VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Oh Daddy [P2 v1.0 Final] [Nightaku]

For the life of me, i can't figure how people could rate this decently.
First things off the bat, the "writing"... It's bad. To a point where it just hurts. Even with the patch someone uploaded, it's till so incredibly frustrating to read. The next thing is worldbuilding, story and backstory. Ore more the lack of said things. Because they basically don't exist. That little we got in said regards is just a joke, a bad one at that, too.

We continue with that all 'lewd-scenes' are locked as far as i can tell.
Like literally paywalled. Thats.. What the fuck is that? We basically get a bad written demo without any action and with only boring, stretchy content that you are forced to skip, first time, cuz' it's so terrible.

i wish i could rate with 0 out of 5.

Edit:
Please, please do me a favor. Read the 5/5 ratings.
They tell you about amazing renders, perfect models and the awesome personality of a girl, that .. Literally changes from mentally retarded to sexual genius on a whim... If those aren't bought .. Or talkin' about a completely different game, i'm not sure what to think anymore.

For Oh Daddy to be improved you'd have to restart it from the beginning with a writer behind the wheel. As is, it's an absolute slog. The fact that this is sorted under VN is egregious. Horrible story structure, zero conflict, poor dialogue, a sophomoric understanding of human sexuality and desire, and not an ounce of suspense. Even if you were to download this purely to mash your way through it for the CG, you'd get carpal tunnel. Each scene takes ages as every character drones on and on and on and on and on and on and
Some people enjoy games with borderline-too-young characters, whatever. You could even argue that there's a ton of potential with that setup. At least write them consistently.... One second she talks like a primary school girl and the next she's more sexually confident than the majority of women. Your brain rots trying to follow the "story". It's pure, masturbatory fantasy. Even if the kinks are for you, there are better VN's and games that exist.

Story and character building is pretty much non-existent. There's little to no build-up to the sex scenes, so no sexual tension or anything typical of incest taboo. Writing is pretty mediocre. Characters look like lolis but act and talk like adults so not sure what the point is. Choices boil down to "do you want to see a sexy scene or not" so it might as well be kinetic. Renders are decent but the animations are very "janky" and also unskippable. Everything about this just feels rushed.

Great character definition, high quality graphic renders, a bit linear, but that doesn't take away from the work that can be seen. I hope they continue in this linear, and I think it will become a top 10 game.

Just woooooooow
What a game, the animations the characters, the details, all super nice.
The story is like ok nothing much, at least for now, it was fine.
I really hope the future for this game is strong and all the best

Perfect renderings, well designed characters. The story so far is going very well, if they are fixing the English translation as they say it would be the best. So I leave my 5 stars for them to continue on this path.

Very good game, with very sexy models and the daughter is amazing, love her personality. A bit bland characters overall maybe, they don't have much depth but the dialogue is surprisingly good and feels kind of realistic(in that the parents actually act a bit like parents and not just like they are friends like in most games).

Needs a bit more choices too, and maybe some tweaks here and there and more content, but overall, a great game so far, and 8/10 from me.

Wow this game is amazing! From start to finish the buildup and also the character designs and dialogue is top notch! I highly recommend this game wow you will not be disappointed! 5/5 stars keep up the good work DEV!

As a cheap Loli porn fantasy is decent, that girl look hot as hell, Cringy uncanny valley also, but hot, cant deny that. Renders are good also, but deformations and stuff is still the same, nothing remarkable.

And i would even consider giving an average rating but the final available scene for 0.3 is a dream, and at the apce its going that scene makes kind of sense, even if it didnt happen in this update i would definetly happen in the next one as a first or second scene, so its kinf od pointless maing that scene a dream.

Still, devs subverting expectations is something that triggers me inmensely so thats why i have to keep it at 2.

Good potential, as one of those easy straight forward horny loli games, but since there is no character development and the game now is short, its just poor.

Like it so far. I am amazed at how people can not separate fiction from reality. They can make a movie with child prostition or a book dealing with Tween masturbation, but have a problem with a fictional character. People are just insane I guess. Keep up the work.

this is a great game and has nice animations. the character models are cute. I look forward to the next updates for this gem. The story is also very good. The whole environment feels realistic. So good job all around and thank you for the developers.

This was a hard review to write. I'll start with the pros.

Pros:

- Game looks good. Renders are nice, characters look very good.
- Situations can be kinda fun?

Cons:

- Story is kinda non existent at this time, but it is early on.
- The writing is not great, kinda confusing at some points, and the English isn't very good, also confusing at some points. Why does the Daughter call you Daddy sometimes and then your name at other times?

It's still earlier in this games development and there is quite a lot to like so far, mainly in the renders and the way the daughter looks. There's plenty of potential for a good game somewhere in there but the developer needs to get the writing and language issues under control. The story also jumps quite a bit, she does gymnastics for like 5 frames and that's supposed to take up hours of time? Hard to follow a little.

With a little more polish on the story, and some proofreading this game has the potential to be good. The renders are good and the daughter is very cute. some solid foundations to build on. Will definitely check this one out after another update and when some of the issues are ironed out.

Great renderings, good story, excellent character designs. I love this creator and I've been following him for months on Pixiv and he has an incredible imagination. I hope he keeps it up. I even say it's much better than my Rebel project.

This game is exactly what I'm looking for. The daughter is the perverted one, instead of the run-of-the-mill dad trying to seduce his daughter, and the animations are stellar for an early release. I'm expecting improved animations as the game develops (which it doesn't even need, this is just a benefit). As long as this game continues to be developed properly and updates come out often enough, then this game will be top 5 on the entire website. Excited for the future!

I'm a little conflicted while writing this review. I really like the premise of the story and most of the renders look amazing, but the rest of the game is really bad.

I never understood how developers can spend days, weeks, or even months on creating the most beautiful graphics, but they can't be bothered to spend one or two days on fixing the dialogue. The text is full of typos and grammatical errors. I'd suggest an English proofreader, but even a simple spell checker would fix most of these mistakes.

The story is, well.... 'there'. It's barely sufficient to support the renders and the pacing is much too fast to understand what's happening. One moment the story is about a normal dad with his cute daughter, a few seconds later she's a complete nympho and you're some kind of horny sugar daddy. The characters don't have a personality at all and it seems like the dev doesn't have an idea about where the story's heading either.

Lastly, the game is still full of bugs. I encountered 4 or 5 critical errors, including one at the end of the game that made it impossible to see the 2nd lewd scene. The animations look (mostly) good, but they're very short and they don't loop.

And yet, despite these negatives, I'm still going to keep an eye on this game. The model of the daughter looks amazing and the game definitely has potential. I just really hope that the dev will tackle most of these flaws because at this moment the game isn't very enjoyable.

I'm changing my review, I feel disappointed by this. The dialogue is really rushed and barren, there's no detail in the story, and there is no character building with the characters. It's basically another 'Father fucks daughter after a few days of being together' type of game

A somewhat different approach to the DMD genre, in that the instigator is reversed.

Good renders that avoid looking like some of the most common ones, and an interesting enough setting (so far, review on 0.2)


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General scenario is that a daughter of unspecified age (I'm surprised more games don't take that approach) is really really into her dad, and has a few weeks at a vacation to make her move... although it's not entirely clear the final endpoint for her is.

There's a third as yet unseen character, so it'll be interesting how far this one takes the corruption aspect.