Which scene do you like in the game?


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DaFinker

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It seemed normal when they were in school uniform. They looked quite adult anyway despite that.

I usually write a lot and add translations, but I won't do it now.
Personally, my saves only work from version 18. I downloaded the compressed version.
I don't know about errors, but in some scenes at the beginning of the game, the background in the door or window changes from white to black. This can be easily solved with a regular photo editor.
I'll correct the translation since a lot was added at the beginning of the game and I'll add it. If anyone needs it, here's a link to the files with automatic translation, but not with the edited one.
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I like that animation - the smile does it. Makes her look a bit like the 18 year old girl that she supposedly is, rather than the too serious mid-20s she comes off as so often in the VN. And now I can imagine a voice for her - 1st alto range speaking voice with a youthful lilt.
 

joose

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This game looks good, definitely waiting for it to be finished or near so before I play it, I just hope you keep big bush girl natural and don't shave her down. That would be a crime.
 
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Rex72

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I hope you put the instructions IN the download folder at it is all but impossible to remember them once the game is played later. (I have a backlog of games/novels)
 

DaFinker

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I hope you put the instructions IN the download folder at it is all but impossible to remember them once the game is played later. (I have a backlog of games/novels)
He just needs to quit making retroactive changes. I like this VN, but the constant retroactive change is driving me fucking nuts. And now half of the other mature/half finished VNs I do are also doing the Steam thing and requiring restarts. Even if I can skip most of it, many of them have elements that have to be replayed in a roam/sandbox style. There's a reason I quit doing pure sandbox VNs - they're awful.
 

kansasdude

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one thing that kinda bugged me in any game is referring to someone you grew up with as childhood friend

why not just...friend?

in RL, I don't think I have ever heard someone say..this is my childhood friend..they just say..this is my friend

how do you introduce your friend to someone?
 

DaFinker

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one thing that kinda bugged me in any game is referring to someone you grew up with as childhood friend

why not just...friend?

in RL, I don't think I have ever heard someone say..this is my childhood friend..they just say..this is my friend

how do you introduce your friend to someone?
By their first name, usually. :LOL:

May add the context that we've know each other since youth, college, whatever.
 

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Elsa94, since this was a few versions ago now, does the below warning still apply? It's still on the OP, so if it's no longer needed or useful, it probably should be removed.
WARNING : Please start playing from when Olivia first come to ask for Mc's help again as the points for romance have been changed!
You will not get Lena or both their scenes if you load from the your save file when Lena is asking you out to the bar.
Please start load from when Olivia came into your house!
If it still applies, you might want to get the text adjusted to start with something more like, "WARNING: If you load a save before v0.17, please start playing...."
 

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JJ1960

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one thing that kinda bugged me in any game is referring to someone you grew up with as childhood friend

why not just...friend?

in RL, I don't think I have ever heard someone say..this is my childhood friend..they just say..this is my friend

how do you introduce your friend to someone?
Probably one of two things:

In anime with a male protagonist, the term "childhood friend" is an indication of a female of similar age who he never saw as anything but a friend but now that hormones have kicked he sees her in a different light; a corollary to that is the female friend has always been in love with the protagonist and he was too thick to realize it.

The other common use in AVNs is "childhood friend" is a sister (like "landlady" is actually the mother) to get around sites that ban incest content. That isn't likely in the context of this game.

I think more background on Lena would be good, such as MC and she lived in the same apartments/neighborhood growing up but his family moved away and now he has a chance to reconnect with her again.
 

5mithers

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In the rush to re-render everything without school uniforms a lot of visually jarring bugs/glitches were introduced.

At one point the MC starts interrogating Olivia with a floodlight from the left:
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And then in class, we get to see someone with magic fishnet stockings and thigh-high boots:
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(And the scene darkens. I guess the hallway light switch gremlin was at it again. ;))

I've obviously just started my from-scratch playthrough. I am guessing a lot of this will be fixed in 0.20 or later.

None of this is a deal breaker, just seems like it was rushed in the effort to retrofit things to comply with Steam rules.
 
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