VN Ren'Py Not Going Back [Ch.3.1] [Cicada]

[Raziel_8]

The only thing that really irritated me was that Ava/Bobbie/Ella conversation. I could have done without them talking about how loud Ella is when her boyfriend fucks her or whatever Bobbie and Sam had going on in the past. It completely turned me off both Ava and Bobbie, which is a shame because I like Ava's model.

I mean, in the last ep Tegan tells you pretty much the whole sorority is getting arround, or at least most, including her.
As well as offering help, for anything, after a chat or two wih the MC. This ep getting told how she was eager to participate in the hazing-list about the most sexual things.
Bobbie tells you on the first party that, while she isn't chasing any guys, she ends up with one pretty much at any party.
Than as you mentioned the chat of those 3 this ep. With Ava commenting something about how Ella wasted her sorority life by having a bf...so my impression of her is, she's pretty much same as Tegan and Bobbie in getting arround.

I kinda liked Mia early on and the chemistry she had with the MC, but after she'd willingly signed up for that sorority after they got told shortly before about the sex challenges made me dump her on the spot.
Even if there weren't any sexual task this time arround (which seemed to dissapoint and surprise some of the sorority-sisters), at least she must have been ok with doing them, as she was told what awaits her just before. Which is fine for me if it's just for an fwb, but for a solo romance path...yeah, no.
Same for Tegan and Bobbie, Ava i wait until we know more (and yeah her model is good), but honestly not much expection for her at this point.

 

[cicadaNGB]

I was a bit wary about trying this after reading some of the comments but it was a lot better than I thought it would be. The only thing that really irritated me was that Ava/Bobbie/Ella conversation. I could have done without them talking about how loud Ella is when her boyfriend fucks her or whatever Bobbie and Sam had going on in the past. It completely turned me off both Ava and Bobbie, which is a shame because I like Ava's model.

Mia is probably my favourite right now, she has great chemistry with the MC. Went off her a bit after the conversation with Mike about her and Chase but once it became obvious Chase was just chatting shit, she went straight back to the top again. I like Imogen too, though the plot with her and Christian is clearly inspired by another game.

Yeah, that was sort of the point of the Mike conversation. I've mentioned a bit before, but I enjoy the idea of subversion of expectations, so a lot of times I'm going to establish a character or thing in a certain way specifically make people make assumptions about it that'll prove to be incorrect. Some people are more superficial, though, not everything's going to be a bait and switch.

Hopefully as things progress there'll be more of a distinction between the Imogen/Christian story and the one you're referencing, but I won't pretend that it's not a pretty similar premise and storyline so far.

Oh, and also thanks for being willing to try it out even if some of the comments were dissuasive, I appreciate it!

 

[hysepReC]

I mean, in the last ep Tegan tells you pretty much the whole sorority is getting arround, or at least most, including her.
As well as offering help, for anything, after a chat or two wih the MC. This ep getting told how she was eager to participate in the hazing-list about the most sexual things.
Bobbie tells you on the first party that, while she isn't chasing any guys, she ends up with one pretty much at any party.
Than as you mentioned the chat of those 3 this ep. With Ava commenting something about how Ella wasted her sorority life by having a bf...so my impression of her is, she's pretty much same as Tegan and Bobbie in getting arround.

I get that, but the fact they were talking about it so openly while the MC was there was just... ugh. I'm not that bothered what the girls do before getting together with the MC as long as I don't have to hear about it. Imagine the MC starts dating Bobbie and everyone is still making jokes about her and Sam. Yeah, no thanks. At least players can go for Bonnie instead if they like that model.

As for Mia, I'd rather she wasn't in the slut sorority but it's not a dealbreaker for me. The fact that she didn't have to do any 'extreme' tasks like the recruits last year makes it tolerable. I think she's the best match for the MC, personality wise and the sex scene with her was really hot. They have great compatibility in the bedroom too.

