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Ok I just ran through the demo.
Pros: Excellent writing, excellent setup, good dialog. Interesting plot. Good renderings. Good "shots". Overall good and believable story. I love how the MC fights. Very tasty.
Cons: That font that's like artsy is terrible to read. I suggest using something else. Check out how the Jap VN's do it.
I personally don't like the model for the girl, breasts look too big.
Not enough content
Biggest con of all: No choice. Seemingly no programming such as characterization parameters (Good, evil, moral, etc)
Basically a hint of an excellent VN game with no choice. I suggest people to give their other games a try (I know I will) to see if they can pull of sex and choice. I'm overall optimistic about this dev.
Pros: Excellent writing, excellent setup, good dialog. Interesting plot. Good renderings. Good "shots". Overall good and believable story. I love how the MC fights. Very tasty.
Cons: That font that's like artsy is terrible to read. I suggest using something else. Check out how the Jap VN's do it.
I personally don't like the model for the girl, breasts look too big.
Not enough content
Biggest con of all: No choice. Seemingly no programming such as characterization parameters (Good, evil, moral, etc)
Basically a hint of an excellent VN game with no choice. I suggest people to give their other games a try (I know I will) to see if they can pull of sex and choice. I'm overall optimistic about this dev.
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Hmm, larger font, insta text, smaller breast, some parameters, routes, choices - I agree.
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Yeah. I'm actually very excited about this dev. Although I'm a bit concerned that they version controlled their game to be 1.1 despite being 10 year old veterans in software development?
Idk, I'll definitely give you guys money if you do a good product. I've given the dev team at My New Roommate and My Girl Friend's Amnesia my sub. I think you guys have potential to beat them in terms of quality. Roommate game was just written well. Amnesia game had a cute plot, very very hot protags, NTR, and a finished game.
If you guys can just emulate them with excellent world building, you will be successful. Please do consider using a different model for Noe though. This one is not cute/ hot at all. She feels a bit too bimboey. NTR / corruption games aren't fun if the girl is already looking like a huge slut with a massive rack. Just like why people don't take Scarjo seriously as an actor. She looks like a pornstar.
Idk, I'll definitely give you guys money if you do a good product. I've given the dev team at My New Roommate and My Girl Friend's Amnesia my sub. I think you guys have potential to beat them in terms of quality. Roommate game was just written well. Amnesia game had a cute plot, very very hot protags, NTR, and a finished game.
If you guys can just emulate them with excellent world building, you will be successful. Please do consider using a different model for Noe though. This one is not cute/ hot at all. She feels a bit too bimboey. NTR / corruption games aren't fun if the girl is already looking like a huge slut with a massive rack. Just like why people don't take Scarjo seriously as an actor. She looks like a pornstar.
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This isn't a demo.. It is a complete prologue to the main game, that has yet to be released, there are also two or three more character prologues to be released... The prologues are kinetic novels.
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I'm with you, brother. Don't want to miss any related to NTR, especially type a ^^
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So, there is some clarification I received on official Disord channel:
NTR (game name, not genre) consist of:
1. "NTR (The game)"
Main game, with gameplay, choices etc. There is only one (female) protagonist here - Noe.
2. "The NTR Origin Stories"
Kinetic novels (no choices) introducing main characters (these characters are/will be protagonist there).
So (free) game link we have is to one of few NTR Origin Stories and do not represent main game's gameplay.
NTR (game name, not genre) consist of:
1. "NTR (The game)"
Main game, with gameplay, choices etc. There is only one (female) protagonist here - Noe.
2. "The NTR Origin Stories"
Kinetic novels (no choices) introducing main characters (these characters are/will be protagonist there).
So (free) game link we have is to one of few NTR Origin Stories and do not represent main game's gameplay.
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I couldn`t finish reading this VN yet but I would add this thread to my western NTR list if it wasn't kinetic novel. It is very well written NTR story for female protagonist.
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First off, a big thanks to @CobraPL for spreading the word, and fro @"VECTOR" a.k.a 'Clyde' for speaking up while we weren't around. Cheers guys! Now, some rebuttal...
Here you can see our decision UI (using testing assets from this VN so as not to spoil main game content):
There is indeed also an element of stat building in our girl, to bring out her personality traits (and exploitable flaws): including her Nerve, Romanticism, Open Mindedness and Competitiveness. Hopefully that helps assuage some of your doubts.
