VN Ren'Py NTR'ed by My Friend [v0.4.2] [NTR.ai]

[jarngaffel]

The BJ scene for 0.5 was amazing but a just few personal thoughts:

1. Scripting during the BJ scene uses the suffix -God a little too much. Almost feels like every line had it and I thought it was repeating. Don't really need to have one every sentence imo, it can be intense enough.

2. During both cum sequences it felt more like a fluid stimulation than actual cum. Maybe for Cristine tomake it look a little more like squirting and for the actual cum to have something more white and viscous.

3. The story sequence into first penetration scene felt a little forced imo, doesnt feel very believable to be in the toilet and have your dick sat on unconsciously by someone. I really liked the animation but I personally felt like it dissipates some of the tension and conflict of her initially fantasizing about the penetration.

As a corruption enthusiast, a scenario off the top of my head that plays with this tension: she walks into the toilet - vulnerable from her dream and Blake walks in right after and grinds against and teases her. She relents and starts giving him an assjob which ends up with him blowing his load all over her back. He's not done yet (not like Alan) and tries a just the tip move before Alan knocks on the door and they quieten down - they're not so brazen yet. Blake then tells her to go to his room and she still hasn't had her answer from her dream from the bed yet.

Just what I think but ultimately its your vision.

 

[NTR.ai]

The BJ scene for 0.5 was amazing but a just few personal thoughts:

1. Scripting during the BJ scene uses the suffix -God a little too much. Almost feels like every line had it and I thought it was repeating. Don't really need to have one every sentence imo, it can be intense enough.

2. During both cum sequences it felt more like a fluid stimulation than actual cum. Maybe for Cristine tomake it look a little more like squirting and for the actual cum to have something more white and viscous.

3. The story sequence into first penetration scene felt a little forced imo, doesnt feel very believable to be in the toilet and have your dick sat on unconsciously by someone. I really liked the animation but I personally felt like it dissipates some of the tension and conflict of her initially fantasizing about the penetration.

As a corruption enthusiast, a scenario off the top of my head that plays with this tension: she walks into the toilet - vulnerable from her dream and Blake walks in right after and grinds against and teases her. She relents and starts giving him an assjob which ends up with him blowing his load all over her back. He's not done yet (not like Alan) and tries a just the tip move before Alan knocks on the door and they quieten down - they're not so brazen yet. Blake then tells her to go to his room and she still hasn't had her answer from her dream from the bed yet.

Just what I think but ultimately its your vision.

1. Sorry, but did you play v0.5.0 or v0.5.1? I refined a lot of the dialogues in v0.5.1, so I’m just curious if the changes feel like an improvement to you.
2. About the semen part—the reason why the FMC agrees to take it in her mouth is because she doesn’t want it getting on her body. So ideally, most of it shouldn’t be dripping out.
3. As for Blake's behavior—I designed it this way to maintain a more believable relationship dynamic early on. I didn’t want him to come across as too much of a jerk from the start, so their friendship would feel more genuine. Of course, once he starts actively trying to sleep with Cristine, that dynamic changes completely. But in the beginning, I wanted to keep him from being too aggressive or forceful.

Thanks again for the feedback! Just a small note—sometimes the design choices aren’t just for logic, tension, or eroticism, but also for pacing and character development. I hope that makes sense!

 

[jarngaffel]

1. Sorry, but did you play v0.5.0 or v0.5.1? I refined a lot of the dialogues in v0.5.1, so I’m just curious if the changes feel like an improvement to you.
2. About the semen part—the reason why the FMC agrees to take it in her mouth is because she doesn’t want it getting on her body. So ideally, most of it shouldn’t be dripping out.
3. As for Blake's behavior—I designed it this way to maintain a more believable relationship dynamic early on. I didn’t want him to come across as too much of a jerk from the start, so their friendship would feel more genuine. Of course, once he starts actively trying to sleep with Cristine, that dynamic changes completely. But in the beginning, I wanted to keep him from being too aggressive or forceful.

Thanks again for the feedback! Just a small note—sometimes the design choices aren’t just for logic, tension, or eroticism, but also for pacing and character development. I hope that makes sense!

I mean I don't know about the drama, just writing what I feel lol

1. Yea just played 0.5.1 and it feels much better but God still gets used alot. Nothing wrong with it but it gets repetitive.

3. In terms of pacing so far it feels ok until the bathroom scene as it does not feel like shes willing to go that way yet and the way it happens isn't really believable. Considering she hasn't sized or touched Blake's member at all, has not had any direct sexual interaction with Blake yet and she just casually slips in this gargantuan dick casually not knowing Blake is sitting there in the bathroom then not doing anything about it is kinda... a leap and a half in hentai logic. Thats also why JAVs have alot of teasing to make the NTR more believable.

Only giving my feedback because I felt like there would have been a good teasing animation to move this pacing into the BJ scene and -then- eventually into the bathroom scene where she can't resist getting off once shes tasted a little of what Blake has to offer. Saying all this cause Ive been liking your stuff, just food for thought.

 

[NTR.ai]

I mean I don't know about the drama, just writing what I feel lol

1. Yea just played 0.5.1 and it feels much better but God still gets used alot. Nothing wrong with it but it gets repetitive.