 

[Raziel_8]

I get that, but the fact they were talking about it so openly while the MC was there was just... ugh. I'm not that bothered what the girls do before getting together with the MC as long as I don't have to hear about it. Imagine the MC starts dating Bobbie and everyone is still making jokes about her and Sam. Yeah, no thanks. At least players can go for Bonnie instead if they like that model.

As for Mia, I'd rather she wasn't in the slut sorority but it's not a dealbreaker for me. The fact that she didn't have to do any 'extreme' tasks like the recruits last year makes it tolerable. I think she's the best match for the MC, personality wise and the sex scene with her was really hot. They have great compatibility in the bedroom too.

Yeah, i have no problem with them having a past (as long it isn't too much), i also have no problem with promiscuous ones as side girls/fwb, just not for romance.
Like when you go with Tegan and the other girls are making fun of how she treats you different than all the other guys she has over...yeah, that is really a, no thanks.

Hm, personaly i like Ellie so far the most, followed by Alice, that they aren't in for the frat life is also a plus.
As for Mia, i'd liked to see her reaction if they had to do sexual tasks and if she would have gone along with it...
But she seems the only one of the sorority which i would give a chance (maybe).
Well perhaps we get a possitive surprise with Ava, would be nice i really like her model and the short chat with her, if you ignore Tegan.

 

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this

 

[Simpgor]

People really want an entire college of virgins* with only a single male student/faculty member huh

* Virgins who are God tier at sex and instantly enjoy sex with a large dick and are VERY vocal that you are their only partner while somehow knowing you are the best

If people already feel bad about the girls having ever had contact with men (or the gall to talk about it like a person) I shudder to think how they will react when the bad "sin" kids get involved after all the sports frat is one that isn't "so bad" and the president is still openly talking about systematically sending the enitre football team (60+ people) after a single freshmen with the idea that she would like one of them which is almost as creepy as it is desperate

The kids that are "not to be messed with/MC told by both men and women to stay away from" are going to be way more of a """""""threat""""""" than some college football player who has to lie about pulling freshmen

 

[hysepReC]

People really want an entire college of virgins* with only a single male student/faculty member huh

No? I didn't say anything about virginity so I don't know why you brought that up. I'm just not interested in romancing a girl that's a total slut, nor do I want to hear about all the guys a potential LI has fucked or wants to fuck.

 

[Joshy92]

This update was really good. And Mia is still my favourite LI by far.

 

[Raziel_8]

People really want an entire college of virgins* with only a single male student/faculty member huh

Virgins ? Because there is no middelground between virgin and townbike...

As for the men, this vn has a actually a lot of good ones imo. Like Mike (at least still, if he hangs with that football guys not much longer i guess), Sam, Noah or Zach. Alex is a interesting choice as best buddy, as compared to the creepy, perv, moron you get the most times. Helping him getting a nice gf would actually be a nice touch.

As for the football team, yeah, that comment was about as low and creepy as it gets...really can't have any respect for guys which are that low.
I mean, from what we hear about sin that would probably be drugging and rape or some shit...

That being said, i hope we don't need to play guard dog for the girls (be it sin or others)... like they are either loyal and can make that clear themself or they can get along with them and i'd be done with the girl...really nothing more annoying than playing guard dog. I mean, that's also kinda pathetic imo, either you trust your partner or not.

 

[Raziel_8]

I imagined this gangbang scene.. Mia with entire football team.. guys take turns and fuck her properly.. damn..

That be a lot of sword crossing there...
You sure these guys arent bi...curious how many would end up with some unexpected anal

 

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

I'm digging it.

First off I think the writer does really underestimate how much less kids are having sex now adays compared to when we went to college. Like 40% of 18-20 y/o's are virgins it's not some super rare thing like he describes though there is some selection bias sure since we dealing with people in frat's and sororities.

Where it bugs me is that most people aren't straight up whore-ish they serially date. No problem with girls having pasts and being open about them but I'll echo what others have said and say that I don't need to hear about how Mia/Bobby/Bonnie/Chloe/Tegan are fucking random dudes every night (though in the case of Mia I think it is an un-earned rumor by bitter dudes she's rejected).

