sexypeanut
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Aside from a massive overload of grammatical errors this novel is actually really well written, and it strikes a good balance between engaging narrative/story and witty banter/dialogue. The characters personalities and looks are varied and interesting, though it there seems to be a bit of overweight in the massive titties catagory. The pacing and scene setups can be a bit weird at times, like when two random thugs just stroll into a resturant and starts harassing the piano player and mc + buddy just sits a lets it get way out of hand before getting the choice to step in. Also the time jumps are very annoying and don't really make sense. As in having fairly detailed days with budding relationships and then just take a two week time jump with no explanation whatsoever of what happens in that time, like as if the characters have no interactions in a two week period even though some of them live together. Add to that the girl who spent the night cause her home was not safe cause of a broken window and then you basicly hear nothing about her until at the end of the update where you find out her window still has not been fixed and therefore invite her to live with you, to wondering wtf was she then doing for the past 15-20 days and now you basicly call her your girlfriend is just incredibly weird pacing. A personal note is changing Olivia's hair from cute braids to old woman look to somewhat decent at end does her no favors in my opinion. MC is also a bit of a paradox, switching back and forth between super confident take charge alpha and shy awkward teenage virgin boy and then suddenly dry responsible coolheaded mature laidback dude, makes him seem a bit manic and crazy to be honest and wtf is up with his eyebrows. Anyways after this rant mostly about the negative aspects I will say that this was all in all a fun read and i'm looking forward to further updates to see where this project goes. With some polish and fleshing out this novel can become really good, and even as it is it is still enjoyable and worth a read
I have to say that Jake Paul question was kind of funny when you clicked true and it kicks you out of the game.
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My original reply to this got deleted so to answer you again:
It's mostly a college themed game like others, but set in a technologically advanced future. There's a few teases here and there with the MC having some sort of superhuman abilities that occasionally showcase themselves in a few scenes, and some mysterious people interested in him assumedly because of it. Also his rich and genius uncle who took him in is involved in one way or another. Like 90% of the game is your pretty typical mundane events centered around college/the club you join/date-style events with girls.
Why Elena and Kuroha are love interests if they already are a lesbo couple? I completely lost my interest for those two, i hope they wont be forced!
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One of them is bisexual, and polyamory and polygamy are both legal. Could be that she dates both MC and her girlfriend at the same time.
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why wouldnt anybody jump at the chance to be a walking dildo for a lesbian couple.
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I don't know what to say about Lucia...that ending makes me wants to avoid her just like the lesbian couple
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i probably get the shit kicked in again, but women developing/writing Harem games is mostly shit (just to make it clear I'm not talking about the Artistic or craftsmanship aspect).
They work different than dudes and simply dont understand how we tick or do simply not care to understand. Things like that preexisting lesbian relationship or a family incest harem game where the mother gets treated like a dog and chained up in a sex dungeon by a random NPC all while shes lusting for his dick for a funny joke scene. They simply dont see whats wrong about that.
They work different than dudes and simply dont understand how we tick or do simply not care to understand. Things like that preexisting lesbian relationship or a family incest harem game where the mother gets treated like a dog and chained up in a sex dungeon by a random NPC all while shes lusting for his dick for a funny joke scene. They simply dont see whats wrong about that.
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Yeah, dunno about this update.
No Clara, the only good was Isabella and overall way too much about that school club, which just doesn't interests me.
As for the LI's, so far, i'm really only interested in Clara and Isabella, maybe Serah.
Olivia is too hyper and annoying most of the time.
Emilia kinda cute...but more like a mascot, not really interested in her as a LI.
Ava hell no (maybe if we can train her as a pet).
Kuroha - I liked her
Elena - Was like, yay finally a hot redhead, 1min later, she's in a lesbian relationship --> Elena/Kuroha on the ignore list.
Lucia - I was not really interested in so far, but she managed to make me want to avoid her at all costs at the end of this update.
No Clara, the only good was Isabella and overall way too much about that school club, which just doesn't interests me.
As for the LI's, so far, i'm really only interested in Clara and Isabella, maybe Serah.
Olivia is too hyper and annoying most of the time.
Emilia kinda cute...but more like a mascot, not really interested in her as a LI.
Ava hell no (maybe if we can train her as a pet).
Kuroha - I liked her
Elena - Was like, yay finally a hot redhead, 1min later, she's in a lesbian relationship --> Elena/Kuroha on the ignore list.
Lucia - I was not really interested in so far, but she managed to make me want to avoid her at all costs at the end of this update.
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Well, I have it right here. The latest new playable version reveals a few ... interesting things.
But I feel like it is too short.
I have been rendering the latter part of the storyline for 0.3 because I need to finish the animation for [REDACTED], which has three animations ready and just requires a little (okay, a lot) adjustment.
So if you guys wanna peak a bit into the storyline, who is Aurelien running away from?
I can definitely finalize the first part of the game to release.
But be warned, it is only 10-15 minutes worth of gameplay. The rest will come later with 0.2.5 version.
I am doing my best to juggle between rendering and scripting and animating and life and work and fuc- ahem personal issues.
So I will do my best to keep you guys posted.
Until then,
Guess who is wearing the maid outfit
Love yall,
Hana and the omiSt team