Version 0,4 of Oh! Daddy:
Story: I'll be honest, I'm not impressed by the story. It's a straightforward plot with a father who finds himself alone with his daughter and suddenly finds himself attracted to her. a very standard plot written in an okay style. Nothing really 'happens'
Characterization: The characters suffer from a "tell and not show". We constantly hear how the father allows everything, how the girl is a good girl but also a witch and how the mother is strict, but we don't really 'see' a lot. things just kinda 'happen'. Most characterization comes from the girl who is sometimes incredibly flirty, sometimes acts like a child and sometimes like an adolescent. It's hard to immerse myself or feel for the character if I can't really create a mental image of her. In addition, she is very clearly designed as a loli - which can be the developers choice - but then let her act that way. Either make her an adolescent with a young adult design or a child with a loli design. But not a loli design with three wildly differing personalities.
Art: That's simply amazing. Hands down one of the most beautifully made games. The attention to detail, clothing, surroundings and sensuality is amazing. The animation as well is just... crazy good.
Verdict: 2/5, maybe let the story be reviewed or even written by someone else? because that art style combined with some excellent story writing would be incredible
Story: I'll be honest, I'm not impressed by the story. It's a straightforward plot with a father who finds himself alone with his daughter and suddenly finds himself attracted to her. a very standard plot written in an okay style. Nothing really 'happens'
Characterization: The characters suffer from a "tell and not show". We constantly hear how the father allows everything, how the girl is a good girl but also a witch and how the mother is strict, but we don't really 'see' a lot. things just kinda 'happen'. Most characterization comes from the girl who is sometimes incredibly flirty, sometimes acts like a child and sometimes like an adolescent. It's hard to immerse myself or feel for the character if I can't really create a mental image of her. In addition, she is very clearly designed as a loli - which can be the developers choice - but then let her act that way. Either make her an adolescent with a young adult design or a child with a loli design. But not a loli design with three wildly differing personalities.
Art: That's simply amazing. Hands down one of the most beautifully made games. The attention to detail, clothing, surroundings and sensuality is amazing. The animation as well is just... crazy good.
Verdict: 2/5, maybe let the story be reviewed or even written by someone else? because that art style combined with some excellent story writing would be incredible