VN Ren'Py Abandoned Not a Typical Family [v1.1] [exy]

[Billi.Billy07]

There is no android version in android links beware

 

[exy]

How to say nothing with words 'has potential' or 'looks promising.' This can literally be said about everything, even poop has potential to be valuable fertilizer one day.

What's your problem, are you here to talk shit aren't you ?
All the developers who had posted in this thread said that the game is bad but there's always room for improvements, which is 100% true imo, as long as the content is original and not stolen, there's room for improvements.

I have already started working on next version and I promise will be better than this one.
Those kinds of comments like you and few other people do are discouraging the new developers, only developers would admit this anyway.
You can't discourage me tho, I've already got better in renpy coding and rendering, lights, there's no point in giving up right now because few people are frustrated on new developers and are trying to make them give up.

Like 20-30frames showed in the first version were rendered 2 weeks ago, right when I've started to play with daz3d, I didn't know anything about lights back then.
You wont see anymore grainy frames in my game.

No hard feelings but please stop making those comments, they are just offtopic and also discouraging the new developers.

 

[Chill-E]

You keep on getting better exy, we will keep watching your stuff.

 

[Adoringfan]

My comment was completely valid and on topic as one of the most rehashed and generic posts on the forums is 'this game has potential,' which only falls behind 'walkthru?' 'fullsave plz' 'android' and 'need a hero!'

I respect that you are trying to make something, it's very brave of you to put yourself out there for criticism. At the same time don't be upset when someone calls out a novice work, when you are in fact a novice. Daz is not something you learn overnight, unless you are on some different level like Dustin Hoffman in Rain Man, or Matt Damon in Good Will Hunting. Take the good with the bad and get better, but don't expect sick gains without first putting in the time.

F95 is a pirates den, at the same time we gain nothing from a shoddy job. What we want is simple, we want more nice things. No one is trying to discourage anyone from using the platform, I think the ultimate goal for everyone would be a better product, as it benefits both the community and the developer. If an honest opinion is enough to dissuade you, you're gonna have a bad time.

There are plenty of

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to git gud, I would suggest checking them out. There is also a whole community of developers willing to help newer folks getting started. Your game did look like a meme out the gate and first impressions are kind of important, maybe you'll be the Tommy Wiseau of porn games, who knows. Either way, I appreciate you taking the time to respond and I look forward to your next version and showing everyone what you are capable of.

 

[Musaqwerty]

Cant download in android

 

[hazoltd]

Someone remove android links, they just link to pc and mac versions

 

[Suryakant Biswal]

I can't understand the android file I downloaded it but there's no APK in the zip rather it's some of stuff I think help someone ?

 

[InfamousRebel]

What's your problem, are you here to talk shit aren't you ?
All the developers who had posted in this thread said that the game is bad but there's always room for improvements, which is 100% true imo, as long as the content is original and not stolen, there's room for improvements.

I have already started working on next version and I promise will be better than this one.
Those kinds of comments like you and few other people do are discouraging the new developers, only developers would admit this anyway.
You can't discourage me tho, I've already got better in renpy coding and rendering, lights, there's no point in giving up right now because few people are frustrated on new developers and are trying to make them give up.

Like 20-30frames showed in the first version were rendered 2 weeks ago, right when I've started to play with daz3d, I didn't know anything about lights back then.
You wont see anymore grainy frames in my game.

No hard feelings but please stop making those comments, they are just offtopic and also discouraging the new developers.

I'm gonna give it a go, I don't mind games that just get straight to the candy

 

[exy]

Rendering for next version is done, about 50 frames.
Coding 50% done.
I'll release it tomorrow.

 

[Revo]

also, may i add or dev.

"His mother is a striptease dancer which used to give private BJs for extra money."

this make non sens... a stripper is not a prostitute, you have no right to touch them unless you want some serious troubles. if she give blowjob, she would be fired instantly. as i suppsoe the "private" blowjob are given to VIP client. thats not how it work. better change her job into a whore , prostitute or else for make more sens

Brah, the strippers in my city are the same chicks you can find at the corner during night time.

 

[fauxplayer]

This made me laugh. Thanks!

 

[macadam]

Brah, the strippers in my city are the same chicks you can find at the corner during night time.

then your system goes wrong lol.

stripper here are more rich than me and would certainly not work as a prostitue in freetime XD

 

[Revo]

then your system goes wrong lol.

stripper here are more rich than me and would certainly not work as a prostitue in freetime XD

Not in my town. Everyone is just ghetto as hell xD

 

[earthdrake]

Has potential however is WAAAAY too short, has NO sex/BJ/HD/any scene except potentially 2 faps.

 

[UncleVT]

Added v1.1 to OP.

Thanks @exy

 

[Anon21]

Change-Log:

v1.1

Coming soon.

Promises, promises.


(Alternate punchline: That's what she said)

 

[ssrrxxbr]

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[Deleted member 662393]

Didn't had time to play it yet, but what I can agree with is that new devs really have a hard time here sometimes. Criticism and feedback help new devs to get better but bashing and shit talk won't help them at all.

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left a example for a good comment which other people should orientate on. If you like what you do keep going exy I feel you, I also started around 2 months ago with shit renders and only a idea in my head and now im getting better with each version and gathered a few hundred people in my discord, just keep going, get better with each release, listen to the feedback people give you and sooner or later people will reward your efforts and support you :FeelsGoodMan: good luck man.

 

[Brok TheDog]

2 mn of games and first crash

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 412, in script
    jump over
ScriptError: could not find label 'over'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 412, in script
    jump over
  File "C:\Users\onecoule\Downloads\NotaTypicalFamilyv11-11-win\NotaTypicalFamilyv11-1.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1600, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "C:\Users\onecoule\Downloads\NotaTypicalFamilyv11-11-win\NotaTypicalFamilyv11-1.1-win\renpy\script.py", line 873, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'over'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.0.0.196
Not a Typical Family v1.1 1.1
Tue Aug 21 06:37:58 2018

 

[Almighty]

I have no idea why you changed how the mother look. I actually liked that model maybe I'm in the minority.