VN - Ren'Py - Nudist College [v0.19] [Elsa]

Just played the beta and I very much enjoy the premise.
Despite the dev not being a native speaker, some humorous scenes are present and translates quite well into a ligther atmosphere that is not only porn-based. This touch, the will to exploit something more than the nudist tag alone (which is quite already quite rare in itself, this one is a good find), is rather promissing for the future. I already like some of these caracters, and I can't simply give less than five stars for Olivia who is as endearing as she looks.

Promising introduction.
The girls look great for the most part.
What I'm asking myself is the setting: the girl are forced to go nudist, I can accept. But then there is the forced private time with Olivia, and if i don't mind the scene, i'm asking myself what is the coherence of this world between this action and the fact that Olivia was against nudist beach at first.

I hope the personality of the girls will remain and that they will not just be "random girls accepting anything from MC because reasons".

Other than that, the game looks promising.

I'll have to admit, the renders carry this game, the plot is okay and the dialogue needs proofreading as mentioned by others, but it's solid enough.
Would've been a 3 star review but as previously mentioned, the renders are pretty great and I'm bumping up the rating to 4 stars because of it

Rating v1.0

I would love to rate this game higher, but... I have to assume that English is not the dev's first language. The text is rife with poor grammar, misspellings, awkward phrases, and stuff that doesn't make sense. This project desperately needs an editor/proofreader. Text is vital for visual novels.

The story starts kind of generic, but the nudism twist is interesting. Honestly, the cliches are fine too: the writing just needs to be fixed.

The visuals are gorgeous, however! Sex acts have looped animations. The renders looked high-quality and beautiful to me. I'm almost tempted to give 4 stars just because of them--and this is coming from someone who *greatly* prefers 2dcg to 3dcg.

I'll be watching this thread. Hopefully the devs get an editor/proofreader because I would happily raise my rating if the writing gets fixed.

Great start to this game the overall premise of the game is amazing a class is forced to go to a nude beach to instill body "positivity" wink wink. The story so far is great does a good job of including a good backstory as well as great graphics and character development. Did I mention the great graphics? Good job dev I look forward to future updates.