Chaoticjustice

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I've always found the element that the two party's in cheating/affair situations getting together as a couple at the end as peculiar and this applies to games and reality , now if it was me and she approached me for a relationship Id of said fuck no am I getting into a relationship with , incase you've forgotten you been cheating with me on your partner , why would I ever get into a relationship with you and run the risk of you cheating on me
 

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I agree
The world is moving toward convenience, and people should move toward convenience too
Criticisms like “Since AI art is easier than hand-drawn art, it’s a negative point” are absolutely unacceptable and weird
But criticisms like “The art isn’t good” can be used, though in this game, I believe the art is really good

Anyway, I wrote a review. Do you read the rating section, or should I copy-paste it here? (In case you’re inclined to give a critique)
Yeah I saw it and also made some comments. You could check another reply from me! Thanks!
 
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In my opinion, adding passengers, coworkers, and neighbors—even if they don’t play a role in the relationships or story—can boost the believability and immersion in the game world. Imagine the MC stepping out in the morning and having a quick chat with a neighbor who drops hints about the FMC and Bull’s relationship, or the MC’s boss showing up as a troublemaker. Yeah, I think these characters could pull the story out of its simplicity a bit. Right now, it feels like we’re in some post-apocalyptic world where only these 3 people are alive. Adding ambient sounds from the office, streets, and outside the house could help with this too

Honestly, I just remembered a Japanese game that only had 4 characters, but with the stuff I mentioned, it managed to avoid feeling too simple. So I agree with you—even with just 4 characters, you can take a game out of that simplicity
Got it, that is truly good suggestion, I will try to add some people. As for sound, I do play some ambient sound, but just few, will add more also if the environment is suitable. Thanks again for the feedback.
 

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So, I'm carrying two signatures of relatively great games but also, currently, dead games. May I inquire for a signature for this game? Maybe one using the main screen of the game (the titjob), the banner from the OP or a new render?
 

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Thanks god this game doesn’t have a kinetic novel tag, so does that mean we’ll face choices? Like between hard NTR and light NTR, or maybe NTS?
Sorry, I might disappoint you.
I'm not sure why the uploader didn't tag it as a Kinetic Novel—I'll ask them to update it.

I had seriously considered including choices and branching paths before.
However, given that the story is told in a Dual POV format, implementing NTS and NTR branches feels a bit tricky.
NTS, in a way, implies that the MC is willing or complicit,
but the Dual POV is meant to show scenes that the MC doesn't witness—so the two approaches somewhat conflict.
That's why I plan to introduce choices in my next project instead.

Also, this is my very first project. I really hope to make something small but polished,
rather than ruin it by being ambitious.
 

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So, I'm carrying two signatures of relatively great games but also, currently, dead games. May I inquire for a signature for this game? Maybe one using the main screen of the game (the titjob), the banner from the OP or a new render?
Hey, no problem at all—it’s honestly my honor, and thank you! I never would've thought of that myself.
But please give me a bit of time to come up with a cool signature, probably 1-2 days. I'll reply to you again once it is done.

Also, I’m really sorry I haven’t used it yet. I did look into it after seeing your post, but I wasn’t sure what size to go with.
It seems like the sizes aren’t very standardized?
 

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Yeah, I’ve always thought allowing players to change names is a nice feature. I assumed it’d be troublesome to implement, but it turns out to be pretty simple — so it’ll be added in the next update.
Hi.. are you on Patreon???
 

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Oh, it’s okay-but can you add different endings? Like, I’m an NTR fan too, but I don’t like bad endings
If you put a happy ending at the very end of the story, that’d be awesome.
At the end of the story, you could give the MC just one choice: based on that, the FMC either stays with him and they live happily ever after, or she stays with the bull and the MC falls into depression and despair.
Actually, I think I can do. And probably I can add a few choices at the last two or three chapters for leading to soft NTR, hard NTR, or NTS eventually. Thanks for the inspiration!
 

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Hey, no problem at all—it’s honestly my honor, and thank you! I never would've thought of that myself.
But please give me a bit of time to come up with a cool signature, probably 1-2 days. I'll reply to you again once it is done.

Also, I’m really sorry I haven’t used it yet. I did look into it after seeing your post, but I wasn’t sure what size to go with.
It seems like the sizes aren’t very standardized?
Take your time mate, we are not in a hurry (as I assume I'm not the only one who will use it). Thanks for taking my request into consideration. As for the size, I don't think so, we are just limited to two.
 

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Chaoticjustice

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Beautiful VN!
And a very elegant style...
A suggestion: If Blake were also much more muscular than Alan, he would be really irresistible to Cristine... Good luck!
Interesting suggestion and I am truly sorry but I can't help myself with this next comment so hopefully you see it as a joke haha

So more muscular eh now would that make him irresistible to Christina or irresistible to you ;)

Sorry I couldn't help myself and I had to say it was the only person that decides what Christina is into is the Dev technically she's not into anything untill the Dev writes it

But like I said I only mean it as a joke and I'm not here to shame anyone
 

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Beautiful VN!
And a very elegant style...
A suggestion: If Blake were also much more muscular than Alan, he would be really irresistible to Cristine... Good luck!
I did try to make Blake more muscular but the face would be not like what I want.
 

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NTR.ai

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That's pretty good, it conveys the storyline at a simple glance, the fact that it's a gif catches the eye and the short teaser might be appealing to people who didn't know about the game. Thanks brother, I'm now waiting with anticipation the next update.
Really happy you liked it! I rushed to learn some After Effects over the past few days to make it—was torn on which style to go with.
This will actually be the splash screen and menu in v0.4.0 too, haha.
 
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