VN Ren'Py NTR'ed by My Friend [v0.11.1] [NTR.ai]

[phantomz]

good game . honestly i dont care if the arts are AI or hand draw as long as the scenes are hot and the story and characters interesting . i even played game with terrible arts becausr the story was engaging enough for me to play those games .

good job dev .loved the animation in this game, especially cum running on her tongue was so damn hot .

 

[Black Razor]

Is this a netorase game or netorare ?

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Honestly regardless of what way it goes in the end I hope it doesn't end up as the MC just accepts it all and they play happy families because he doesn't want to lose her blah blah blah ( even tho he's technically lost her as she's fucking someone else )

So I'm hoping that when it does hit the ending and the MC finds out he's like well Christina you can fuck off home and go fuck yourself as we are done and Blake you can go fuck yourself and all and also get the fuck out and find somewhere else to live haha

 

[NTR.ai]

Honestly regardless of what way it goes in the end I hope it doesn't end up as the MC just accepts it all and they play happy families because he doesn't want to lose her blah blah blah ( even tho he's technically lost her as she's fucking someone else )

So I'm hoping that when it does hit the ending and the MC finds out he's like well Christina you can fuck off home and go fuck yourself as we are done and Blake you can go fuck yourself and all and also get the fuck out and find somewhere else to live haha

That will be player's call since other member suggested that I can at least let players choose the ending so I will add choices at the last 2 or 3 versions.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

That will be player's call since other member suggested that I can at least let players choose the ending so I will add choices at the last 2 or 3 versions.

Interesting but I can respect that any plans or interest around having a MC revenge route so to speak would actually be interesting to have the option of revenge along side staying or leaving haha

 

[NTR.ai]

Is this a netorase game or netorare ?

netorare but probably at the end there will be a netorase ending for players to choose

 

[Unique sky]

Bro hold a public poll once in a while.. Everything is locked LOL

 

[Nick Nosferatu]

That's a poll for his future game so it's understandable why he would lock it for his patrons. I'll tell you though, the winning choice is NTR (Wife POV). Obviously.

 

[NTR.ai]

Bro hold a public poll once in a while.. Everything is locked LOL

First, thank you so much for your interest—and I'm really sorry that the polls aren't open to the public right now. I still want to make sure paying members have a few exclusive benefits; otherwise, there would be little reason for them to support the project financially.

However, I've limited early access to just 7 days and ensured that all content becomes freely available after that, which means no paywall content. If there's anything else you'd like me to consider or improve, I'm always open to suggestions.

 

[Azdrac]

Hi everyone!!!! So if I've followed correctly, if I have to wait 7 days, the new update will be here today?

 

[Harted]

I think yes, hope we get public release today

 

[NTR.ai]

Hi everyone!!!! So if I've followed correctly, if I have to wait 7 days, the new update will be here today?

I think yes, hope we get public release today

You could just download it from my Patreon, the thread is not owned by me so the update may not be right away. The public release is around 4/20 06:00 (UTC+8)

 

[Harted]

You could just download it from my Patreon, the thread is not owned by me so the update may not be right away. The public release is around 4/20 06:00 (UTC+8)

Yeah i downloaded it on your patreon last week

 

[Nick Nosferatu]

0.5 dropped and man, I didn't expect the AI to be as competent as that for this kind of scene.
There is a bit of redundancy in the dialogue here and there, a different artstyle for one pic with an "anime" tone but that was a solid update, especially because of the top notch animations, which were smooth, numerous and well edited.

I'm also surprised to see the update being released even though you worked on the other project (I'll say I prefer Christine's design but the new female MC looks pretty good too and the dad gives me a Chris Redfield vibe). Good job.

 

[NTR.ai]

0.5 dropped and man, I didn't expect the AI to be as competent as that for this kind of scene.
There is a bit of redundancy in the dialogue here and there, a different artstyle for one pic with an "anime" tone but that was a solid update, especially because of the top notch animations, which were smooth, numerous and well edited.

