guys , if all i wanted to make was another innocent or money . I could've rendered the entire thing in 5 months and be done with it.


This is more of a long term thing , where i give constant updates like a manga pretty much .

The only thing i guess i can say to shelly's comment is that if you have liked the story till this point , you will love the rest.

If you have not , You're gonna hate it simple as that.

That's all :)
 

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Exactly , I'm obviously going to deliver you top tier nsfw elements and content regarding the mc

That exists no doubt on it.

However I'd prefer supporters that actually believe in me / my team and the project rather than just "oi tiddies"

If you are there for that , you won't be disappointed either . But i just don't want the game to be another simulator of corruption.

This has everything , Corruption elements , incest and story.


So writing all that while takes time , will be done properly.


Trust me guys , if all i wanted to make was another innocent or money . I could've rendered the entire thing in 5 months and be done with it.


This is more of a long term thing , where i give constant updates like a manga pretty much .

The only thing i guess i can say to shelly's comment is that if you have liked the story till this point , you will love the rest.

If you have not , You're gonna hate it simple as that.

That's all :)
The only thing i guess i can say to shelly's comment is that if you have liked the story till this point , you will love the rest.

You know the recent patreon update brought me to tears, if the public don't have a heart, they won't understand how powerful the story really is, plus you already know I love the story and the writing as everything is put together perfectly, plus, I want to see Kiera whoop John's ass
 

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Constructive criticism about something as trivial as that in a game where women, usually the FMC, get raped, molested, sexually harassed and 'seduced' by the (usually) ugliest and creepiest (old) mofos ever, but a woman not looking old enough to show her age is your biggest complaint about the game ??:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::KEK: C'mon man, constructive criticism is the last thing I'd call something like this statement.



I second this. The ppl who claim some women don't look their age, old wrinkled, or fuck knows what else, enough need to get out more and see that there's women (a whole lot of them, especially the rich or slutty ones) obsessed with the way they look and do all kinds of shit to look younger and attractive. A healthy lifestyle is a good argument I'd use to defend what I said, coz you can't be stuffing yourself with all kinds of junk food and other unhealthy shit like that and still want to look young or fit, but fact is, women waay younger than their actual age do really exist IRL. I honestly fail to understand what the big deal is with this trivial thing, but to each their own.




Exactly. I never understood why some ppl find a woman's body not being 'realistic' enough in a porn game, where logic is thrown out the window and all kinds of stupid or ridiculous shit happens like it was something normal. IIRC, Lana, FMC's bestie, gets sexually harassed and raped, the usual sugarcoated rape in this type of games but STILL rape, by a desperate idiot for reasons, and our peeps here bitch about a woman not being old and wrinkled enough ??:ROFLMAO: I'm kinda curious to know if they have a real mom fetish or some shit, coz this is weird and ridiculous at the same time, and who the fuck prefers older women (40+ yo) to younger, more attractive ones ??:eek::WaitWhat:
This is nothing , I can at least understand this as preference.

There was this dude earlier around page 17 i think , that was complaining to me that a wing chun fighter would evade attacks not block them , hence it ruins my immersion in this vn. :)

What do i say that to that?

Nothing , just that filthy frank shot gun in my mouth gif.
 
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Joao the mexican cousin of john?

lmao jk ,

but anyway it happens after evelyn leaves for japan so.. 0.5 ig yeah
Hahahaha, cool, I wrote the name wrong but thanks for the answer. It is possible in future scenes for Veronica to end up submitting to himself without any blackmail. Or will their relationship just be with him blackmailing her?
 
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Hahahaha, cool, I wrote the name wrong but thanks for the answer. It is possible in future scenes for Veronica to end up submitting to himself without any blackmail. Or will their relationship just be with him blackmailing her?
This is kinda spoiler territory so I'll put the tag here

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The Dev been shorting the side story because he is trying to please every player type including the ones that are moaning about the side content, which is unfair for him and the original story that his team wanted to tell, there is a really good and very well written story within this game, a story that would make a prefect movie (without the porn) and has beautiful renders, all credit goes to the team making it as they are all talented

I support the dev and his team and this game to how he originally wanted the game to be on the script that is written for the full game, the side content does not bother me and other patreons that are supporting the game

Day 1 is about getting Kiera safe in Japan away from her father that forced Kiera to be the way she is, From day 2 it's about protecting Kiera and keeping her in Japan and you are able to skip the side content, so players already have a choice to see it or skip it already, from day 3 it's all about Kiera rebuilding her life and memories and on day 4 the recent last patreon update has been all about Kiera and her past and she starts to remember things and is really very well written as if you have a heart, it even made me tear up

Some players want sex and rape from the start, those players are the ones moaning and giving the dev death threats, that should not be happening, this is not like the dev for A Wife & Mother game or a few other games where the dev takes your money and takes a few months just to make one update, there are real people including me that help fund the game to be made so it has a future because we like the game and story and the dev vision for the game


Patrons will not be satisfied with full story, because when they pay they will expect more content on Kiara (preferably more sexy scene)

That is not actually true, as a patreon myself and has been for 4 months, I and others patreons support the game because of the full story, Kiera, her family, and the side content, all makes the story, it's the story and script that got me to support this game in the first place and will support it till the end
Well said my friend people just won’t appreciated a good dev trying to bring not only a few hot scene but a good story as well. Those ungrateful just a bunch of horny dogs wanna see some actions from the start instead of following the pace. Maybe cause this dev was new I guess so they trying to bash him for good but I don’t see them being toxic to the other bad dev example AWAM devs and others etc
 

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Well said my friend people just won’t appreciated a good dev trying to bring not only a few hot scene but a good story as well. Those ungrateful just a bunch of horny dogs wanna see some actions from the start instead of following the pace. Maybe cause this dev was new I guess so they trying to bash him for good but I don’t see them being toxic to the other bad dev example AWAM devs and others etc
It's appalling to what flack he gets on other sites, the abuse he gets because one or two people don't like something and then on here you get people requesting but seems more like demanding that he changes this and changes that because they don't like something, but, that one person that does not like something in the game, there is another 1000 people that does like what's in the game

The dev knows why i love his game, this is the best adult VN I have played in a few years that has a real powerful story, that for me, needs supporting, I want the dev to grow and get more support, more reviews as this game and the dev and his team deserve it
 

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I have put together a playlist / playthrough videos from beginning of day one to end of Kiera date with Azumi for anyone that is confused about this game and or wants to see more if you have not played it further than end of day one, this is to show you this adult VN has a very powerful story to be told, this also will help anyone that wants to know how to build the corruption, what scenes you can skip and so on



This is to show you, this game has way more to offer than some people may realize, Don't worry, there is timestamps
 

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Updated my compressed Android port of New Beginnings in Japan Chapter 2 to v0.4.3.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

Links:
 

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It's appalling to what flack he gets on other sites, the abuse he gets because one or two people don't like something and then on here you get people requesting but seems more like demanding that he changes this and changes that because they don't like something, but, that one person that does not like something in the game, there is another 1000 people that does like what's in the game
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