Blessed vanilla + harem, truly the most perfect combination of tags humanity has ever created.
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Shame, I downloaded this because it looked pretty good, but unfortunately the writing is pretty bad...
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The overview may need an edit.
How can the ex-girlfriend break up with you?
Also how did she do it relentlessly? Increasingly intense breaking up over time....
How can the ex-girlfriend break up with you?
Also how did she do it relentlessly? Increasingly intense breaking up over time....
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I know this is petty, but not being able to choose the MCs names just irked me so much I could not enjoy what probably is an intersting game.
It looks good, but the name thing was just too immersion breaking to enjoy, cause I hated the name/lastname(or in this case surname/first)used. Idk why myself, I just do.
It looks good, but the name thing was just too immersion breaking to enjoy, cause I hated the name/lastname(or in this case surname/first)used. Idk why myself, I just do.
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Well, it can be said that it's a demo, maybe 10-15 minutes of reading (?) this needs a Kinetic Novel tag, there are no choices, I would even say Blackmail, MC name cannot be changed. (the dev at least clarifies that he does not have much knowledge and that maybe in the future he will add choices)
I don't know if the family will be LI, if they are it is only going be step-cest (Although that could be changed by a patch, which would be necessary if the dev plans to continue on patreon)
IMPO it was kind of boring, a lot of Japanese manga or culture trope (it seemed like I was reading a Seinen manga, but later with the appearance of the npc "Harima Kenji" of School Rumble I didn't expect much anymore)
If the girl that appears is one of the main LI, well, I want to throw her under a truck...the mc helps her and the first thing she does is blackmail him
Anyways, good luck.
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I don't know if the family will be LI, if they are it is only going be step-cest (Although that could be changed by a patch, which would be necessary if the dev plans to continue on patreon
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IMPO it was kind of boring, a lot of Japanese manga or culture trope (it seemed like I was reading a Seinen manga, but later with the appearance of the npc "Harima Kenji" of School Rumble I didn't expect much anymore)
If the girl that appears is one of the main LI, well, I want to throw her under a truck...the mc helps her and the first thing she does is blackmail him
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Anyways, good luck.
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Needs a kinetic novel tag, doesn't it? Did not like the female lead at all, shit personality. Wanted to be as antagonistic to her as possible, what a bitch lol
Meh so far.
2 LIs almost raped so far, and 1 LI you try to save blackmails you immediately.
Need a name changer too.
Need that LI to improve a lot, or I will just kick her to the curb.
2 LIs almost raped so far, and 1 LI you try to save blackmails you immediately.
Need a name changer too.
Need that LI to improve a lot, or I will just kick her to the curb.
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Another unpleasant little coward. The introduction of an active enemy (and another silent by-standing enemy) among what one can only assume are the harem candidates is a pretty hard no from me.
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Immediately after the blackmailing, one of the flunkies introduces itself, and it depresses me no end there's not a reply from the MC with something along the lines of "no, your name is flunky 1".
Edited to add:
Immediately after the blackmailing, one of the flunkies introduces itself, and it depresses me no end there's not a reply from the MC with something along the lines of "no, your name is flunky 1".
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Ah, porn VNs, where the only three options for the father seem to be:
1. He is dead
2. He is missing
3. He is a massive prick who treats everybody, especially his hot wife like shit, so you can claim everything that was his without having a bad conscience... you are still a perverse incestuous fuck of course, but what can ya do?
1. He is dead
2. He is missing
3. He is a massive prick who treats everybody, especially his hot wife like shit, so you can claim everything that was his without having a bad conscience... you are still a perverse incestuous fuck of course, but what can ya do?
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That is.... a bit of a contradiction, don't you think? A masterpiece, which only "seems" good? How is it a masterpiece, then, if it only "seems" good?
Perhaps she gets back together with you and then breaks up with you again and again? That would explain both an ex-girlfriend breaking up with you AND doing so relentlessly.
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Looking forward to how this game is going to shape up. The renders look good already, and the first preview one reminded me of Caribdis' (THE GOAT's) work. Girls are hot, too.
The story is.. well, nothing new yet. Some common tropes, highschool setting. We've been there. But it's just the intro, so what comes afterwards is what really matters.
The fable for the japanese language and culture is a little too much. I don't need an explanation of how names work in Japan, or how the gang's name is written in Kanji. I can understand how it's easier to flesh out a setting like this if you've watched 100s of anime and are familiar with the mood/setting/feel etc. of them, but it can become a little too much.
Also, using expressions like "dafuq?" "oh boi" and record scratches plus the japanese stuff makes it difficult to immerse into the story.
All of that sounds harsher than it is, of course. I'll try out the next updates for sure. Dev seems very enthusiastic about this, which is very important!
The story is.. well, nothing new yet. Some common tropes, highschool setting. We've been there. But it's just the intro, so what comes afterwards is what really matters.
The fable for the japanese language and culture is a little too much. I don't need an explanation of how names work in Japan, or how the gang's name is written in Kanji. I can understand how it's easier to flesh out a setting like this if you've watched 100s of anime and are familiar with the mood/setting/feel etc. of them, but it can become a little too much.
Also, using expressions like "dafuq?" "oh boi" and record scratches plus the japanese stuff makes it difficult to immerse into the story.
All of that sounds harsher than it is, of course. I'll try out the next updates for sure. Dev seems very enthusiastic about this, which is very important!