I'm not at all trying to tell you how to make your game. Just saying I'm a possessive type of guy, whether it's a girlfriend or fuckbuddy I don't wanna share. So a scene like that came out of nowhere for me and ruined my experience.
You're game has good potential and nice overall writing, so I'd like to make a suggestion for this thread: It will eliminate 90% of the negative feedback if you do just two things:
- add a swinging+voyeurism tag to this game
- Edit the dev notes to say the mc is in an open relationship with his girls.
I hope this doesn't come off as an attack or anything As I'm sure this will appeal to the guys who like slutty chicks and are cool with sharing their harem. But as you can probably tell I'm not one of them. I only posted that to give people using the search function a heads up on what kind of content they might see if they search ntr.
Anyway, best of luck on making what you want dev.