Ah good to know, still would appreciate if you guys moved it to here at some point.
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The final photo is the town of Trista from the Trails of Cold Steel series. The Thors Military Academy walkup. Plants/pavement/decos all the same.
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Grammar is in desperate need of assistance. Id also suggest tweaking the pacing in the initial screens it feels quite amateurish and like yer just trying to get it out of the way as fast as possible.
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also please make sure the gods awful sex noises are on one of the volume tracks so they can be muted
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also please make sure the gods awful sex noises are on one of the volume tracks so they can be muted
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Hot.MC: "Oh God, that girl is going to get hit by a truck."
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Good start, but I have to agree that the grammar is in need of improvement
I'd be open to correct some of the more egregious grammatical errors if you are interested, I'm not great in anyway but I think I could push it to be better than what it is now.
I'd be open to correct some of the more egregious grammatical errors if you are interested, I'm not great in anyway but I think I could push it to be better than what it is now.
isn't this kinda the set up (with some differences) in The Aristocrat's Otherworldly Adventure: Serving Gods Who Go Too Far? (yes i had to remind myself what it was called lol) in that the guy saves 2 girls and dies doing it but didn't need to cause the guy with the knife would of tripped and never been a threat LOL (also think its used in another anime too now i think about it idk which)
I think it's a pretty common isekai trope, iirc without rewatching Konosuba is the same.
not really the same i guess same idea of trying to save someone who didn't need to be saved but in konosuba's case its he tried to save a girl who he thought was gonna be hit by a truck but it was a harmless tractor and he died of shock tbh im not sure if its a common trope tbh i think its not that common (atleast in anime ive watched ALOT of isekai LOL) but i think it most likely happened a few times
Not an isekai but first time I saw it was Yu Yu Hakusho which came out in 1990. I've seen it a few more times in anime/manga and a few more times in AVNs. It's a relatively common trope where an MC dies saving someone who didn't need saving.
Will there be stronger hypnosis, like turning the women in mindless, emotionless servants?
Not so far, the most you can get without mind control is a blowjob and that one still requires blackmail.
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So basically "The seventh son of the seventh son of the seventh son of the seventh son" in a nutshell
Everytime I hear or watch anime isekais anymore and see "so and so was reincarnated as xyz number son" my mind immediately goes to "the seventh son of the seventh son of the...." phrase
Everytime I hear or watch anime isekais anymore and see "so and so was reincarnated as xyz number son" my mind immediately goes to "the seventh son of the seventh son of the...." phrase
I hope alot of mind control gets added, and please add a button to progress the day and more repeatable things to do and being able to hypnotize people whenever we want, made it to end of version and theres nothing to do(there arent any fun repeatable scenes or actions to do)
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Yes, here is the Dev Note:
I decided to change almost everything from the first version of the game. Initially, I wanted to add many things such as random events outside the main story, individual status for each character. However, I realized that progress in the story was slow, and the game was becoming too repetitive. So, I decided to redo most of the game and focus on the story to make it more interesting with fewer repetitive actions. I hope you like it, and if you have any constructive criticism, please let me know!