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HTML Office Queen [v2.0] [Lady Developer]
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I would love to do that but most of the reviews were about, please add more choices, see the review section, that's why I thought of remake and don't worry the game will not let you bore for sure. Just believe please.Remake? Why would you do that? When the games still in progress? I like it already the way as it is? This is story about her not about choice this, choice that. Too many choice sometimes also make this kind real porn games became boring? Too many clicks? Go here, go there but there are no content in it. or you just don't like the choice so you not pick that choice so and you reach the end story. At the end, the games abandoned and forgotten. My suggestion is finish this games and make sequel from this games. First games character meets new character from new games and improvise from your first games. Well it's up to you man, just saying your games never missed looking forward each day.
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- Jun 12, 2021
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Usually a remake is an improvement of the finished product.
You obviously don’t have a finished product, then what’s the point of the remake?
I'd rather make smaller, targeted improvements. As a small example.
- You have the opportunity to move around the city. Add events for this world and make it a full part of your game.
The best advice is to plan ahead what you want to do.
So that in the future you don’t have to correct your mistakes under the guise of a remake.
- Jun 12, 2021
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As for encouraging the developer, everything is simple.
- New developer and already have a patreon? This means preparing to be responsible to the players.
- New developer and no Patreon? This means that the developer understands that he is not ready to bear responsibility to the players and is gaining development experience.
I am ready to forgive all the mistakes of the 2nd option, because the developer is honest and does not try to make money on idiots than the 1st option.
- Nov 16, 2019
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I found this game is getting worse.
I like corruption games, but here it seems too much, too quickly, plus the sex scenes are not always well represented, no tension no eroticism. Just s put inside, come, go. It doesn't feel a corruption path.
But in defence of this game, I like the gameplay that is quite smooth, no grind, good attempt of story telling, without losing the player among hundreds of clicks and locations
I like corruption games, but here it seems too much, too quickly, plus the sex scenes are not always well represented, no tension no eroticism. Just s put inside, come, go. It doesn't feel a corruption path.
But in defence of this game, I like the gameplay that is quite smooth, no grind, good attempt of story telling, without losing the player among hundreds of clicks and locations
- Jun 12, 2021
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By the way, I always caught myself thinking when I played. That there is simply route A and B. There is no feeling that you have made any choice so that it leads you to route A or B.
I think you can't play my new game.
There is a small grind and enough characters. 
- Apr 21, 2019
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It's good as it is but since you were asking for feedbacks I think it can have more rape path. I added you on discord to more detailed feedbacks
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6 cock, 7 cock, 8 cock, Train! ...she like.... cum, and it go to her brain.....
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Let me just ask one thing, in this remake, will it be a clickfest/grindfest sandbox, or just adding options to explore a few routes without being stuck in one? I mean, I wish you luck with your game anyway but I am not going to play a grindfest if that is the case.
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Be careful. Players get frustrated if you stop a game and do a full remake. They feel like they're just going back over the same old stuff again.
Instead of a full remake it might be best to have a release or two focused on improving existing content unless you think your game is in such a bad state that it's just not feasible. For example, in my game I devoted one update mostly to improving existing content. I rewrote nearly all of the opening parts of my game and made it more guided because players felt lost in my sandbox and improved the "feel" of the game, changed my links to be more descriptive, etc.
As far as my recommendations for improvements, if you want them:
1) The writing needs work. A lot of it. I think English is probably your second language and it makes the writing stiff. The sex scenes could probably use more description and more lead up as well.
An example from the game:
The very first sex scene you can have with James:
She takes James's trousers off and starts to suck him off.
Maybe change it to something like:
With a naughty grin she leans over and slowly unbuttons James's pajama bottoms. She slides her hand inside and grasps his soft cock. She bites her lip and leans over, trailing her tongue along the bottom of the shaft until it teases over the glans, delighting in how it rapidly hardens. She slowly parts her moist lips and slides his now hard shaft into her mouth as James moans with pleasure.
2) I think you're in a bit of a hurry to get to the good stuff. If that's what you want, that's cool but I think most players enjoy more buildup in corruption games. It's a hard line to walk because you don't want to drag it out too much but moving too fast makes it more of a "she's just a slut" game than a corruption game.
3) Choices. Players want choices. This can be difficult to do correctly though since too many choices can make the game grow hugely complex and bog down development. Too few and players will be like "why bother?" In my game I give choices for each sexual partner, basically yes/no. I also give choices in how the character approaches sexual situations most of the time. Do they react more submissively, are they a bit more slutty, etc. This can be a lot of extra work though.
If you remake it, we gonna have to sit through more tiny updates of old content to get back to current? And also if you do you should make it a renpy instead of HTML but that's just my opinion.
I really like your game and I think a remake wouldn't be THAT bad. In the actual state it's pretty much a linear game [and don't get me wrong, I love games like that, but if you want to farm patrons you'll have to give them choices), I don't feel like the actual choices really matter at all and some stats are kinda useless (like the cuckquean trait... It's in the game for quite a while, but James & Sophia never do anything, and that's my favorite subplot of the game).
TBH, I think you should filter what is actually good criticism and what is not worth making. I >REALLY< like HTML games and yours is great, please, if you do a remake, do not change to Ren'py or QSP... HTML is perfect.
Also some advice:
- Keep the characters.
- I think the kinks are really good (and very few with a cuckquean FMC, you should definitely keep that). If you want to expand, add more, but don't remove any of the existing;
- Don't push yourself, take your time
//Sorry for the bad english, english is not my first language
TBH, I think you should filter what is actually good criticism and what is not worth making. I >REALLY< like HTML games and yours is great, please, if you do a remake, do not change to Ren'py or QSP... HTML is perfect.
Also some advice:
- Keep the characters.
- I think the kinks are really good (and very few with a cuckquean FMC, you should definitely keep that). If you want to expand, add more, but don't remove any of the existing;
- Don't push yourself, take your time
//Sorry for the bad english, english is not my first language
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Just a note I was playing my "Prude" playthrough and I didn't flash the shopkeeper but when I chose cry in the shower the text line reacts as if I did, here's the link to the scene.
EDIT: After this scene it's impossible to reject any advances and you just become a slut so never mind I guess
EDIT: After this scene it's impossible to reject any advances and you just become a slut so never mind I guess
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- Sep 4, 2017
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So what paths are there and how do i select them? Would be nice if it would be more clear on that. Is there any reason i should not just be a slut all the time, does trying to be conservative and not a slut lead to non-con or forced corruption events for example?
I mean if i play prude, do i get any additional sexual content or does it just mean i get less of everything? Or is it there just in case someone is not into certain stuff?
What i am into is non-con, how do i get most of that?
I mean if i play prude, do i get any additional sexual content or does it just mean i get less of everything? Or is it there just in case someone is not into certain stuff?
What i am into is non-con, how do i get most of that?
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no it will not have too much grind, so don't worry the game will not bore you for sure
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