Fuck it... Just did English improved versions of the last 2 script files (Episode 15, and 16) which seemed to be by far the worst I've seen in the game with wrong words, missed punctuation, choppy/unnatural/unclear dialogue, etc.
If anyone wants to use them feel free. I did also throw an extra conditional on at the end that will look to see if the Episode_17.rpyc file exists to know whether to end or jump to the start of the next chapter whenever it comes out... so it should have no issue with future versions as long as variables aren't reworked...
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I did look at Episode 14 as well, overall it was significantly better English than the last two. It just had the wrong narrator thing which the dev has still not fixed. There were also a few lines that sounded unnatural or did not make sense if you thought about them. There's actually still one line I can not actually figure out the intent of:
"Her soft butt rubs your dick, making it feel like you are going through a handbook."
I honestly have no idea what this sentence is trying to say... Does someone get intense pleasure from reading handbooks? Or are we supposed to feel that getting what is sort of a buttjob is as boring as reading a handbook? Is it maybe saying this experience is somehow an instructional guide to something? Was it meant to be a comparison to a handjob and the wrong word was used? Are we comparing it to rubbing your dick between the covers of a book (Although why the oddly specific handbook? Handbooks aren't usually leatherbound...usually we are talking paper or plastic covers on a spiral bound or stapled book... And ummm is putting your dick in a book really a thing many people do? Surely you can find something better, more comfortable, and safer to use than a book? I mean not only are you definitely ruining that book, but I'd be terrified of getting a papercut down there...) Seriously, what the hell is this sentence actually trying to convey?
