VN Ren'Py Abandoned Offcuts [v0.3.1] [stencilbits]

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hope we get to play with melissa helen and jane in the next release
 
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so does choosing any girl at the sunset beach scene w/ james actually do anything in this 'demo' or do all paths lead to nina regardless?
 
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What ruins a game is bad writing, not the amount of porn it has... but that's not the point to me.

As I said, it works for the story and I'm enjoying it as it is, but I also think it's important for a game to give the player a choice, or at least the illusion of choice instead of automatically making every decision for you, otherwise you could just write a novel and post it here.

For example, there was enough opportunities to try something with Jane at the cost of upsetting Nina, but a choice was never given and I think you should be able to make choices like that. I know that writing a branching storyline at this level is not an easy task and the dev should not bite more than he can chew, but not every choice should be major story changing choices, it's important to give the player minor choices even if it leads to the same outcome with some extra lines of dialogue, just to give the player the sense he's in control of the situation. To me that's what differentiate a visual novel from a regular novel.
i know i would have chosen jane over nina any day. chosen amy and melissa over her too.
 

meigame

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dig the art style, writing so much better than almost everything else on the site. I could use a little more smut in here but I'm a perv....
 

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so does choosing any girl at the sunset beach scene w/ james actually do anything in this 'demo' or do all paths lead to nina regardless?
It might in later updates. It does not currently. None of the choices in the game currently do anything.
 

DMNDCE

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Damn, I don't usually play VNs, but this is really good! Art style is different and unique, not the same character models as every single other game on here, they have REALISTIC proportions, no breasts bigger than their heads on every character like most games. The story is well written and unique too. It has has some funny bits and characters have actual personality.

The only thing I really want is more Alice content. But then again, shy petite girls are my thing, so maybe that's selfish. One can only hope. Anyways, great work. Glad to finally see something different on this site. Is there a roadmap for release yet? Not a set date clearly, but how often do you plan on updating?
 
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TobiMAH

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so i started this game like a few days ago and damn it's so good
i really like the art style and everything about it
the story is good
but i think you should make more pictures for scenes like 5 or more pictures or less (depends on the scene) anyway it's really good and damn that ending has a really good cliff hanger
well anyway if you could reply then if we expect the next update to be as long as the first one how much time will it take ? or are you planning on making the updates shorter ?
great story and content btw
 
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for the most part this game is good but i wish there were more choices and little less of the whole antagonistic big bro/little sis dynamic between mc/nina but maybe that's just me. it kinda got old pretty fast and taken to the extreme for me pretty quick too. also the bj scenes especially the girls faces/mouths need work but like i said this game was def a breath of fresh air and the art/graphs/whatever reminded me of a few games like rumble roses (i think) breath of the wild, and a few others whos names escape me at the moment. looking forward to the next release and being able to make more choices and also hopefully get to play w/ amy, melissa, helen (my fav even tho she has my grandma's name lol) and jane.
 
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It might in later updates. It does not currently. None of the choices in the game currently do anything.
eh there are a few that have a direct impact on the next scenes especially the life/death one. if you choose to rest the game ends right there but if not the story goes on for another like 20 min.
 

SavetheDiesel

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The first 10 minutes i played this game i was way sceptical, to much talking, new kind of art that didnt apeal to me.
10 mins later and im HOOKED, i cant explain it, one just gets sucked in and cant stop playing. i cant stop!! :heartcoveredeyes:

Theres just something about Nina, damn i wished i shared a house with her. And i want Alice in it to. And the whole thing took a turn when i saw Melissas ass under the schoolgirl skirt with g-string and lingerie holder wich is JUST WHAT DADDY LIKES TO SEE!!!!:evilsmile::evilsmile::heartcoveredeyes::eek:penedeyewink::eek:penedeyewink:
 

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Overview:
Offcuts is an adult visual novel about a young man returning to his home town after living elsewhere for a few years. While adapting to his new life he encounters both new people and old acquaintances he previously had to leave behind. And well… Some people you just can’t get rid off no matter what happens - you can only hope that they follow you out of affection and not because they want to break your legs. How the story progresses and ends will be up to you, the player.
Updated: 20 May 2018
Developer website: - -
Censorship: None
Version: 0.1
OS: Mac and Windows
Language: English
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Yo you should really add this to one of the preview images, it is one of the best, if not the best, image I have seen so far.
 
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