Unity NTR Girlfriend Fullstack [v0.4.9] [NTRNoob]

[wolfund]

My two cents, don't end up letting your community drag you all over the place, or you'll just end up in a tangled mess that'll piss you and everyone else off. Feedback is important, but you're the creator here, YOU ultimately dictate the direction and pace of YOUR story. Write multiple drafts for routes/ideas you're interested in, and maybe let people vote on which things to follow, but don't let people's opinions supersede your interest in your own story. What's important is that you have a solid direction/framework for what YOU want the game to accomplish.

Agreed, there is nothign wrong with listening to critics but as the storyteller you do have the final word on how the story is told and what is told.

It's not going ot be for everyone at the end of the day and do NOT try to please everyone, it's the surrest way to loose yourself in details and turn everything into mush. To be polite.

 

[SnakeSan58]

It looks very interesting, I suppose there will be a lot of content that can tickle the nerves of lovers of depraved girls. I am waiting for your work, I believe that you will do everything very cool, because this is how it looks ❤ so... Good luck.

 

[clintisguod]

is there a girlfriend´s pov?

 

[.NTRNOOB]

is there a girlfriend´s pov?

There is currently not one. But it is a possible future addition

 

[muazerati]

writing is good so far. good luck dev

 

[addan076]

Thanks for the advice! I'll try to keep that in mind when updating.
But I do have a question on your second suggestion. How are you envisioning the game to look like if we are able to view from the female perspective? Like a simple toggle that flips from the player's perspective to the female's perspective? Like visually is there any difference between your suggestion and a hacking app strategy besides the player's knowledge? I do think it's a great idea. Just not sure if I can pull it off.

I would switch episodes from MC to Female MC or even update to update. I would imagine her thoughts. Including the kind of things she wouldn't say out loud, admit to others or even to herself. Does she think the person is handsome? Is she being blackmailed? Is there a curiosity about having sex with the different person and that can be anything from looks, power, likeability, even use the trope of "size difference" but strategically like it is something that helps push her over the desire/curiosity edge versus "I see big dick, must cheat now." Throughout the story her own thoughts about the MC can be recorded. How does she feel before, during the temptation build up, during the act, after the act and even how does she feel about the MC, if there is sex with him after the first act with the other man and her thoughts after subsequent acts with both the MC and other man. Does she still love the MC? Does she feel less for the MC and why. Does she want to keep the MC or move on to the new interest? There is so much on this that really isn't explored in the genre. I would think about what the personality of the woman in your head is and think how she would react as the story unfolds (it doesn't always have to be logical but can be emotional but your challenge is to convey that to the reader). I would story board/outline everything far before hand and then connect the outline through dialogue and pictures. Good luck.

 

[packard1928]

So Far I like it keep it up dev !

 

[.NTRNOOB]

I would switch episodes from MC to Female MC or even update to update. I would imagine her thoughts. Including the kind of things she wouldn't say out loud, admit to others or even to herself. Does she think the person is handsome? Is she being blackmailed? Is there a curiosity about having sex with the different person and that can be anything from looks, power, likeability, even use the trope of "size difference" but strategically like it is something that helps push her over the desire/curiosity edge versus "I see big dick, must cheat now." Throughout the story her own thoughts about the MC can be recorded. How does she feel before, during the temptation build up, during the act, after the act and even how does she feel about the MC, if there is sex with him after the first act with the other man and her thoughts after subsequent acts with both the MC and other man. Does she still love the MC? Does she feel less for the MC and why. Does she want to keep the MC or move on to the new interest? There is so much on this that really isn't explored in the genre. I would think about what the personality of the woman in your head is and think how she would react as the story unfolds (it doesn't always have to be logical but can be emotional but your challenge is to convey that to the reader). I would story board/outline everything far before hand and then connect the outline through dialogue and pictures. Good luck.

Great suggestion! right now I'm just worry about biting off more than I can chew. So once I have more content in terms of the male perspective and I'll poll my patreons on whether I should focus my energy on a female perspective

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

Whats the 7th pic for claire? Tried everything but cannot find it.

 

[.NTRNOOB]

Whats the 7th pic for claire? Tried everything but cannot find it.

Replay Chapter 2. Instead of ClaireDash, say good night to her instead. keep progressing and you should see in towards the end of chapter 2 with claire.

 

[Sodyaler]

I also can't seem to get the 7th clair picture to unlock no matter what choices I make

 

[Fitharia]

Pretty good start, gf is cute and hope the mc too, but i did gag when saw (J)Lames, god the guy is fugly. Gf must be nuts to fall for him, as he got the whole crooked villain look and is far from sexy. Hope her bf is handsome, or else she has a real bad taste in men. Looking forward to next updates.

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

Replay Chapter 2. Instead of ClaireDash, say good night to her instead. keep progressing and you should see in towards the end of chapter 2 with claire.

Hmm not working. If I tell her good night she will not contact me again in chapter 2.

 

[Vampire_Lord]

there is someting i dont like, if like any option i do i the same, when the mc said that he hate james and he is the one who make the blood higher and if i chose to dont trust that guy option the girl even that said i whant to do couple theme cosplay with him just kidding ,and the mc said yeahh do couple theme with him, like come one! you just said that you hate him and you dont whant to get close to your girlfriend, thats what im saying the options whe use dont care at the end because the mc said i fine at the end -_-

 

[.NTRNOOB]

I also can't seem to get the 7th clair picture to unlock no matter what choices I make

Hmm not working. If I tell her good night she will not contact me again in chapter 2.

Whats the 7th pic for claire? Tried everything but cannot find it.

Sorry it was at the beginning of chapter 3. This is where it starts showing different images based on what you selected.
that's strange...it might be a bug, but I can't replicate it at the moment. I can just pose the image here if you guys don't mind

 

[.NTRNOOB]

there is someting i dont like, if like any option i do i the same, when the mc said that he hate james and he is the one who make the blood higher and if i chose to dont trust that guy option the girl even that said i whant to do couple theme cosplay with him just kidding ,and the mc said yeahh do couple theme with him, like come one! you just said that you hate him and you dont whant to get close to your girlfriend, thats what im saying the options whe use dont care at the end because the mc said i fine at the end -_-

Yeah sorry! I started to add to multiple routes towards the beginning but haven't completed it and am focusing on two routes ntr,nts so they start merging. It was supposed to be optionally be interpreted it as a sarcastic "yeah", but definitely could be reworked when I get to the faithful path/avoidable ntr

 

[.NTRNOOB]

Pretty good start, gf is cute and hope the mc too, but i did gag when saw (J)Lames, god the guy is fugly. Gf must be nuts to fall for him, as he got the whole crooked villain look and is far from sexy. Hope her bf is handsome, or else she has a real bad taste in men. Looking forward to next updates.

thanks! I guess you can file James under netoraranger red: ugly bastard then

 

[Cenodoxus]

Sorry it was at the beginning of chapter 3. This is where it starts showing different images based on what you selected.
that's strange...it might be a bug, but I can't replicate it at the moment. I can just pose the image here if you guys don't mind

She sends me a Pantyshot at the start of Chapter 3 on both Claireshuttle and good night selctions

 

[.NTRNOOB]

She sends me a Pantyshot at the start of Chapter 3 on both Claireshuttle and good night selctions

they're supposed to both be pantyshot, but from different angle.

 

[.NTRNOOB]

I'll attach both pics here, hope I don't spoil anything.

I AM ABLE TO REPLICATE THE BUG.

Once the story ends, even if you hit chapter selection, the variables are not reset. I was going through the chapters before finishing the story and hitting chapter selection which allowed me to reset the variables