Thanks for the response it was nice to see a mature response to my criticisms. I will keep an eye on this VN, I recognize the work that went into it and is currently still going into and I commend you for that.
I did say "mostly" lesbian focused so I didn't mean only lesbian. I see some real brilliance in some of your scenes and writing but just when it seems to have a potential awesome path open up it mostly pulls back.
Unfortunately for me the mother is the most interesting character and she started off so well taking her daughter out of that situation immediately. I would have loved to have seen more of her before we switched. The subway scene in a VN set in Japan would have been awesome to see that scene complete (even if it was just a fantasy flash or something) but it pulls back. The massage scenes with the Blond (sorry i forget her name) was amazing imo. You have quite a few almost amazing scenes but stop short in my personal opinion.
Having said that, I respect this VN, you have to follow the story you want to tell and tailor it as best you can to the people on Patreon that support you. As I just discovered this VN and I am not a Patreon member take what I say with a grain of salt. I support a 1/2 dozen VN's on here so I'm not averse to spending on the VN's I love. Were not there yet but there is hope in this VN.
It's not bad and I wish you nothing but success going forward.
Cheers
Thanks! , also yes the sudden feeling of pulling back is there because we want to have multiple points of romance with guys where in the end it connects when Slight spoiler but obvious that when kiara does remember everything again.
So rn we're doing those points that we'll call back for that satisfactory moment.
As for the sex scenes that stop short , we're kind of trying to make sure nothing goes too extreme.
It was a mistake we made with lana earlier and don't want it repeated so proper sex is only there when time is right , hence the multiple steps in liz's / blonde mom.
So yeah perhaps we'll include a bit more of mia as well in chapter 1 revamp and the mid day 3 that is after our break , for now i can't do much because my hands are tied with another project that has sponsors breathing down my throat lol
Anyway thanks for playing like i said earlier , hope you enjoy the future stuff too.
