This weekend I've played Steps Of Debauchery. The game has just started, but it has one very nice option. When you start the game you can unlock „Bonus content” (you have to type code that you receive when you become patron).
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And during the game, in some scene, there is special button that display extra content (sexy picture of female characters).
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It's a nice way to give Patrons some extra material (because of their support), and also to attract some others to become Patrons (especially those who can not wait to see MC nude).
You have very nice story so this is just suggestion how to attract more Patrons.
But above all
you must take a break and fix the spelling and grammar errors! You have it even in the last update. Maybe it is not a big problem for you, but this errors are annoying, and they really drive people away from this game.