VN Ren'Py Completed No Mercy [v1.03a] [ZeratGames]

[Dark479]

The dissatisfaction with the ending mainly stems from three aspects:

‌1. Disruption of narrative pacing‌: The plot development before Chapter 7 emphasized slow, meticulous progression. It took the MC five chapters to develop a sexual relationship with Nicole. However, Nicole's abrupt transition from rape victim to complete psychological breakdown and submission to the MC (if he survives) within just two chapters feels rushed, spanning only 3-4 days in the game's timeline. This drastic shift clashes with the previously established gradual character development.

2. Unrealistic character resolution‌: As a 37-year-old mature woman with a history of prolonged infidelity, Nicole's complete mental collapse and resignation after being caught in an affair with her stepson by her husband lacks narrative plausibility. The story fails to provide sufficient foreshadowing or psychological groundwork to justify such extreme character regression, especially given her established personality traits.

‌3. Wasted narrative potential‌: The abrupt conclusion sacrifices numerous subplots and potential main story expansions, including:

- Aunt Eve's possible involvement in Nicole's "training" after her own entanglement with the MC

- Potential narrative conflict between Lopez (Nicole's original affair partner) and the MC over Nicole's allegiance

- Unexplored development opportunities with Tommy's mother and Sheila's subplots, which could have intersected with the main storyline to enable a harem ending

4‌. Incomplete character development‌: The narrative critically neglects key aspects of Nicole's"training". Beyond the absence of her substantive resistance to the MC's abusive behavior, even basic sexual indoctrination elements remain unexplored – including potential development of exhibitionism, anal fixation, creampie preferences, and other fetishistic dimensions that could have been organically incorporated into her character progression.

The current ending truncates these narrative threads that had been carefully established throughout the game, leaving players with unresolved arcs and diminished payoff for their investment in the story's world-building.

I don't think anyone can put it more eloquently than you did, good sir. Absolutely spittin' facts on all accounts.

One thing I will say is, about the 'wasted potential' of Lopez vs MC... Lopez was killed by MC's dad 20 years ago, no? When he learned of Nicole's affair with him.

I don't know what y'all think you're playing but this is a porn game. What are you talking about realism? Realism left the game within five minutes of the start...and your complaints are realism and character development lol.

And there was no potential to the Lopez story...nobody cares. His only purpose was to establish that John was a dangerous psychopath and frankly his plot took too much screen time as is. The last thing I wanted to see was more Lopez or the old detective dude. Idgaf about the dudes, give me more time with the girls lol.

 

[HongTeaPot]

I don't know what y'all think you're playing but this is a porn game. What are you talking about realism? Realism left the game within five minutes of the start...and your complaints are realism and character development lol.

And there was no potential to the Lopez story...nobody cares. His only purpose was to establish that John was a dangerous psychopath and frankly his plot took too much screen time as is. The last thing I wanted to see was more Lopez or the old detective dude. Idgaf about the dudes, give me more time with the girls lol.

Even erotic fiction needs to maintain basic internal consistency. Additionally, a more in-depth story implies more content, more erotic scenes, and the ability to cater to a wider range of sexual preferences.

 

[badger696]

My game ends on ep 5 ,right after the mc cums in tommys mom, any fix

 

[Lukin1971]

Somebody a Idea about the Steam Achievement "Instant Reaction" ? I have no plan or idea what to do. Is this the Aunt ? Mother ? Toms Mother ? and in which chapter and under which circumstances ?

 

[Lukin1971]

Both achievements are related to Tommy's mom.
Achievement 19: Instant Reaction - Inside Tommy's house, there's a quick time event where you need to kiss her on solo (non-sharing) path.

But what are the circumstances for it ? Must I take the 100 Dollar bill from Tommy ? Not sharing mom says also not to say Tommy about the agreement his mom ? Must I sell Tommy drugs for it or not ?

 

[Filipis]

I don't know what y'all think you're playing but this is a porn game. What are you talking about realism? Realism left the game within five minutes of the start...and your complaints are realism and character development lol.

And there was no potential to the Lopez story...nobody cares. His only purpose was to establish that John was a dangerous psychopath and frankly his plot took too much screen time as is. The last thing I wanted to see was more Lopez or the old detective dude. Idgaf about the dudes, give me more time with the girls lol.

Ever heard of the term "suspension of disbelief"?

It's a term that describes how we, as those being entertained, are willing to embrace certain (otherwise) ridiculous or improbable "facts" about the piece of entertainment we are consuming. For example, we suspend our disbelief that aliens exist, and so it allows us to enjoy watching the tales of Superman, as well as various other superheroes.

