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Aside from a massive overload of grammatical errors this novel is actually really well written, and it strikes a good balance between engaging narrative/story and witty banter/dialogue. The characters personalities and looks are varied and interesting, though it there seems to be a bit of overweight in the massive titties catagory. The pacing and scene setups can be a bit weird at times, like when two random thugs just stroll into a resturant and starts harassing the piano player and mc + buddy just sits a lets it get way out of hand before getting the choice to step in. Also the time jumps are very annoying and don't really make sense. As in having fairly detailed days with budding relationships and then just take a two week time jump with no explanation whatsoever of what happens in that time, like as if the characters have no interactions in a two week period even though some of them live together. Add to that the girl who spent the night cause her home was not safe cause of a broken window and then you basicly hear nothing about her until at the end of the update where you find out her window still has not been fixed and therefore invite her to live with you, to wondering wtf was she then doing for the past 15-20 days and now you basicly call her your girlfriend is just incredibly weird pacing. A personal note is changing Olivia's hair from cute braids to old woman look to somewhat decent at end does her no favors in my opinion. MC is also a bit of a paradox, switching back and forth between super confident take charge alpha and shy awkward teenage virgin boy and then suddenly dry responsible coolheaded mature laidback dude, makes him seem a bit manic and crazy to be honest and wtf is up with his eyebrows. Anyways after this rant mostly about the negative aspects I will say that this was all in all a fun read and i'm looking forward to further updates to see where this project goes. With some polish and fleshing out this novel can become really good, and even as it is it is still enjoyable and worth a read
I have to say that Jake Paul question was kind of funny when you clicked true and it kicks you out of the game.
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Stop trying to shove in Poly and Harem as one thing. You say "peace" but you mislead instead, stop that.
The "MC being part of a whole" makes it so that it is truly not about him. But you wanting all his girls be into each other. You got it reversed mate.
You're free to look for other Polyamory games in here.
Also Dev Ratsu Hanamura, you need to learn the disntictions between Polyamory and Harem. Other Devs may say that their game is a Harem but it really isn't, its often Polyamory in disguise.
If you want to make Kuroha and Elena a couple, then ok cool. However, now I lost interest to them as well.
Are they avoidable or skippable? If the LIs themselves are not interested in the MC, and they're in a committed relationship already then I'm more inclined to avoid them, and to not include them in the harem.
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Hmmm... mate...
What part about this being MY INTERESTS escapes you? Let's also point out that this conversation wasn't "EXACTLY" about this game per se, but, in more broad terms, about the structure of an Harem.
You, and several others, use the classical definition of a stratified structure, with the MC in a pinnacle, and the whole bevy of female participants focused SOLELY on him. That, for whatever reason appeals to your masculinity. Because that is the structure that alleviates the feelings of insecurity and eliminates any possibility of comparison and fear of being found lacking. After all, if the women have nothing else to compare you with, whatever you do, must be the BEST.
I, and many others, follow a more modern structure, one where there's no pinnacle, everyone is focused on everyone else, and on their pleasure. Happy people make happy. This appeals to my masculinity, one not based on competition, on supremacy, but on cooperation and community. On loving and being loved, rather than own and being dominant. I don't fear comparisons because they are meaningless. Pleasure is pleasure. I give and I receive. They give and they receive. What matters from where it comes if in the end, everyone is involved?
What we have here is a rather basic difference in the way that we are. I am not less of a man because I want my women to love each other TOO. You, however, seem to feel that every second not spent in mindless adoration of you, is a loss.
This, can't be reconciled, in my opinion, we will always be different and think differently. So, let's agree that we are both right, do what pleases US the most, and ignore the other. OK?
And yes... I will always sign out with:
Peace
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I'm absolutely for polyamory between the Harem girls as long as its players choice. In facts thats the exclusive route i play in all games if available. But could you stop straw-manning Harem fans with stuff they never said just because you have a problem or dislike for real Harems?
that can turned around pretty easy you are just okay with them being with each other because you relish in the feeling that they get something out of the relationship you never could provide. Also your insecure enough that you are unable to make clear boundaries and follow trough with them once they get broken so you gaslight your self that your okay with it instead of breaking up with the girl(s) in question.
its something you do constantly insinuating or projecting shit into a kink the other person never said. It's plain old kink shaming because you see it different. Keep to why you like it.