And a note about our other game, Agents of Heels, since it's mentioned there. What is currently public (v0.5) was made entirely by Unshi, who is not a native English speaker. It's got all the great art NTR has, and some mighty fine writing, but Spook's (the NTR writer) stuff is only starting to appear in the game, so just a heads up on that. It is our intention make all the scenes match up and be by Spook in the future, but for now everyone wants to see more content, not revisited old stuff, so it's on the To-Do for a while yet. Still, its a great experience itself and has much more to offer than NTR right now!
I'm afraid we'll have to agree to disagree about Noe. We very much like her and she's popular among our fans. If she's not to your taste though, we've got a few more girls in the game, most which have a smaller frontage, hope that's a consolidation.
And we are most certainly not in it for the money, beyond the modest and fair aspiration to make enough to support ourselves. As you mentioned above we've been making games professionally for a long time and left paid industry jobs (and his own company in Spook's case) to do this. The money we make these days doesn't cover our food for the month (we live off savings) let alone anything else and yet we've been at it more than a year. Trust us, we're filthy people in it for the virtual ladies and the hot times!
Alright then guys, hope that helps clear some things up for people. We're off now and getting back to work, we've another version of AoH out this month and a whole bunch of other stuff going on, so we're going to get that done.
See you all around the forums I'm sure.
Thanks for the complements my friend, glad you enjoyed some of the aspects of our game. I think you'll be happy to hear that most of the cons, including the "Biggest Con of All", are actually addressed in the main game. We'll take the font under advisement, thanks for letting us know about it.
Here you can see our decision UI (using testing assets from this VN so as not to spoil main game content):
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Its already live and in use in our v0.1. Similarly you can see some of the tutorial info for the gameplay (which is optional) here:
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There is indeed also an element of stat building in our girl, to bring out her personality traits (and exploitable flaws): including her Nerve, Romanticism, Open Mindedness and Competitiveness. Hopefully that helps assuage some of your doubts.
And a note about our other game, Agents of Heels, since it's mentioned there. What is currently public (v0.5) was made entirely by Unshi, who is not a native English speaker. It's got all the great art NTR has, and some mighty fine writing, but Spook's (the NTR writer) stuff is only starting to appear in the game, so just a heads up on that. It is our intention make all the scenes match up and be by Spook in the future, but for now everyone wants to see more content, not revisited old stuff, so it's on the To-Do for a while yet. Still, its a great experience itself and has much more to offer than NTR right now!
And thanks again for the kind words. We're also excited about our work, happy to know others are too. As for the version numbering, it's v1.0 because its complete, and then it got a patch to fix an issue with the save function, ending at v1.1. Version numbering is of course a heated topic, here and elsewhere, and it seems like no 2 people ever use the same system, making it particularly funny to me that it system is called Semantic Versioning. I wouldn't worry about it.
I'm afraid we'll have to agree to disagree about Noe. We very much like her and she's popular among our fans. If she's not to your taste though, we've got a few more girls in the game, most which have a smaller frontage, hope that's a consolidation.
Sometimes being different is a good thing. These Mini-VNs give us the chance to explore areas of our original characters and their lives which we wont get to see much in the main game since they are not the focal character (Noe being the exception here). It's all world building and to build character depth, a worth while pursuit, no?
And we are most certainly not in it for the money, beyond the modest and fair aspiration to make enough to support ourselves. As you mentioned above we've been making games professionally for a long time and left paid industry jobs (and his own company in Spook's case) to do this. The money we make these days doesn't cover our food for the month (we live off savings) let alone anything else and yet we've been at it more than a year. Trust us, we're filthy people in it for the virtual ladies and the hot times!
And thank you also for your kind words, we do try to make all our stuff fun and as tropeless as possible, even if a few touchstone tropes get past the armed guards. We're aiming to do you all proud, writing wise, and not have it as another Retard in Lechertown, "bust your nut and never admit it" game. Feel free to list us wherever you want, my friend!
Alright then guys, hope that helps clear some things up for people. We're off now and getting back to work, we've another version of AoH out this month and a whole bunch of other stuff going on, so we're going to get that done.
See you all around the forums I'm sure.
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100% with beWilder on this (hey! we dont always agree XD). Just wanna add that we are here because we loooove making videogames; we do have 10+ years experience and we feel confident in doing it on our own... and we are tired of doing it following the rules of people who do sacrifice gameplay and fun for the sake of money or more reliable target. We love making nasty girls do nasty things and we have a lot of fun doing so.
