Pref: Put that in the setup area, not on 1st run -- or at least pre-populate the text box. Starting a VN and having to name the characters is a HUGE annoyance.Noted![]()
will the lesbian scene you said you have planned be avoidable lesbian in male mc games is a huge turnoff for meHi there! If I put some out of ordinary fetish it will be avoidable. Soon I will add all the planned tags for the game, this release didn't have any choice because it was an introduction to the characters, but I intend to make the game more complex in the future. I want to tell a story that is in my mind, but letting the player decide what he wants to see in the game.
Thank you very much for the feedback! English is not my first language, and I am sorry for the mistakes. I know this first release is far from being perfect, and I understand the feeling of a rushed release. I have a job that take most of my time and I decided to make this game in my free time to do something different from the boring things I do everyday. I will do my best to improve every aspect of the game, and honestly, I just want to have some fun making these. Thanks again for the comment, I really do apreciateterrible first impression for lack of a spell checker. i would think that was key for a first release for any new dev.
art is ok.
plot seems mediocre. no signs in this of being beyond that. it is just not being worked.
writing is.. well you can fap to it. a spell check may have got it a little beyond that but it's not looking like the N will play much of a role.
sorry but this is all the feedback i honestly have. it just felt rushed and unplanned.
good luck either way dev.
HiDisguisedDino That planned tag list final? No harem planned? solo routes only? And no ntr/sharing planned?
HelloHello. Is this game going to be mandatory fuckfest or is it possible to choose one girl and stick with her through entire gameplay?
Sorry I will fix it hahahaThe black girl from the banner looks gorgeous, but those tan lines seem out of place for me. That skin is as white as the other girls'![]()
Thanks for the feedback! Well, actually, she will appear a lot, she is my favorite. I have some things in mind to make herPros : the Models, cg's and mostly the redhead
Cons: Everything else, story, approach and since the MC will go from country to country no more from the redhead after a while
Probably better as short, standalone games if not a total rebuild
wow! this redhead really is very hot and i would like to try to play but this game only has friendly patreon tags, no incest or harem, therefore it is not for me