[v0.08.0]
The writing is generally pretty good. There are decently captivating moments. Dev does a good job making you care for the little girls. There is a pretty organic feel to their relationship and how it develops. All in all, the writing is definitely above average for this site.
I didn't look extensively under the hood, but the walktrhough alludes to many dialogue variations based on the girls stats. I thought the Nerve stat was pretty novel.
The "now and then" storytelling is done quite well. Providing flashbacks at opportune moments to flesh out the characters and backstory.
I personally would have liked more focus and thought put into the horror and survival aspects. There is very little tension and suspense during the scenes. Some attention to the lighting, camera work, music, and lighting during the zombie parts could have gone a long way in making things much more suspenseful, raising the stakes. The survival aspects are bit off too. Expiration dates on perishables don't quite match up with how much time has passed since the outbreak. Looting should have been rampant where almost everything is cleaned out, but all the stores seem to have things to scavenge. The threat of zombies and gangs are not emphasized enough, written to seem more like a nuisance than a life threatening entity.
Still, I played it through in 2 sittings and had a pretty good time with it.
The writing is generally pretty good. There are decently captivating moments. Dev does a good job making you care for the little girls. There is a pretty organic feel to their relationship and how it develops. All in all, the writing is definitely above average for this site.
I didn't look extensively under the hood, but the walktrhough alludes to many dialogue variations based on the girls stats. I thought the Nerve stat was pretty novel.
The "now and then" storytelling is done quite well. Providing flashbacks at opportune moments to flesh out the characters and backstory.
I personally would have liked more focus and thought put into the horror and survival aspects. There is very little tension and suspense during the scenes. Some attention to the lighting, camera work, music, and lighting during the zombie parts could have gone a long way in making things much more suspenseful, raising the stakes. The survival aspects are bit off too. Expiration dates on perishables don't quite match up with how much time has passed since the outbreak. Looting should have been rampant where almost everything is cleaned out, but all the stores seem to have things to scavenge. The threat of zombies and gangs are not emphasized enough, written to seem more like a nuisance than a life threatening entity.
Still, I played it through in 2 sittings and had a pretty good time with it.