I'm quite thrilled. Nice Novel so far... but...
-I have one optic complaint: In several Animations there are Bodyparts moving very weird. Like a shoulder moving abnormaly to the Rest of the Body in the second whoring out of Annie (only one example). While she is fucked from behind by the black guy. Look on his shoulders. (in different camera perspectives)
Such animation errors occur more often. You should keep an eye on it. This reduces the Novel experience imho.
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-I have one question: Do you plan to make all Girls big breasted Bimbos, or do you want to give the petite, cute and small Tits Fraction some sugar too?
Because Romy and Stacy are very very cute with their small breasts... especialy Romy.
I don't think massive Boobs would look good on this petite ones.
I'm already a little worried that Katie's already perfect large breasts will become exaggerated balloons, after her plastic surgeon.
Like in other games where the devs have lost all sense of beautiful breasts and gave the girls ugly and absurd proportions like hot air balloons.
(Boobs = balloons and Body = basket)
So please... please don't do something like that. It`s only disgusting and not arousing. And a Novel like this should arouse the Player.
In my opinion, Liza's size is already dangerously near borderline.
Everything bigger no longer looks like a human to me, but like breasts with arms and legs. I have absolutely no idea how anyone could find something like that attractive.
I already love breasts in lots of different shapes and sizes... but there are Limits a dev should not step over.
So please don't overdo it.
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and...
-I have a suggestion: Shaving another Person (like mentioned to Romy) is a very tempting Kink too.
I would suggest, to make Shaving Sessions a small Routine to Romys "Storyline". Maybe in the beginning until she is "transformed".
Ah... and watersports are a little bit under represented in my opinion.^^
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I hope, I could explain my issues clearly with my (so called) "English".