Not gonna lie, if a suitcase with a billion dollars was sent to me id be happier; as anyone would; but as spook said we turned our backs to the easy corp life and we are not making a specially attractive CV with this (porn lol)... but we still in it.
What I mean by all this is that... you may or may not like what we do, how we do it or our chars; but you can trust us. We are transparent and reachable; if you wanna pledge, cool! if not, no problem; you can still send us your concerns and we'll be happy to adress as many as we can.
Not gonna lie, if a suitcase with a billion dollars was sent to me id be happier; as anyone would; but as spook said we turned our backs to the easy corp life and we are not making a specially attractive CV with this (porn lol)... but we still in it.
What I mean by all this is that... you may or may not like what we do, how we do it or our chars; but you can trust us. We are transparent and reachable; if you wanna pledge, cool! if not, no problem; you can still send us your concerns and we'll be happy to adress as many as we can.
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Cool. I hope you guys make something worthy. I've played your other game, which was about a 7/10 right now. Very impressive work with the comic book style scene transitions.
My biggest concern about this game is I just can't take a big tit girl seriously. Especially one that flaunts her massive 36F tits on a Tuesday working at a diner. I haven't seen any "real" people dress like her. Women who are beautiful usually feel keen to hide their beauty and want to be appreciate for other qualities. The ones that are worth corrupting, anyway.
I remember in college there was a girl with tits like Noe. NEVER wore anything that showed her cleavage. She gets stares all the time. She hated it.
Gameplay wise, you lose the ability to slowly coerce her to wear things more revealing, since she already does. It's a Tuesday at the diner for her.
My biggest concern about this game is I just can't take a big tit girl seriously. Especially one that flaunts her massive 36F tits on a Tuesday working at a diner. I haven't seen any "real" people dress like her. Women who are beautiful usually feel keen to hide their beauty and want to be appreciate for other qualities. The ones that are worth corrupting, anyway.
I remember in college there was a girl with tits like Noe. NEVER wore anything that showed her cleavage. She gets stares all the time. She hated it.
Gameplay wise, you lose the ability to slowly coerce her to wear things more revealing, since she already does. It's a Tuesday at the diner for her.
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You mean... like this lovely lady?
And I assume part of your objection is the see-through shirt aspect of Noe's work outfit when you mean she's flaunting herself? We actually addressed that earlier, it was a mistake on our part as that wasn't suposted to happen so early. Here's our quote on the matter.
Still, I do see your point, even if I don't quite agree it's as severe as you see it. On the upside, we can civilly disagree on it, which is nice since most points of contention on ntr fetish threads end up as shouting matches... sad, isn't it? Keep on lovin' ladies your way, my friend! If Noe's not to your taste, perhaps the quality of the art and writing will entice you to stick around and follow along with the other girl's antics, or if not perhaps we'll see you around on another of our games in future. By God, we will be making a lot of them over the years too come.
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I agree, the uniform is slightly on the edge between realism and sexiness... but that is what porn is about isn't it? XD
I must say tho that Noe specially; the color of her shirt combined with the handmade black bra comes inspired from the first job I ever worked on. I was around 15 by then and one of the secretaries of the office was rocking a very similar combination with very similar transparency and bra. One of my many super useful tasks in there was to deliver files to her and one day I stood up looking down her blouse so much time without realizing it that she actually covered herself with her arm... Freaking teenager me back then... I'd slap myself. Long story short; the image is still burnt in my head and that uniform was quite like this one. (With bra, that is; the non-bra images are a mistake as spook mentions above).
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You sure this is an NTR ? I thought that "NTR" thing on NTR origins is just an acronym it doesn't mean that its netorare
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Because Salvatore character, It's a NTR story for my taste. Even it is not a game with choices, i put this kinetic novel in my western NTR post which is in NTR resource thread.
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Haha yes. Women who have some sort of principles want to be respected and not looked down upon like a piece of meat. My ideal NTR game is to take a strong and haughty woman like that and slowly peel off her pride. If Noe already dresses like a cheap slut that I see around campus all the time, she's just a girl with nothing to offer but her beauty.
The woman we want to corrupt are the ones who try their best to present themselves as something more than beautiful. They want to be charming, respected, and listened to. Ideally Salvatore takes that and exploit it. Showing her that she's none of that. That she's just another cheap slut. THAT's why people make corruption games. Can't corrupt what isn't "built well", with a strong foundation in her beliefs, a strong sense of pride, integrity, honesty, and devotion to loved one.
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Hmm. But in personality/her texts she seems to me as quite decent woman and fiance not easy to corrupt.