Alfius

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There are still many recurring grammar errors. And I really don't get how so many developers can confuse "your" with "you are", that's basic English we learn in middle school. The plot is still among the most complex I ever seen, truly an epic work with so many variables in the coding. The graphics are still the less successful aspect of this game. This game, with top tier graphics and slightly deeper dialogues and characterization of the girls, expecially in the sex scenes, would be among the top 10.
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Maybe the dev are not from an English speaking country and did not have English in Middle school.
Maybe the English that the dev uses is self taught.

But glad that you like the game, it is quite awesome. I agree with some polish, it could be a top tear game.
 
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There are still many recurring grammar errors. And I really don't get how so many developers can confuse "your" with "you are", that's basic English we learn in middle school. The plot is still among the most complex I ever seen, truly an epic work with so many variables in the coding. The graphics are still the less successful aspect of this game. This game, with top tier graphics and slightly deeper dialogues and characterization of the girls, expecially in the sex scenes, would be among the top 10.
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That's because the grammar check for this version hasn't been done yet - as (1) it was leaked here early and (2) the guuy who was doing it can't now. HoneyGames is Italian and therefore not a native English speaker. I'll actually be doing the grammar check for 1.3 this week when I get the chance.
 
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Devil'sHunter

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Thanks for the public release. i enjoyed it very much, but i have question! Why only the MC is judged here? Like Elia can get in bed with Luana in the first try but MC can. like some girls like Yvette Ashley are ok with nightstand with David but not the MC, if the MC wants to get them in bed then he has to have a relationship! Tatiannia is ok with having a fling with Terrance but not MC! martina even being a slave is rebellious but one night with maud and Martina Maud rel is 100. I am not biching as MC has Yanmei and a few for csual fling but still feels constrained. every rel is restricted like michelle rel restricts rel with mark and harley, ashley rel affects chances with tatainna and so many more. the essence here should MC deving methods to keep max girls, like instead of getting all girls in porn, better to run elita and have guenda and rebecca at his personal booty call cum secretaries. riley has a wild past but MC has no sensible or sensative handling route to have fling just to flesh out frustrations without affecting her personal life and its upon her to be his or not. MC can be cuck but others not. it may feel like a rant but these are some personal feeling i think that can make the game more alpha like instead of fishing in an old pond. Still i am thankful to honey games for such a great game which will become more awesome, as whatever i say i do like girls he has and for the public release he does unlike other creators. Thank you very much. become more
 

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With all the talk about girlfriend and loyal fuck buddies no one mentioned Zoe (Roadhouse owner). Look after her and she'll opt for the MC rather than David and she doen't like one-night stands.

I can forgive Luana for bonking Elia - it helped sweeten the deal to bring Akissa to HoneyGirls as Akissa/Elia have a close relationship. Better him than Kyle anyway. Luana's loyal otherwise anyway - as long as you keep her happy and don't go off with Belen after San Matthews she'll stay away from Luke.

If chasing Adele I find you get the best points with her on reset after the Adele Plan. You can try two ways here - (1) have sex with Catherine and confess to Adele or (2) don't have sex with Catherine.
 
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Maybe the dev are not from an English speaking country and did not have English in Middle school.
Maybe the English that the dev uses is self taught.

But glad that you like the game, it is quite awesome. I agree with some polish, it could be a top tear game.
he is italian
 

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First of all.
Today I finish the fixed version bug and load a "definitive" version of the game. I unlock it for 15+ tier and last month's 25+ who didn't receive the game.
I'd like to do a Q&A. But I can see it's hard to create an argument about patreon.
So I make a copy of some questions I've been asked in private or on discord or in other places. so I hope to give you some help and some tricks about the game.
The post will be reserved for +1tier. If I let it free there are some words that patreon signals and could give me problems with the content
First of all.
Today I finish the fixed version bug and load a "definitive" version of the game. I unlock it for 15+ tier and last month's 25+ who didn't receive the game.
I'd like to do a Q&A. But I can see it's hard to create an argument about patreon.
So I make a copy of some questions I've been asked in private or on discord or in other places. so I hope to give you some help and some tricks about the game.
The post will be reserved for +1tier. If I let it free there are some words that patreon signals and could give me problems with the content

well ask us freebees , we're avaiable, i'm getting rain , i got time
 
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HoneyGames

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There are still many recurring grammar errors. And I really don't get how so many developers can confuse "your" with "you are", that's basic English we learn in middle school. The plot is still among the most complex I ever seen, truly an epic work with so many variables in the coding. The graphics are still the less successful aspect of this game. This game, with top tier graphics and slightly deeper dialogues and characterization of the girls, expecially in the sex scenes, would be among the top 10.
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I know. They are typo. I realize that when I write I automatically make that mistake. sometimes I realize it and correct it other times I don't pay attention to it.
 