Mixed feelings though because "the reformed slut" is one of my favorite tropes (which can't happen unless the girl is a slut in the first place lol) so being able to lock down a sorority hoe like Tegan and make her actually be kind of demure and nervous around MC was the highlight of the episode for me (and being able to have some intense eye contact romantic missionary *chefs kiss)

Overall feels pretty real and I like the interactions between everyone it doesn't go into the normal hole some stories go in where it's like characters only interact with the MC the web of relationships between different characters feels fleshed out.

Can't wait for more!

Un-asked for rank list:

Tegan (reformed slut because who doesn't want to tame a bad girl?)
Imogen (Jill 2.0 lol)
Ellie (probably the only virgin or at least non hoe plus she's a redhead enough said)
Alice (seems like a sweet nerd whose a closet freak)
Mia (I think her hoe rumors are false which makes her your pretty cookie cutter college coed)
Ava (know nothing about her but her model is pretty)
Bonnie/Bobbie (nothing interesting with them yet and they are pretty hoe-ish without redeeming qualities yet)

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

No? I didn't say anything about virginity so I don't know why you brought that up. I'm just not interested in romancing a girl that's a total slut, nor do I want to hear about all the guys a potential LI has fucked or wants to fuck.

Yeah, sounds like tegan is the sluttiest girl so far, just hope mc didn’t catch a std from her since he raw dogged her

 

[Blackowl97]

Virgins ? Because there is no middelground between virgin and townbike...

As for the men, this vn has a actually a lot of good ones imo. Like Mike (at least still, if he hangs with that football guys not much longer i guess), Noah or Zach. Alex is a interesting choice as best buddy, as compared to the creepy, perv, moron you get the most times. Helping him getting a nice gf would actually be a nice touch.

As for the football team, yeah, that comment was about as low and creepy as it gets...really can't have any respect for guys which are that low.
I mean, from what we hear about sin that would probably be drugging and rape or some shit...

That being said, i hope we don't need to play guard dog for the girls (be it sin or others)... like they are either loyal and can make that clear themself or they can get along with them and i'd be done with the girl...really nothing more annoying than playing guard dog. I mean, that's also kinda pathetic imo, either you trust your partner or not.

The last thing you told is another reason why I'm refraining from continue playing this game until there are more updates. I don't feel like playing a game that irritates me more than it entertains me. I hate playing as a guard dog in real life or in fantasy haha.

 

[Meloned]

Looks lovely

 

[Raziel_8]

Yeah, sounds like tegan is the sluttiest girl so far, just hope mc didn’t catch a std from her since he raw dogged her

Hm, i don't think Chloe is much better...well, at least i had a really good laugh at the reaction of Nathan and Chloe the day after, 10/10 would do again
Just wish we could have made a little clip for our 'friend' Nathan

 

[clitcommander]

Hm, i don't think Chloe is much better...well, at least i had a really good laugh at the reaction of Nathan and Chloe the day after, 10/10 would do again
Just wish we could have made a little clip for our 'friend' Nathan

I really wanted to tell Nathan to stop playing with his food.

 

[Simpgor]

No? I didn't say anything about virginity so I don't know why you brought that up. I'm just not interested in romancing a girl that's a total slut, nor do I want to hear about all the guys a potential LI has fucked or wants to fuck.

Considering the fact that Ella having sex with her boyfriend is something of note to you and she's not one of the main girls on the banner I have reasons to believe your definition of a "total slut" are very different based on if the person has a penis or not

I mean someone in a monogamous relationship is a slut because she makes a remark about how she sounds while she fucks her boyfriend?

But Chloe, or Mia, or any girl that has fucked MC before being in a relationship is fine because..........?

Virgins ? Because there is no middelground between virgin and townbike...

As for the men, this vn has a actually a lot of good ones imo. Like Mike (at least still, if he hangs with that football guys not much longer i guess), Sam, Noah or Zach. Alex is a interesting choice as best buddy, as compared to the creepy, perv, moron you get the most times. Helping him getting a nice gf would actually be a nice touch.

