Rahveryn
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- Jul 12, 2018
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Yeah, so... Visuals are great, amazing animation work with AI. Unfortunately it's just another...
"I created out of thin air a 'good man' but mainly a pathetic wimp, paired him with a 'Loyal' goddess who loves him and plans to create her life with him. Then you create out of thin air a big-dicked loser asshole, who quickly finds 'reasons' to hammer away at the poor goddess, and she tosses her relationship into the toilet to become a 1-dimensional enthusiastic cum-dump."
This plot is old, no matter how pretty the pictures. Hey at least this asshole isn't black... not all in on the tired old trope. At this point, The Cuck is dismissable, the Slut is a piece of garbage to be discarded, and the Asshole needs to be shot and left in a ditch. End of story. No character is likable or relatable. Really couldn't care less what happens to them anymore.
Just once it would be amazing if this was not the go to plot for this type of fantasy. I mean seriously, Why not, just once, have the Cuck actually not be a pathetic wimp, but solid athete, smart and built, A good man (with an impressibe package himself), but the Girl finds herself in a blackmail situation, and is leveraged into being somebody elses toy, but has to keep it secret to protect herself and her lover. Unfortunately she finds she loves the rough sex she's forced to engage in; even as she hates her tormentors; even though he actual lover is very satisfing, and the strain of the 2 lives evokes the drama. Make the MC begin an adventure unknowingly puting him on course to expose his lovers tormentors, meanwhile the FMC can be trying to sabotage them from the inside, surrendering to using her body to earn her access to their secrets. Together, from different angles they rescue themselves from the assholes, and our MCs have to figure out how to accept eachothers newly expanded experiances and fetishes. Make the MC have have to cheat on his lover in the course of the adventure as he infiltrates his tormentors lives. Let the FMC find out first and have to deal with her lovers cheating, even as she is now cheating. drama!
I dunno, anything except this AVNs, admittedly well drawn, but insepid and tired plot.
"I created out of thin air a 'good man' but mainly a pathetic wimp, paired him with a 'Loyal' goddess who loves him and plans to create her life with him. Then you create out of thin air a big-dicked loser asshole, who quickly finds 'reasons' to hammer away at the poor goddess, and she tosses her relationship into the toilet to become a 1-dimensional enthusiastic cum-dump."
This plot is old, no matter how pretty the pictures. Hey at least this asshole isn't black... not all in on the tired old trope. At this point, The Cuck is dismissable, the Slut is a piece of garbage to be discarded, and the Asshole needs to be shot and left in a ditch. End of story. No character is likable or relatable. Really couldn't care less what happens to them anymore.
Just once it would be amazing if this was not the go to plot for this type of fantasy. I mean seriously, Why not, just once, have the Cuck actually not be a pathetic wimp, but solid athete, smart and built, A good man (with an impressibe package himself), but the Girl finds herself in a blackmail situation, and is leveraged into being somebody elses toy, but has to keep it secret to protect herself and her lover. Unfortunately she finds she loves the rough sex she's forced to engage in; even as she hates her tormentors; even though he actual lover is very satisfing, and the strain of the 2 lives evokes the drama. Make the MC begin an adventure unknowingly puting him on course to expose his lovers tormentors, meanwhile the FMC can be trying to sabotage them from the inside, surrendering to using her body to earn her access to their secrets. Together, from different angles they rescue themselves from the assholes, and our MCs have to figure out how to accept eachothers newly expanded experiances and fetishes. Make the MC have have to cheat on his lover in the course of the adventure as he infiltrates his tormentors lives. Let the FMC find out first and have to deal with her lovers cheating, even as she is now cheating. drama!
I dunno, anything except this AVNs, admittedly well drawn, but insepid and tired plot.
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