I'm also surprised to see the update being released even though you worked on the other project (I'll say I prefer Christine's design but the new female MC looks pretty good too and the dad gives me a Chris Redfield vibe). Good job.

It seems we’re very much on the same page. I’ve gone ahead and revised the dialogue and uploaded the new version—really sorry about how rough the original lines were.

And as for the update frequency, it’s because I still focused on this one haha
BTW, may I know why you like Cristine more?

 

[jarngaffel]

The BJ scene for 0.5 was amazing but a just few personal thoughts:

1. Scripting during the BJ scene uses the suffix -God a little too much. Almost feels like every line had it and I thought it was repeating. Don't really need to have one every sentence imo, it can be intense enough.

2. During both cum sequences it felt more like a fluid stimulation than actual cum. Maybe for Cristine tomake it look a little more like squirting and for the actual cum to have something more white and viscous.

3. The story sequence into first penetration scene felt a little forced imo, doesnt feel very believable to be in the toilet and have your dick sat on unconsciously by someone. I really liked the animation but I personally felt like it dissipates some of the tension and conflict of her initially fantasizing about the penetration.

As a corruption enthusiast, a scenario off the top of my head that plays with this tension: she walks into the toilet - vulnerable from her dream and Blake walks in right after and grinds against and teases her. She relents and starts giving him an assjob which ends up with him blowing his load all over her back. He's not done yet (not like Alan) and tries a just the tip move before Alan knocks on the door and they quieten down - they're not so brazen yet. Blake then tells her to go to his room and she still hasn't had her answer from her dream from the bed yet.

Just what I think but ultimately its your vision.

 

[NTR.ai]

The BJ scene for 0.5 was amazing but a just few personal thoughts:

1. Scripting during the BJ scene uses the suffix -God a little too much. Almost feels like every line had it and I thought it was repeating. Don't really need to have one every sentence imo, it can be intense enough.

2. During both cum sequences it felt more like a fluid stimulation than actual cum. Maybe for Cristine tomake it look a little more like squirting and for the actual cum to have something more white and viscous.

3. The story sequence into first penetration scene felt a little forced imo, doesnt feel very believable to be in the toilet and have your dick sat on unconsciously by someone. I really liked the animation but I personally felt like it dissipates some of the tension and conflict of her initially fantasizing about the penetration.

As a corruption enthusiast, a scenario off the top of my head that plays with this tension: she walks into the toilet - vulnerable from her dream and Blake walks in right after and grinds against and teases her. She relents and starts giving him an assjob which ends up with him blowing his load all over her back. He's not done yet (not like Alan) and tries a just the tip move before Alan knocks on the door and they quieten down - they're not so brazen yet. Blake then tells her to go to his room and she still hasn't had her answer from her dream from the bed yet.

Just what I think but ultimately its your vision.

1. Sorry, but did you play v0.5.0 or v0.5.1? I refined a lot of the dialogues in v0.5.1, so I’m just curious if the changes feel like an improvement to you.
2. About the semen part—the reason why the FMC agrees to take it in her mouth is because she doesn’t want it getting on her body. So ideally, most of it shouldn’t be dripping out.
3. As for Blake's behavior—I designed it this way to maintain a more believable relationship dynamic early on. I didn’t want him to come across as too much of a jerk from the start, so their friendship would feel more genuine. Of course, once he starts actively trying to sleep with Cristine, that dynamic changes completely. But in the beginning, I wanted to keep him from being too aggressive or forceful.

Thanks again for the feedback! Just a small note—sometimes the design choices aren’t just for logic, tension, or eroticism, but also for pacing and character development. I hope that makes sense!