As for the football team, yeah, that comment was about as low and creepy as it gets...really can't have any respect for guys which are that low.
I mean, from what we hear about sin that would probably be drugging and rape or some shit...

That being said, i hope we don't need to play guard dog for the girls (be it sin or others)... like they are either loyal and can make that clear themself or they can get along with them and i'd be done with the girl...really nothing more annoying than playing guard dog. I mean, that's also kinda pathetic imo, either you trust your partner or not.

Already responded to the virginity comment above, and I agree this game has multiple guys who I don't mind seeing (basically anything that isn't hurrdurr horny best friend trope) surprised you didn't mention shawn(?) He helped both you and Imogen out just because he doesn't like that other guy

I hardcore agree with the football team being way way way more creepy/fucked up than I was expecting while simultaneously making them look like actual children with low IQ.

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I don't think they can be "believeable" "antagonists" going by how generally good quality the rest of the writing is.

As for SIN I think that they will be kind of hard to include? We've seen at least a couple of them in the background (I think) but how is a frat like that going to fit in? We've already got the president of the jocks doing the above spoiler so how can SIN be worse while still being part of the school? Chase mentions "athletic privilege" so it makes sense that the athletes could do a bit more, but isn't SIN literally just the crazy/BAD(the game) type frat?
If they are included I expect less that the issue will be "oh no these bad boys gonna steal my girl" and more "oh no these (likely bad guys) are going to (obvious bad thing) to some/one of the LI

 

[Assman_6969]

First thing needed to be said imo is THANK YOU SO MUCH for a truly SO FAR NORMAL, relatable MC! For fuck sakes it is so nice not getting another fucktard weak sissy cunt who cannot speak like a normal human and is a pushover who nobody truly wants to see in another avn and 110% myself does NOT want or like to play any game story or anything where such a dumb ass punk mc who is walked on by anyone and puts the pussy up on some ridiculous pedestal like some kind of prize rarely can be attained. I swear to ya that this is far from the true reality that for some crazy fuckin over the top reason some moron decided to implement such a character to play as and see the story/game through the eyes of and it is a very awful and fast way to start off a game that will be quickly ended and deleted because of how ridiculous the mc is or is not likeable or interesting at all and worse than all the others like it!

Here we have what I would say is clearly a normal everyday guy who is his own dude and has no bs fear of talking to other people like they are some kind of alien race who thinks a human male is dirt to walk on and treat like shit! Thank god we have a dev who it seems is not some wimpy nerd virgin who is creating his life story or how he lives and gets no women around him ever. We actually get to talk with women and have actual conversations and given good choices of things to say or good interactions that does not make you a creep or a weak sissy who bows to women and they are the greatest thing ever! He treats them as what they are, a fucking woman who breathes, eats, sleeps, shits, fucks just like a normal man does. But getting back to it and not more a rant it is awesome to actually be pulled into the story and be interested in what is happening and what is to come next. I'm not saying it is the best shit ever but it is far better than 75% of the rest of shit you download and delete after wasted time to see more trash and something trhat is like some other game yo checked out and it be similar with story or girls who look like the ones from so and so game or when you cvan say this is just trying to be like being a dik or that other college game or games easily forgotten. This is yes another game in a school setting but it is a far cry from the rest of the games like it cause it has a good male mc who is not a pussy nor is he a fucking Chad who is looking at a chic and in 2 mins of talking they are dry humping in the next scene!
The biggest plus is the game so far is entertaining and not some rushed ball of shit where it is done so bad and sloppy that like always it will made into hearing all the questions that come from every weak cunt mc game that is clearlyt meant to turn into some fuckkin cuck ntr bullshit conversation and wonder when the mc will be humiliated next. This has you far from wondering if and when a dump will be took on you and you ask I wonder which chic I can get at next and when will it give the actual chance to pick one or how many ever girls you want to pursue or not?

