royalcandy Great Update! I really enjoyed playing it. Your animations are also getting really good.
I did notice some small mistakes I wanted to let you know about.
During the spin the bottle scene:
-Twice Bea referred to Tris and the MC as "Brothers". It should be either Brother and Sister or simply Siblings.
-2 or 3 times the MC was referred to as "Toby" as apposed to the chosen name.
-Some other grammatical and sentence structure problems I can't remember all of, but one was near the end of the scene when tris was talking about Homework.
-Based on Tris's rules, the MC should not have been allowed to
dare Bea to Kiss him if he previously dared Tris and Bea to Kiss. That would essentially be a repeat dare. (not a big deal, just saying).
-Assuming you
dared Tris and Bea to kiss during the game, the comments at the end of the game regarding the
MC wanting to see them kiss didn't make a lot of sense.
Also, during the
Tris bedroom blowjob scene, at one point Tris is leaning forward going down on the MC and her toes are bent at a 90 degree angle during the animation. It does not look right.
One last thing: Even though I saw the entire Water Gun Fight scene while playing, the Memory did not unlock for me. Not sure if that is a game problem or a MOD problem since I did have
JokerLeader 's MOD installed. I was able to use the MOD's Unlock Memories feature, but it should have unlocked during my playthrough so not sure why it didn't.
Already looking forward to the next update and the
date with Bea.