 

[jarngaffel]

1. Sorry, but did you play v0.5.0 or v0.5.1? I refined a lot of the dialogues in v0.5.1, so I’m just curious if the changes feel like an improvement to you.
2. About the semen part—the reason why the FMC agrees to take it in her mouth is because she doesn’t want it getting on her body. So ideally, most of it shouldn’t be dripping out.
3. As for Blake's behavior—I designed it this way to maintain a more believable relationship dynamic early on. I didn’t want him to come across as too much of a jerk from the start, so their friendship would feel more genuine. Of course, once he starts actively trying to sleep with Cristine, that dynamic changes completely. But in the beginning, I wanted to keep him from being too aggressive or forceful.

Thanks again for the feedback! Just a small note—sometimes the design choices aren’t just for logic, tension, or eroticism, but also for pacing and character development. I hope that makes sense!

I mean I don't know about the drama, just writing what I feel lol

1. Yea just played 0.5.1 and it feels much better but God still gets used alot. Nothing wrong with it but it gets repetitive.

3. In terms of pacing so far it feels ok until the bathroom scene as it does not feel like shes willing to go that way yet and the way it happens isn't really believable. Considering she hasn't sized or touched Blake's member at all, has not had any direct sexual interaction with Blake yet and she just casually slips in this gargantuan dick casually not knowing Blake is sitting there in the bathroom then not doing anything about it is kinda... a leap and a half in hentai logic. Thats also why JAVs have alot of teasing to make the NTR more believable.

Only giving my feedback because I felt like there would have been a good teasing animation to move this pacing into the BJ scene and -then- eventually into the bathroom scene where she can't resist getting off once shes tasted a little of what Blake has to offer. Saying all this cause Ive been liking your stuff, just food for thought.

 

[NTR.ai]

I mean I don't know about the drama, just writing what I feel lol

1. Yea just played 0.5.1 and it feels much better but God still gets used alot. Nothing wrong with it but it gets repetitive.

3. In terms of pacing so far it feels ok until the bathroom scene as it does not feel like shes willing to go that way yet and the way it happens isn't really believable. Considering she hasn't sized or touched Blake's member at all, has not had any direct sexual interaction with Blake yet and she just casually slips in this gargantuan dick casually not knowing Blake is sitting there in the bathroom then not doing anything about it is kinda... a leap and a half in hentai logic. Thats also why JAVs have alot of teasing to make the NTR more believable.

Only giving my feedback because I felt like there would have been a good teasing animation to move this pacing into the BJ scene and -then- eventually into the bathroom scene where she can't resist getting off once shes tasted a little of what Blake has to offer. Saying all this cause Ive been liking your stuff, just food for thought.

1. Oh, got it—sorry about that! I’ll be more mindful next time.
2. I see what you’re getting at, and I appreciate the perspective. Just to clarify, though—some JAV actually do start with direct penetration and build the emotional tension afterward. I’m not saying that to justify my approach, but just to explain where I was coming from in designing the scene. I totally get that the pacing feels different from what most NTR games do. It’s true—I’ve just gotten a bit worn out by the typical slow-burn and wanted to try something a little different.

And don’t worry—I know you’re giving feedback in good faith, not like a certain self-proclaimed saint out there, haha. I really do appreciate it. I wasn’t offended at all, and I hope nothing I said came off the wrong way either. I just wanted to give you a bit of insight so you’d know the choices weren’t made at random. I’m sorry if it didn’t quite land for you, but I genuinely did put thought into it and tried to make it meaningful.

 

[Nick Nosferatu]

It seems we’re very much on the same page. I’ve gone ahead and revised the dialogue and uploaded the new version—really sorry about how rough the original lines were.

And as for the update frequency, it’s because I still focused on this one haha
BTW, may I know why you like Cristine more?

I haven't read the update yet but I'll check this later.

As for Christine compared to Grace, well, that's just my preference for brunettes. I'll add that the comparison is obviously unfair because we've seen more expressions, attires and personality when the new one is just an empty shell so far.

Though, I have to say that the new character gives a more innocent vibe despite being built like a bombshell, which should fit the tone of your new story.