Unity NTR Girlfriend Fullstack [v0.6.0] [NTRNoob]

[iainmore]

Thank both of you for your feedback...we appreciate it very much. It's tough to gauge what EVERYONE wants...we try to listen to feedback from as many people as possible, it's a tough job to write for everyone, but we appreciate you guys for sticking with us. Please continue to voice your criticisms we really do listen.

The bottom line - A game for everyone is a game for no one.

 

[slickr4]

I really like the game but in my opinion, the NTS path it kinda veers too much on the humiliation side more than I would like. The begging for pictures and videos from the guy is a bit much. Hopefully in future updates this humiliation aspect gets toned down from the NTS path or maybe split the nts path into 2? although I don't think this is a good idea as it might introduce another branch which will inevitably produce more work for the dev and consequently longer update times. Anyways aside from my issue with what I consider too much humiliation on the NTS path the game is great and I like the pace. hopefully in the future more events focused on one bull like invitation to the gym, couple going camping with the bull and maybe with claire, beach events like applying lotion or taking longer in the dressing room, maybe events in the Mc's house, work trips with the whole company and the MC helping with hiding girlfriend's relationship with the bull like hidden sex in plain sight or in front of the other employees like on the clothes a table or other furniture is the only thing keeping them from seeing shit.... This game so good my imagination hit overdrive.

I'm curious did you only play the NTS path? did you try the NTR?

 

[slickr4]

The bottom line - A game for everyone is a game for no one.

I didn't mean literally...what I meant was, writing for everyone under a certain branch is inevitably going to inevitably make some upset, ESPECIALLY this genre of writing. We're not trying to fit EVERYTHING in one story lol

 

[slickr4]

I didn't mean literally...what I meant was, writing for everyone under a certain branch is inevitably going to inevitably make some upset, ESPECIALLY this genre of writing. We're not trying to fit EVERYTHING in one story we're not that smart or organized lol

 

[Theadriel]

Thank both of you for your feedback...we appreciate it very much. It's tough to gauge what EVERYONE wants...we try to listen to feedback from as many people as possible, it's a tough job to write for everyone, but we appreciate you guys for sticking with us. Please continue to voice your criticisms we really do listen.

It's not really about writing for everyone (it'll fail just saying. It's impossible to content everyone).
I would advise to stick to the characters and persona you had planned at first but make it consistent. Problem in these kind of games is some people will request FMC to be naughty, sluty, sleeping with the first cock available and suddenly turn into someone mean and controlling over MC, treating him like an inferior being, degrading him.
Thing is you depicted Vi as a caring girlfriend, worried about him improving in his life, pushing him to be better and now she kinda part from MC to focus on her new "toys" almost using his health condition as an excuse to open her sexuality (I know it's not the plan but it does sound a bit like that) which is contradictory or if it's planned the changes in behavior is not explained enough. Maybe she had restrains, doubts about her relationships and a lack of secual adventure hidden or something but here I feel like the change isn't natural but forced by audience motives.
Just my feeling playing the game, maybe someone else saw the development differently. Weall see games thru our own prism after all

 

[hhhhy]

I'm curious did you only play the NTS path? did you try the NTR?

I only played the NTS path because that's what I mainly like but I'll probably play the NTR path later when the game has more updates because I really enjoyed the games story and pace. And I appreciate you reading our feedbacks and don't worry too much about appeasing everyone just do what you feel is right and if you think some of our feedback is good and feasible then implement it if you can or if you want to and if not then that's fine too. This is your game your the driver where just here for the ride. Maybe we'll point in a direction we want to go but ultimate your the one who'll choose the direction. If some if us give bad feedback/opinion just treat us as backseat drivers.

 

[slickr4]

I only played the NTS path because that's what I mainly like but I'll probably play the NTR path later when the game has more updates because I really enjoyed the games story and pace. And I appreciate you reading our feedbacks and don't worry too much about appeasing everyone just do what you feel is right and if you think some of our feedback is good and feasible then implement it if you can or if you want to and if not then that's fine too. This is your game your the driver where just here for the ride. Maybe we'll point in a direction we want to go but ultimate your the one who'll choose the direction. If some if us give bad feedback/opinion just treat us as backseat drivers.

Yeah it's tough with feedback coming from all directions but there are great ideas to be had by the community an only an extremely talented (or stupid) dev would ignore it. I for one love reading criticism and try to improve from it. Thanks again

 

[aris666]

Wanted to correct myself - contentent in last update with Claire was good (if last scene between her and James) - as it would set up potential Claire×Vi×James threesome content for NTR route. And I hope that NTR route will not be introducing more male characters.

 

[slickr4]

Wanted to correct myself - contentent in last update with Claire was good (if last scene between her and James) - as it would set up potential Claire×Vi×James threesome content for NTR route. And I hope that NTR route will not be introducing more male characters.

Thank you for the feedback it’s really appreciated! So glad you enjoyed it.

 

[slickr4]

As a visual novel - good update. But kinda mild in regards of spicy content

I'm just curious as to whether you played the NTR or NTS path? NTR added a couple of major scenes featuring Claire were you able to see those? Thank you so much for the feedback!

