The dissatisfaction with the ending mainly stems from three aspects:
1. Disruption of narrative pacing: The plot development before Chapter 7 emphasized slow, meticulous progression. It took the MC five chapters to develop a sexual relationship with Nicole. However, Nicole's abrupt transition from rape victim to complete psychological breakdown and submission to the MC (if he survives) within just two chapters feels rushed, spanning only 3-4 days in the game's timeline. This drastic shift clashes with the previously established gradual character development.
2. Unrealistic character resolution: As a 37-year-old mature woman with a history of prolonged infidelity, Nicole's complete mental collapse and resignation after being caught in an affair with her stepson by her husband lacks narrative plausibility. The story fails to provide sufficient foreshadowing or psychological groundwork to justify such extreme character regression, especially given her established personality traits.
3. Wasted narrative potential: The abrupt conclusion sacrifices numerous subplots and potential main story expansions, including:
- Aunt Eve's possible involvement in Nicole's "training" after her own entanglement with the MC
- Potential narrative conflict between Lopez (Nicole's original affair partner) and the MC over Nicole's allegiance
- Unexplored development opportunities with Tommy's mother and Sheila's subplots, which could have intersected with the main storyline to enable a harem ending
4. Incomplete character development: The narrative critically neglects key aspects of Nicole's"training". Beyond the absence of her substantive resistance to the MC's abusive behavior, even basic sexual indoctrination elements remain unexplored – including potential development of exhibitionism, anal fixation, creampie preferences, and other fetishistic dimensions that could have been organically incorporated into her character progression.
The current ending truncates these narrative threads that had been carefully established throughout the game, leaving players with unresolved arcs and diminished payoff for their investment in the story's world-building.
I don't know what y'all think you're playing but this is a porn game. What are you talking about realism? Realism left the game within five minutes of the start...and your complaints are realism and character development lol.I don't think anyone can put it more eloquently than you did, good sir. Absolutely spittin' facts on all accounts.
One thing I will say is, about the 'wasted potential' of Lopez vs MC... Lopez was killed by MC's dad 20 years ago, no? When he learned of Nicole's affair with him.
And there was no potential to the Lopez story...nobody cares. His only purpose was to establish that John was a dangerous psychopath and frankly his plot took too much screen time as is. The last thing I wanted to see was more Lopez or the old detective dude. Idgaf about the dudes, give me more time with the girls lol.