VN Ren'Py Abandoned Nicole My Son's Fiancée [v1.0] [TYHEAD]

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moudy

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No one is asking about the "penultimate senior year" mentioned in the description?! WTF is your second-to-last senior year? Are you PLANNING to fail?
Sooooo...... school is not 4 years where the first one is junior year and the latter 3 are senior years? Please elaborate how it is in the US/UK.... Because this makes perfect sense in my eyes/mind
 

KissKissStudio

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Well, I hate to say but you guys are assholes this dude just made his first game. Of course, it needs more polishing, but if you do some research you can see he was searching for a programmer and 3d artist. He probably didn't find the help he needed so he did everything himself. It's easy to criticize when you never put yourself in the developer's shoes.

If you want to listen to my tips here:
Try finishing the renders, because everyone hates noise in 3d games if you pc is too weak and it takes too much time, HAVE PATIENCE! :D but if the pc is really fuking slow try using other rendering methods because photo-realistic needs quite strong pc.

If you still want to go for photo-realistic renders you should watch some tutorials on lighting and turn of auto lights in Daz studios it fucks up the renders and it looks shit.

I saw you really like VN well this format needs a lot of renders and if your pc is shit, try changing the format like RPGM. It will help you tell the story without images.

Don't give up I have seen games that ppl bash a lot but it still doing pretty well. GL on the project
 

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Well, I hate to say but you guys are assholes this dude just made his first game. Of course, it needs more polishing, but if you do some research you can see he was searching for a programmer and 3d artist. He probably didn't find the help he needed so he did everything himself. It's easy to criticize when you never put yourself in the developer's shoes.

If you want to listen to my tips here:
Try finishing the renders, because everyone hates noise in 3d games if you pc is too weak and it takes too much time, HAVE PATIENCE! :D but if the pc is really fuking slow try using other rendering methods because photo-realistic needs quite strong pc.

If you still want to go for photo-realistic renders you should watch some tutorials on lighting and turn of auto lights in Daz studios it fucks up the renders and it looks shit.

I saw you really like VN well this format needs a lot of renders and if your pc is shit, try changing the format like RPGM. It will help you tell the story without images.

Don't give up I have seen games that ppl bash a lot but it still doing pretty well. GL on the project
I agree with everything you said, could also use Intel denoiser.

One of my grips is the clipping, don't rush your scenes, pay attention to everything before going to the next scene.
 
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NaillMcDracken

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Well, I hate to say but you guys are assholes this dude just made his first game. Of course, it needs more polishing, but if you do some research you can see he was searching for a programmer and 3d artist. He probably didn't find the help he needed so he did everything himself. It's easy to criticize when you never put yourself in the developer's shoes.

If you want to listen to my tips here:
Try finishing the renders, because everyone hates noise in 3d games if you pc is too weak and it takes too much time, HAVE PATIENCE! :D but if the pc is really fuking slow try using other rendering methods because photo-realistic needs quite strong pc.

If you still want to go for photo-realistic renders you should watch some tutorials on lighting and turn of auto lights in Daz studios it fucks up the renders and it looks shit.

I saw you really like VN well this format needs a lot of renders and if your pc is shit, try changing the format like RPGM. It will help you tell the story without images.

Don't give up I have seen games that ppl bash a lot but it still doing pretty well. GL on the project

I really appreciate your comment and I can see that you have actually been informed.
Yes it is exactly as you say, I was looking for help and could not find. I appreciate your advice.
I thank the rest for the criticism they are doing, it really does not bother me that helps me to grow and realize that even if I make a mistake now I will do well later.
 

Tromilka

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Sooooo...... school is not 4 years where the first one is junior year and the latter 3 are senior years? Please elaborate how it is in the US/UK.... Because this makes perfect sense in my eyes/mind
No. In the US, the four years in high school are known as:

1. Freshman
2. Sophomore
3. Junior
4. Senior

College also uses the same progression.

The UK is completely different; there's no "high school" as such, and different terms for the various levels depending on the type of school. There, a "Senior" school is a school that teaches kids aged 13–18 (or in some cases 11–18), while "Junior" schools are for younger children, but you wouldn't talk about a junior or senior year.
 
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NaillMcDracken

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Sooooo...... school is not 4 years where the first one is junior year and the latter 3 are senior years? Please elaborate how it is in the US/UK.... Because this makes perfect sense in my eyes/mind
I see what the problem is, and I understand why they are making balls in this education.
Well I clarify that there has been a mixture of cultures and education systems.
It is a detail that I will have to correct.
For example in my country education starts from Kindergarten (3-6 years old)
School that is divided into three sections {from first to third (7 to 9 years, from fourth to sixth 10 to 12 years and from seventh to ninth 13 to 15 years of age.} And then there is the baccalaureate from 16 to 18 years of age Finally, the university that includes 5 years of study.
 

moudy

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No. In the US, the four years in high school are known as:

1. Freshman
2. Sophomore
3. Junior
4. Senior

College also uses the same progression.

The UK is completely different; there's no "high school" as such, and different terms for the various levels depending on the type of school. There, a "Senior" school is a school that teaches kids aged 13–18 (or in some cases 11–18), while "Junior" schools are for younger children, but you wouldn't talk about a junior or senior year.
Interesting. Thanks for this info. Usually here it's just Junior year when you are starting and everything after that is senior.

I see what the problem is, and I understand why they are making balls in this education.
Well I clarify that there has been a mixture of cultures and education systems.
It is a detail that I will have to correct.
For example in my country education starts from Kindergarten (3-6 years old)
School that is divided into three sections {from first to third (7 to 9 years, from fourth to sixth 10 to 12 years and from seventh to ninth 13 to 15 years of age.} And then there is the baccalaureate from 16 to 18 years of age Finally, the university that includes 5 years of study.
I see. This is quite similar from where I'm from, where you have:
Junior Kindergarten (only in capital city, from ages ~7-9 months to 2 years)
Kindergarten (2-6 years)
School (6-16 years) (some smaller cities split it up to regular school 6-12 years and Teen-school 12-16 years)
High-school (16-20 years)
University (20-24 years) (Might be longer depending on what kind of education you are taking. Industry stuff (electric, plumber etc) takes shorter, doctor, nurse etc takes longer)
 
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meanoldman

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There is just enough folks trashing this to make me download it and check it out!

Thanx ya'll!

Ok, it's not as bad as you might think. It's also not as good as you might hope, but I'm sure that will eventually change.

More of a demo, than anything else. Gameplay is very minimal.

The screenshot shows the most annoying thing about this game, one that most newbies make. Please, Please change the way you make selections.

SnapCrab_NoName_2020-11-30_12-36-18_No-00.png

There is a lot of text in this game. I'm thinking this game might be more suited to being made in HTML. Check out "Twine" to learn how to build games in HTML.

On a scale of 1 to 10, this one is a 3, but I expect that will improve as time goes by and the dev gains experience making renders.

I will keep an eye on this one. I am intrigued
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