VN Ren'Py Nick Marlote Noir [v0.525f] [ShamanLab]

[ShamanLab]

Dude, you really need to get a proof-reader who can speak fluent English. I played this for the first time yesterday and......just......wow. Not only are are meanings and words all jumbled together but in some cases, you use words that are completely wrong. I could not finish even one "episode". Sorry, bro, but unless it is rewritten into understandable English, it's a hard No from me.

Hi, there!

In my novel, I try to focus on the visual part. Let it be HS2 and not Daz, but still I tried to make the story visually interesting and, most importantly, understandable without carefully reading the text. I don't know if I succeeded because English is not my native language.

Also, one of the reasons for the lack of understanding of the story may be the connection in some of my past games. For example, Cat and Hudsucker Industries appeared in my games a long time ago and smoothly migrated to the story about Nick Marlote.

Also, some of my movie references may not be clear to everyone. I recently found out that only 30% of the people I talk to have seen Videodrome movie. And recently I read in this thread that not all players know who Raymond Chandler is.

 

[BWQX]

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[ShamanLab]

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Hi, it was explained above.
Nick is not a gay.

In one episode (first screenshot) there are two student characters who develop a strangely intimate relationship. This is all the gay content in the current version.

upd. You can skip this episode if you want.

 

[BWQX]

Hi, it was explained above.
Nick is not a gay.

In one episode (first screenshot) there are two student characters who develop a strangely intimate relationship. This is all the gay content in the current version.

upd. You can skip this episode if you want.

I specifically searched for this tag and then clicked in to find something wrong.I hope to remove the tags as soon as possible to avoid incorrect searches.

 

[ShamanLab]

I specifically searched for this tag and then clicked in to find something wrong.I hope to remove the tags as soon as possible to avoid incorrect searches.

Don't you think you might enjoy this episode?

Characters are so hot.

 

[BWQX]

Don't you think you might enjoy this episode?

Characters are so hot.

People who like girls should like them, but I don't like girls. So it appeared in my search results, which was a bit unexpected. Upon closer inspection, it turned out that the label was incorrect.

 

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[ShamanLab]

People who like girls should like them, but I don't like girls. So it appeared in my search results, which was a bit unexpected. Upon closer inspection, it turned out that the label was incorrect.

Okay, I'll delete this tag. But in the next updates, I plan to reorganize this episode into a full-fledged separate investigation of Nick Marlowe where his client will be gay and he will turn to Nick with his gay partner relationship problems.

Adultery cases it's not something what only straight people having monopoly.

 

[BWQX]

Okay, I'll delete this tag. But in the next updates, I plan to reorganize this episode into a full-fledged separate investigation of Nick Marlowe where his client will be gay and he will turn to Nick with his gay partner relationship problems.

Adultery cases it's not something what only straight people having monopoly.

I hope there won't be a situation where it looks completely female, but the setting is male.It is not easy to please a single group, but more difficult to please multiple groups.人心不足蛇吞象(Not in my native language, unable to translate this sentence, awkward.)

 

[ShamanLab]

I hope there won't be a situation where it looks completely female, but the setting is male.

I'm talking about this two students characters from the first screnshot.

 

[BWQX]

I'm talking about this two students characters from the first screnshot.

Relax and don't need to be liked by everyone. Being able to persist in doing projects that you enjoy is already very powerful. come on .

 

[ShamanLab]

lluis61 weird review. Very biased review!

a) Why the change of title?

It was eplained above. There is web spider

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which reacting on 'Marlowe' keyword as a bull on red rag and sending abuses on freehosts. It’s easier to change the title than to start arbitration with freehost support each times when new updates come.

b) But, as is, finishing the first case made me ask: "What I'm doing here losing my time for nothing?"

I know that often people don't read the texts in novels. This is O'k for me. But I must tell you that Nick hasn’t finished any of his cases yet. I will try to fix this in future updates.

The only storyline that has completion is 'Limk and Elmira'. But this story stands apart for now and it's for Patreons only.

 

[MAD6999]

At some point will Nick be able to establish a relationship with a character? Or will they just be short stories and characters that we can have fun with but who will not appear again?

 

[ShamanLab]

At some point will Nick be able to establish a relationship with a character? Or will they just be short stories and characters that we can have fun with but who will not appear again?

There are characters that go through several episodes. Like Jess Muffburger or Bill Austin (and Cat). I didn't forget about good characters after one episode.

The novella pays quite a lot of attention to other characters and their relationships. Jess and Bill content in the current version they take up a lot of space, probably more then Nick erotic scenes.