One thing that is a bit of a let down that when it finally comes time to get into the best parts all want to see with the sex scenes it is all such a good build up to the moment when they are getting it on we get no animation at all and even the still scenes don't really seem to be put together in a steady like moving situation when fucking! It was set up so good with Tegan and even more so with Mia really and both times with the girls the sex is so blah and not much emotions can be felt from just another pic of nothing you can even put it in your mind like it is flowing and you can see them actually fucking. Even worse is Mia's facial expressions when she is supposed to be getting off is like wtf is she even really enjoying what he is doing or just going through the motions to seem like it is good for her.

All in all I think everything is so good but maybe throughout the pledge week add someway of making clear it is night/sleeping time instaed of black and boom next day task time, maybe have mc play on phone before showing him crash. It would ve a good very key time to have mc texting with his girls and even have sexting with them to add some good extras spicing up the 2 of thems connection. IDK it just seems like key time wasted that could make we are making progress even if we are just fuckin around.

The biggest negative that is a big issue at very key moments that take away from the game is the great ways we get to the sex scenes with the girls but it is so underwhelming when they start to fuck and NO ANIMATIONS! That kills the whole mood and makes it very bring instead of exciting like it should. It is a very critical & big factor in how to have it clear in one or 2 details to be the oh shit thing the reader will pick up on with no big hey pay attention here is a big moment I need to see this part cause or big factor to story here and if not done realistic and key moment a character we are supposed to feel like what the character is feeling and what we relate to the who and whos is in the scenes and how they are reacting but in both sex scenes I feel like a couple of times the chics look far from being made to cum and like they are not even fucking in some of the pics. Overall the game is a great flicker of hope that there is some good games we can get in a very flooded group of retarded shit so thats all im saying. ANIMATIONS WOULD MAKE IT SO MUCH BETTER THAN IT ALREADY IS!


The only other issue is the who we are getting the actual chances of seeing more and I know it is early on and plenty more to come but and this is only me and maybe some also feel like this but There is moments that are set upo in first update and then agian in this update where I thought we would be getting the chance to get to know Ava and curiosityt to expand on the 2 or3 times we get the scenes with the 2 making eye contact with the obvious meant curiosity of who is he/she and I definitely intend on finding out asap! When we begin this update we get her as a guide which would have been a great time for one of them to ask about a future meet or even getting contact info to further their attractions that are very well stand out important times when they get in close contact and they make several eye contacting stares and smiles! I am very much digging her more so than rest. At the start I was feeling Mia but while I still think she is hot I have a few others that jumped her cause looks are huge but not all when some of the others have the looks and tons more added to the looks. Ava quickly has took the top spot but Mia is still on my list of getting closer to but in the sex scene it pro ves what I knew that she is acting more than being her self and that is no good and personally I can't stand a chic that puts up a front and needs to be put in line. Having fucked her and seeing how she was during it she fell down alot on my list cause of her acts. Bonnie is up with Ava along with Ellie but I really hope we can get alot more from Meriyah cause I liked her. But the true stars I want more of after Ava and Bonnie are Melody I think if it is Melody or Melony but Sam's girl's bff. She was cute as hell along with Raine and the super underdog that has been made to be forgotten by dev for later reason i am starting to think is ALICE! I already liked her from the 1st time I did a playthrough but she is fucking hot and her tits yesssir she will be getting my mc's cock asap! Anyways I am really liking this game and waiting for next update! Now below my list so far and no order but just a quick fun list of who I wanna fuck and get more from


# 1 AVA
#2 ALICE/MELODY/BOBBIE/RACHEL
????THEN
LUCIE
ELLIE
IMOGEN
MIA/TEEGAN

 

[hysepReC]

I mean someone in a monogamous relationship is a slut because she makes a remark about how she sounds while she fucks her boyfriend?

Don't put words into my mouth, I never said that. Ella isn't romanceable so that comment obviously wasn't directed at her. I'm talking about girls like Bobbie and especially Tegan who are confirmed LIs.

 

[poki ron]

is there going to be romance tag in future