cccxxx

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I know. They are typo. I realize that when I write I automatically make that mistake. sometimes I realize it and correct it other times I don't pay attention to it.
more game dude , not all of us are an offduty english techer !
what would it take for you to put up an update every 2 weeks, grammar aside ;)
???
 

HoneyGames

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First of all.
Today I finish the fixed version bug and load a "definitive" version of the game. I unlock it for 15+ tier and last month's 25+ who didn't receive the game.
I'd like to do a Q&A. But I can see it's hard to create an argument about patreon.
So I make a copy of some questions I've been asked in private or on discord or in other places. so I hope to give you some help and some tricks about the game.
The post will be reserved for +1tier. If I let it free there are some words that patreon signals and could give me problems with the content
First of all.
Today I finish the fixed version bug and load a "definitive" version of the game. I unlock it for 15+ tier and last month's 25+ who didn't receive the game.
I'd like to do a Q&A. But I can see it's hard to create an argument about patreon.
So I make a copy of some questions I've been asked in private or on discord or in other places. so I hope to give you some help and some tricks about the game.
The post will be reserved for +1tier. If I let it free there are some words that patreon signals and could give me problems with the content

well ask us freebees , we're avaiable, i'm getting rain , i got time
I put the post reserved for patrons because "patreon" creates problems for me every time I write words like "porn, sex, fuck" in a public post. Already a couple of years ago they blocked the page for a month because you could see a nipple... I would like to avoid that it happens again. Anyway. at the moment I have only made a copy of some questions and some answers that I have been asked here. and the answers that I have made to the new questions under the post are things that those who follow this discussion on f95 already know.
I mean. I'm writing much more here on the forum and on discord in private than on the patreon page. I think it is right that I give them certain information as well.
 

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more game dude , not all of us are an offduty english techer !
what would it take for you to put up an update every 2 weeks, grammar aside ;)
???
2 days to program the whole week giving space to each character and to each scheduled event. time to make the render (about 2weeks... a little more sometimes). 10/14 days to do all the coding and write the story.

In septempber October I hope to get a new PC with a powerful video card to make better renderings in less time.
 

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I find myself oddly desiring to keep Yoshi disappeared, keep Mady gone, move Lara in with Andrea, and sit at the pool watching them splash around in their swimsuits.
 
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Rickster82

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I checked the update 1.3 again. All in all OK, better than expected. But in the end it left more open questions than solved quests. We'll have peace from Yoshi for the next updates, but I still think we'll see him in action again at some point. I think the next updates should complete and end quests like the ones with Rain or Rebecca, excluding repetitive sex scenes. I also think the ELITA soryline will probably come to an end in the next 1-2 updates.
 

cccxxx

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honeygames
since i caught yuo here:
i played this bugged version and was expecting to be able to visit the strip joint again to ask guenda to do porn - never happened in two weeks time .... bug or is there a special time offer ? was i past the point of recruitment?
also hannah showed up to say she signed with mark - fixed story or have i missed something?
i had a pink cast that asked for second scene but there was no one to do it .....bug or missed oportunity?

obviously i'm teribly happy about lara, melissa, rebecca, maybe yan mei sliding towards porn

loved the michele elsa

missed ashley - bug aparently

going for zoe as girlfriend ? anal didn't show

if you need somebody for grammar check - i may be lazy but i'm a proficiency level certificate graduate by cambridge !
 

HoneyGames

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Hanna and Guenda got a limited time offer. I mean Hanna signed with Mark... Guenda who knows...

Yeah Ashley need to be fixed in the new update (tonight)
Zoe anal too

Thank you, another guy working on the grammar check at the moment.
 

Pumpkin1984

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You forgot that bitch David. He's more an ennemy than a friend.
He's a fucking rat and deserves kick in the nuts! He's possing, like a bro, to MC, but through a game he's shown making low moves towards girls, MC like!

P.S. But what is Your choice of hypocritical GIRLS in the game?
 
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