VN Ren'Py Abandoned Nicole My Son's Fiancée [v1.0] [TYHEAD]

[rKnight]

Do you believe in demons, goblins, and other spiritual beings?

No, I don't, but after seeing the screens, I start to believe.

Which hellish nightmare did that THING IN ROIDS crawl out from? it will haunt my nights.

THREAD FACELIFT? lol

Spoiler: THREAD FACELIFT? lol

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[TiffanyMonroe]

So has anyone who has actually played it ready to voice their opinion? Or is it just gonna be everyone complaining based on the title/description/pictures?

What more do you want?

 

[CrazyRabbit]

That third photo looks like me when trying to smile to a girl....

I'll check this game out

 

[JLConradie]

I truly just want to say to all devs... or, future potential devs. A LOT of readers including me does not like a story when you choose a wrong choice, you are, without any warning... OUT THE GAME, and have to start over again.... I mean really???? Why then have choices?? Think bro... This story went into my IGNORE LIST!! within the first 10 seconds.

 

[OsoSober]

has zero content, first choice is end of game or continue, then there is only "one" more choice of three, two of which end "game" straight away, the third, continues on a few background images and story, then ends.

 

[baconbacon]

is that beef testoreone

Was not expecting such a moist reference. He could definitely throw down in the thunderdome.

 

[x6XDanteX9x]

So has anyone who has actually played it ready to voice their opinion? Or is it just gonna be everyone complaining based on the title/description/pictures?

Man i tried and still my comment is WHAT THE FUCK lmao

 

[Hellster]

Just looking at the pics and reading the description, it's a hard pass from me, i'll wait and see what happens with it in the future

 

[NaillMcDracken]

I truly just want to say to all devs... or, future potential devs. A LOT of readers including me does not like a story when you choose a wrong choice, you are, without any warning... OUT THE GAME, and have to start over again.... I mean really???? Why then have choices?? Think bro... This story went into my IGNORE LIST!! within the first 10 seconds.

Sorry buddy, I'm still working on the other options I think I should wait for an update before making that decision.

 

[Look-see]

ok well since you cant name the MC im assuming the protaganist is the fat step dad (brandon). couldnt get much from game except dude seems like a dick.

calling the girl a bitch in thoughts. flashback made him seem abusive towards the girls mother. anyways thats what i got from it.

 

[giqui]

Bosh ... what is this?..

This woman also has a strange face ..

 

[Nullnal1]

this looks so bad, that I could think this was a joke

 

[Lucid Lancer]

What more do you want?

Sodium Hypochlorite. For my eyes.

 

[darth_hiruma]

Other said about render so I will say about story. I actually played and I'm confused. Like are we looking from MC? (monster guy) perspective or nicole or someone else at the start? So we are in hell and escape it? Like Spawn? it's too short and why do you thanks logitech? Anyway it could be interesting but need a lot of work and polish. Maybe you could use those free proofreader that available here?

 

[NaillMcDracken]

Other said about render so I will say about story. I actually played and I'm confused. Like are we looking from MC? (monster guy) perspective or nicole or someone else at the start? So we are in hell and escape it? Like Spawn? it's too short and why do you thanks logitech? Anyway it could be interesting but need a lot of work and polish. Maybe you could use those free proofreader that available here?

Thank you for taking the time to give a brief analysis, first I will begin by answering your last question: Logitecth was the first patreon and it supported me more than anything morally for that I thank you, well in relation to the rest although it may seem that the MC are actually several what I'm looking for is to make it look like you are the MC, who the hell is it? Well, I don't want to reveal it yet. I'll just tell you that nothing here is what it seems.

 

[paragon]

Hey, so I played it and am just very confused with the lack of images with text on top and the weird variant of English not I have encountered before (see what I did there?).

It reminds me of the first book I ever published, I was so excited by the prospect I didn't do much checking and it was a mess so I pulled it and fixed it up over three months and put it back out. Maybe the dev needs some time to fix it up?

 

[NaillMcDracken]

Hey, so I played it and am just very confused with the lack of images with text on top and the weird variant of English not I have encountered before (see what I did there?).

It reminds me of the first book I ever published, I was so excited by the prospect I didn't do much checking and it was a mess so I pulled it and fixed it up over three months and put it back out. Maybe the dev needs some time to fix it up?

Well, in relation to your comment, I must first clarify that English is not my native language, my language is Latin American Spanish.
I know I need to polish it, and not only the text but also the renderings, the code; however remember I am doing all the work and this is not an excuse but I think it applies to an answer.
Even so I am about to launch an update, however do not wait long because I am trying to fill the empty spaces, for a moment I thought about not launching the update yet although I think your criticisms will help me to lay the foundation of the story and improve with relation to renderings.
I feel good and proud of my PC that despite being an I3 is responding to me in the renderings, when I have a little to invest I know that all this will improve.

 

[paragon]

Well, in relation to your comment, I must first clarify that English is not my native language, my language is Latin American Spanish.
I know I need to polish it, and not only the text but also the renderings, the code; however remember I am doing all the work and this is not an excuse but I think it applies to an answer.
Even so I am about to launch an update, however do not wait long because I am trying to fill the empty spaces, for a moment I thought about not launching the update yet although I think your criticisms will help me to lay the foundation of the story and improve with relation to renderings.
I feel good and proud of my PC that despite being an I3 is responding to me in the renderings, when I have a little to invest I know that all this will improve.

Hey the work has merit, the idea is solid and of interest so yes continue.

But better to put out a completed section for all to enjoy and that way it keeps the trolls and negs off your back, you only really get one chance to impress my friend, so make sure when you put the game out that it will.

 

[Hans_]

I've extracted the game twice, both times the first choices doesn't show unless you hover the mouse over them. (win10)
I'm also not a fan of the being throwed back to the menu when you choose the wrong option.
When the first choices doesn't show properly it could just as well be an error in the game throwing you to the menu screen.

 

[NaillMcDracken]

Many complain about renderings and that's fine, look at this rendering and how long it takes.
And that is not yet finished.

Spoiler: Render

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