3. In terms of pacing so far it feels ok until the bathroom scene as it does not feel like shes willing to go that way yet and the way it happens isn't really believable. Considering she hasn't sized or touched Blake's member at all, has not had any direct sexual interaction with Blake yet and she just casually slips in this gargantuan dick casually not knowing Blake is sitting there in the bathroom then not doing anything about it is kinda... a leap and a half in hentai logic. Thats also why JAVs have alot of teasing to make the NTR more believable.

Only giving my feedback because I felt like there would have been a good teasing animation to move this pacing into the BJ scene and -then- eventually into the bathroom scene where she can't resist getting off once shes tasted a little of what Blake has to offer. Saying all this cause Ive been liking your stuff, just food for thought.

1. Oh, got it—sorry about that! I’ll be more mindful next time.
2. I see what you’re getting at, and I appreciate the perspective. Just to clarify, though—some JAV actually do start with direct penetration and build the emotional tension afterward. I’m not saying that to justify my approach, but just to explain where I was coming from in designing the scene. I totally get that the pacing feels different from what most NTR games do. It’s true—I’ve just gotten a bit worn out by the typical slow-burn and wanted to try something a little different.

And don’t worry—I know you’re giving feedback in good faith, not like a certain self-proclaimed saint out there, haha. I really do appreciate it. I wasn’t offended at all, and I hope nothing I said came off the wrong way either. I just wanted to give you a bit of insight so you’d know the choices weren’t made at random. I’m sorry if it didn’t quite land for you, but I genuinely did put thought into it and tried to make it meaningful.

 

[Nick Nosferatu]

It seems we’re very much on the same page. I’ve gone ahead and revised the dialogue and uploaded the new version—really sorry about how rough the original lines were.

And as for the update frequency, it’s because I still focused on this one haha
BTW, may I know why you like Cristine more?

I haven't read the update yet but I'll check this later.

As for Christine compared to Grace, well, that's just my preference for brunettes. I'll add that the comparison is obviously unfair because we've seen more expressions, attires and personality when the new one is just an empty shell so far.

Though, I have to say that the new character gives a more innocent vibe despite being built like a bombshell, which should fit the tone of your new story.

 

[Hotcoupleeasy]

Wow just played 0.4 wow so hot different style so hot wow Thanks to the brilliant developer

 

[pr0dukt]

Has some good build up, and do like that Blake isn't just a belligerent piece of shit whom immediately tries to fuck his bf's girl as soon as he sees an opening. He's just testing the waters a bit. keep it up.

 

[Eet_Fuk]

Is this one worth it ? Like how's the content atm?

 

[FatYoda]

So this is just an NTR story correct? No NTS path?

 

[andy91xx]

Guess i'm the only one whos getting fed up of the amount of AI CGs on this site. i dont even hate ai or ai art, i make it my self but all ai cgs on this site look the same, its like all devs using ai use the same checkpoint to generate the art.

side note to the site admin making it so the latest updates tab remembers your search parameters would be a life saver. having to remove ai cgs every time gets annoying.

 

[Devilrebel]

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[Camerun55]

Any kind Hero with 0.5.1 version? )

 

[Patpong]

So 10 pages and not 1 download link? What am I missing?

 

[FatYoda]

well now...as a guy who generally dislikes NTR games but loves NTS and NTI...guess who i get to rename...Alan can keep his name, but his girl is mine...it's not my fault he hasn't fucked her in weeks ...seriously, if you cum too early after weeks of inactivity just give her a little lick for a couple minutes and you're good to go....and if for some reason you are incapable you can at least finish her before you sleep. Don't be this guy, he may not deserve to be cheated on (cause no one does) but he doesn't deserve to keep her either.

 

[FatYoda]

Has some good build up, and do like that Blake isn't just a belligerent piece of shit whom immediately tries to fuck his bf's girl as soon as he sees an opening. He's just testing the waters a bit. keep it up.

Wtf are you on about? He literally fingered her while the MC was in the next room 20 ft away on day 3. The only reason there is buildup is because the dev recognizes that a nice girl isn't gonna jump on that huge cock on day 1 just cause she gets turned on by a bulge. Although to be fair...she didn't wait very long either....even it was unintentional she sure as fuck didn't try very hard to stop.

 

[BOBtheboober1995]

Love the animated scenes!!

 

[Splatter_1]

LOL another the MC has a small dick so Ima cheat with this MASSIVE cock....... OMG for once make it a little realistic.

 

[Taboofan]

It must be said. Those breasts! 10/10 chef's kiss. Before I even play.

 

[NTR.ai]

Guess i'm the only one whos getting fed up of the amount of AI CGs on this site. i dont even hate ai or ai art, i make it my self but all ai cgs on this site look the same, its like all devs using ai use the same checkpoint to generate the art.

side note to the site admin making it so the latest updates tab remembers your search parameters would be a life saver. having to remove ai cgs every time gets annoying.

Interesting, I actually haven’t seen many others using this particular style, which is why I chose it. If I had seen more in the same vein, I might’ve gone with a different look. Otherwise, I did want to go with the popular illustration-style AI art, which I think is really beautiful.

 

[Geigi]

LOL another the MC has a small dick so Ima cheat with this MASSIVE cock....... OMG for once make it a little realistic.

Why? It's the fantasy to be cheated on because of a bigger penis. If you want realism, a FMC would cheat because a rich old man would be her sugar daddy, so since this is porn, no one wants to see a FMC shopping all day with the Blake's credit card, right?