However, everything has to follow some internal logic - it needs to be consistent, in order for the suspension to maintain it's credibility. For example, if Superman got shot & was killed by an ordinary crossbow at the end of Man of Steel, that would be ridiculous! But not because of the absurdity of an alien getting killed by a medieval weapon, but because the movie's internal logic established Superman as bulletproof.

See the point & effect of suspension of disbelief?

Nicole still had a long way to go before she should've been willing to elope with MC to some god-forsaken jungle in the middle of nowhere, just to have a sexual relationship with him. 5 days is not enough to corrupt a mature woman via blackmail into becoming someone's cock-sleeve. In this case, Superman was shot & killed with a crossbow at the end.

 

[HongTeaPot]

Ever heard of the term "suspension of disbelief"?

It's a term that describes how we, as those being entertained, are willing to embrace certain (otherwise) ridiculous or improbable "facts" about the piece of entertainment we are consuming. For example, we suspend our disbelief that aliens exist, and so it allows us to enjoy watching the tales of Superman, as well as various other superheroes.

However, everything has to follow some internal logic - it needs to be consistent, in order for the suspension to maintain it's credibility. For example, if Superman got shot & was killed by an ordinary crossbow at the end of Man of Steel, that would be ridiculous! But not because of the absurdity of an alien getting killed by a medieval weapon, but because the movie's internal logic established Superman as bulletproof.

See the point & effect of suspension of disbelief?

Nicole still had a long way to go before she should've been willing to elope with MC to some god-forsaken jungle in the middle of nowhere, just to have a sexual relationship with him. 5 days is not enough to corrupt a mature woman via blackmail into becoming someone's cock-sleeve. In this case, Superman was shot & killed with a crossbow at the end.

The current ending is clearly rather hasty‌, though not entirely beyond redemption‌. If Dev could elaborate on the process from Nicole's divorce with John (assuming MC survives) to her submission or falling in love with MC‌, this ending wouldn't feel so abrupt‌.

By the way, whether MC aims to completely subdue Nicole or win her genuine affection, mere sexual encounters are insufficient. MC must also secure additional leverage to compel her compliance.

 

[Owarishi]

Hmm, then yes wait for the DLC

Yeah any Ntr lover should do this
(Not me xD)

 

[BhabhiLover]

Is there any content missing in the compressed version?

 

[Filipis]

The current ending is clearly rather hasty‌, though not entirely beyond redemption‌. If Dev could elaborate on the process from Nicole's divorce with John (assuming MC survives) to her submission or falling in love with MC‌, this ending wouldn't feel so abrupt‌.

By the way, whether MC aims to completely subdue Nicole or win her genuine affection, mere sexual encounters are insufficient. MC must also secure additional leverage to compel her compliance.

This is true. But the dev already said the main story is done, and future updates will focus exclusively on additional paths/endings.

I wish we could've had more dates with Nicole (on the love path) or something like that. Can't believe we didn't even get a chane to buy her flowers once!

 

[EthanSiuu]

Bro, the animations in this game make no sense at all, they are very good and realistic, the physics are very well done, my respects to this creator, not many games have this quality of animations, I hope he works on another game, he does it quite well.

 

[pepplez]

the animations in this game make no sense at all, they are very good and realistic, the physics are very well done, my respects to this creator, not many games have this quality of animations

If the animations are as good as you describe, why don't they seem to make any sense in your opinion? (I just downloaded it didn't play it yet)

 

[popcron]

Hey the game ended randomly, how do I get part 2?

nvm I had to remove mod makes sense

 

[popcron]

What a banger of a game. My only gripe is the lack of a foot scene near the end of the game, making it one of the choices in the last secenes would have worked imo. The nice feet on the models were included in the shot for many scenes, would have been nice to have a second scenes with them as the focus. Though I understand a second scene in a game that doesnt have it as a main focus may have taken up too large a slice of the pie for non enjoyers.

Also how did that one grandma that got her bag stolen know the mc's name

Also also are there scenes not in the gallery associated with the achievements? I haven't bothered getting them all is it worth?

 

[Ookey12345]

is there apk android?

 

[SlobberGoat]

I want to buy this game but Steam says:

An error was encountered while processing your request:
This item is currently unavailable in your region

 

[Oasis951]

Tiktok just found out about this game and are losing their minds with it being on Steam. Imagine what would happen if they saw the thousands of games that are worse on f95.

 

[DylansMoM_001]

Tiktok just found out about this game and are losing their minds with it being on Steam. Imagine what would happen if they saw the thousands of games that are worse on f95.

Tiktok clowns ffs

 

[Oasis951]

Tiktok clowns ffs

Yeah, they're starting a petition to get it removed off Steam

 

[DylansMoM_001]

Yeah, they're starting a petition to get it removed off Steam

Ban tiktok again.. permanent this time