 

[JQuillon]

I agree with the post above. The humiliation is too present in the nts path. I said it already for last update when Vi says James is "so much bigger" and about MC cum "it doesn't taste bad like yours", both said in a way that is almost mean, plus when he says he can have sex she instantly say she's fine since she has a replacement already and now she ask her boyfriend to go ask for pictures/video of her sucking others like a beggar... it's a bit out of character imo. Vi seems like a carring GF, worries about his health and all but also has no shame about making him feel replaceable.

Doesn't make the game bad, far from it but imo it's a bit contradictory. The more updates moves on the more I wish MC can end up with Claire instead xD

Totally agree. Broadly speaking, there are two kinds of NTS: hotwifing and cuckolding. The first three/four chapters of the game clearly seem to set up a hotwifing game, the way MC and Vi's relationship is portrayed--ie everything is swell between them, but for whatever reason (here, health-related for MC, plus a kink that he didn't know he had), they decide to experiment with giving the lady some/total freedom in her sexual life, but their relationship remains loving and wholesome (think Netorase Phone).

But chapters 5&6 abruptly sends their life down the cuckolding path, which feels jarring, tbh. It's perfectly fine if that was the plan (although I personally like hotwifing way more, but that's just me), but it feels like this took a much-too-sudden turn, and the cuckolding should probably have been introduced more gradually (here, it almost feels like MC has already been kicked out of the relationship with Vi and is just here so she can belittle him while she moves on to "better lovers/real men", which didn't feel like the tone of the game at the start).

(Also, James having MC beg is probably a big no-no for several/many players, and in a hotwifing setting, he would probably already have been kicked out by both MC *and especially* Vi for the way he behaved.)

 

[slickr4]

Totally agree. Broadly speaking, there are two kinds of NTS: hotwifing and cuckolding. The first three/four chapters of the game clearly seem to set up a hotwifing game, the way MC and Vi's relationship is portrayed--ie everything is swell between them, but for whatever reason (here, health-related for MC, plus a kink that he didn't know he had), they decide to experiment with giving the lady some/total freedom in her sexual life, but their relationship remains loving and wholesome (think Netorase Phone).

But chapters 5&6 abruptly sends their life down the cuckolding path, which feels jarring, tbh. It's perfectly fine if that was the plan (although I personally like hotwifing way more, but that's just me), but it feels like this took a much-too-sudden turn, and the cuckolding should probably have been introduced more gradually (here, it almost feels like MC has already been kicked out of the relationship with Vi and is just here so she can belittle him while she moves on to "better lovers/real men", which didn't feel like the tone of the game at the start).

(Also, James having MC beg is probably a big no-no for several/many players, and in a hotwifing setting, he would probably already have been kicked out by both MC *and especially* Vi for the way he behaved.)

We really appreciate this feedback. Going forward we will try to make it clear to the reader which direction we're going. Thank you!

 

[aris666]

I'm just curious as to whether you played the NTR or NTS path? NTR added a couple of major scenes featuring Claire were you able to see those? Thank you so much for the feedback!

I'm interested only in NTR route.
That is main reason, why I added correction. "Spicy" content was mild in regards of Vi. Claire content was very good. I did understand correctly and those scenes depict Claire and James?

 

[slickr4]

I'm interested only in NTR route.
That is main reason, why I added correction. "Spicy" content was mild in regards of Vi. Claire content was very good. I did understand correctly and those scenes depict Claire and James?

Oh for sure, I understand. With regards to Vi, stay tuned for the next chapter of NTR, the build up will be worth the wait. Were there any other criticisms you had?

 

[aris666]

Oh for sure, I understand. With regards to Vi, stay tuned for the next chapter of NTR, the build up will be worth the wait. Were there any other criticisms you had?

No, none at all. Just a question regarding last update - Clair scene is with James?

And, if it is possible to disclose, NTR route will be keeping only one "villain" character hopefully?

 

[slickr4]

No, none at all. Just a question regarding last update - Clair scene is with James?

And, if it is possible to disclose, NTR route will be keeping only one "villain" character hopefully?

Hey, since it's kind of spoiler territory do you mind DM'ing me? You have them turned off I couldn't message you.

 

[Theadriel]

I actually have a question (maybe it got answered before and I missed it if so my bad).
Since the last chapter only had a NTR path does it means the game is now fully NTR and the NTS phase was like an introduction to NTR or both paths will still be updated and it's just not ready yet?

 

[Ion.TemUS]

Thank both of you for your feedback...we appreciate it very much. It's tough to gauge what EVERYONE wants...we try to listen to feedback from as many people as possible, it's a tough job to write for everyone, but we appreciate you guys for sticking with us. Please continue to voice your criticisms we really do listen.

Im normally not one for NTS, so take that with a grain of salt, but I think I agree with the sentiment of the other two. I think humiliation can be great in that regard, but I feel there is a difference between creating feelings of slight inadequacy or making it teasing - and outright telling MC he is disgusting (in taste for example) and whatnot. There is a difference between playful NTS and outright abuse. And some of these cross the line imo.

Again, not a NTS guy, just trying to put myself into the shoes of people who like the NTS content. So take it with a grain of salt.

 

[slickr4]

I actually have a question (maybe it got answered before and I missed it if so my bad).
Since the last chapter only had a NTR path does it means the game is now fully NTR and the NTS phase was like an introduction to NTR or both paths will still be updated and it's just not ready yet?

NTS route will be updated next…thank you for the question.

 

[ninoooo]

Is there any actual ntr in the ntr route ? Or is still only suspicion ?