The dev has a very ironic name.
The game starts full screened on PC, which is weird for something not shaped for a desktop monitor. I changed it to windows and looked at resolutions and there are not narrow resolutions? They're all wide even though the game takes up just middle. Very weird.
The landlord raised the rent. "you can stay at your job. ill look for higher paid work."
Didn't she quit her job?
Office route is lame because he's a dick and pushy about it. Cheating should be exciting, not something you do because you have an IQ too low to record and report workplace harassment. Be into it. Also was kind of sudden, but since it's not my thing, the pace is neither here nor there. Well, I'll check out what I assume is the Dale route?
I got the message from dale and then clicked "sup bro"
before I told Rachel "hold on brb just got a txt from Dale." and this made "sup bro" always erase the screen and not progress, just a blank cityscape wallpaper. Telling Rachel hold on brb lets me progress Dale normally. So, no big deal, but a weird bug.
Saving and loading looks the same, I hope there's a confirmation added to loading in the future.
Seems no hot nerd route to fuck her while I'm at work. He's the IT guy, maybe that'll be in the programming route later. Just don't make him heelturn into an asshole like all the other guys in this.
Overall it's just too soon and undercooked to say much. The pacing is sometimes fine and then sometimes jerks forward, makes it seem like every route will be pretty short in the end, which I suppose is fine for a character with a lot of routes.
The user experience is pretty bad. Takes a couple clicks to get the save prompt to show up. Save/load are visually the same screen so easy to accidentally load when you want to save. The many dead-ends currently are annoying because of how many steps it is to reload, and if it was a while since saving, that bites a bit. A couple other NTR phone games like this let you click a message to rewind to it, letting you make a different choice without having to use the save/load feature. It'd be a great quality of life to copy. Alternatively, if you don't like that idea, the dead-ends could just re-prompt you with the previous choice, letting you go down the other route without needing to load.
Character conflict isn't very good right now. It feels forced when Rachel gets mad.
Good luck with it.