I'm even thinking about multiple protagonist tag.

I feel like I need to seriously reorganize the game in the next updates. Expanding it in the current format is very difficult due to the number of characters and the complexity and understatement of their stories.

I'm definitely not trying to make the game where people having random sex.

upd. I should also warn you, the scenes with Jess and some of the scenes in Videodrome considered as shock content by some people.

Initially, I planned to make a game in the genre of short stories, but the stories turned out to be not short at all. I haven't even finished them yet. None of the ones that i started.

 

[molitar]

I could not call this a game. I could not even call this a story. It's shorts with the dumbest whatever you want to call them. I deleted in first 5 minutes of the first whatever you call it story. Absolutely horrid.

 

[ShamanLab]

I could not call this a game. I could not even call this a story. It's shorts with the dumbest whatever you want to call them. I deleted in first 5 minutes of the first whatever you call it story. Absolutely horrid.

Did you ever watch 'Naked Gun' movie?

Or 'Dead Men Don't Wear Plaid'? Or 'Murder by Death'? Maybe you familiar with my previous novel (Where the exorcist cat banishing evil spirits from the TV or something like that)?

By the way there is about 2k+ pics so not sure how much fun you could have by playing for just five minutes. You probably haven't completed any story.

upd. For those who love my art, I will say that I am currently working on a plot in which the Cat will shoot infected naked nuns with an Uzi gun. Presumably this will take a place in the stables.

 

[ShamanLab]

Hi all!

"Miauccio on Feliciofagus Island" announce.

I was busy healing my back and then went back to making crafts on the RPG Мaker. I made a small game for a competition in a local RPG Мaker community. So far, the game has not been translated into English and according to the rules of the competition, it cannot be published on other resources until the voting of the competition is completed.

But in about a week or so, those who like to play as a cat will be able to download the free version.

Open world, survival, craft game about the survival as a Cat on a hostile island. The mapping is reminiscent of my previous game on the Мaker.

The game is finished, but I feel like it needs some more polishing... or more content. That is, release a higher version before it is fully completed. I don't think it will take much time.

After this I will return to finishing the stories started by Nick Marlowe. I will say again, in Nick Marlowe I do not plan (in the near future) to start new stories, but I will try to nicely finish the ones that have been started and not completed.

 

[ShamanLab]

"Meauccio on Feliciophagus Island" on Itch for free.

Meowchio, a humble small and innocent city cat, was kidnapped by cultists and taken to an island where bloody hunts are held and cruel games are played out.

However, the sectarians did not know that Meowchio is a smart cat, passionate about an unusual hobby... he is an amateurish enthusiast in creating natural poisons.

The game has elements of roguelike, crafting and survival exploration, so I advise you to save more often.

The duration of the game is approximately one to two hours.


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I didn't win community contest, but it was the most original game of all the entries.

Bizarre lvl meets ShamanLab standards.

Game translated by google translator.

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[lluis61]

lluis61 weird review. Very biased review!

a) Why the change of title?

It was eplained above. There is web spider

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which reacting on 'Marlowe' keyword as a bull on red rag and sending abuses on freehosts. It’s easier to change the title than to start arbitration with freehost support each times when new updates come.

b) But, as is, finishing the first case made me ask: "What I'm doing here losing my time for nothing?"

I know that often people don't read the texts in novels. This is O'k for me. But I must tell you that Nick hasn’t finished any of his cases yet. I will try to fix this in future updates.

The only storyline that has completion is 'Limk and Elmira'. But this story stands apart for now and it's for Patreons only.

Man, Are you angry? It seems so...
I, as a reader who has passed reading and enjoying the complete works of Raymond Chandler seven times (and probably going into an eighth) cannot be dismissed as someone who "don't read the text in novels".
Second, If you are treating the people who reviews your works as "biased" without more reasoning that your points a) and b), you've got a problem. It's called "uncapable of apply auto-criticism".
But don't worry, not everyone is like you and I will let you and your game in peace. In fact, I've got here by a secondary result in a search. BTW, congratulations in changing the banner of your game. The "Marlowe" one in the first release was very, very good, but the visual contents of the game didn't achieve a 20% of the banner. The new one is nearer to what players will find.
All of this said with all the respect. Goodbye.

 

[GustavoGanz]

hmmmm when I look at the Patreon page of ShamanLab you don't read anything about "Nick Marlote" anymore, so the game seems to be pretty much dead.
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The only thing missing here is the "abandoned" tag.