baconsmoke
First thing I want to say is I really like your writing. I began played and was immediately drown into your world. Characters are behaving like real people, there's interesting story, your writing style has an emotional response from me. Please continue making your game, you're awesome at this.
What is really strange for me is a girl named Misha. You see, it's a cute name from Mikhail in Russian (and folk's name for a bear but that's not the case here). So it's a male name. In Russian Misha can only be applied to males (unlike Sasha or Zhenya), Mikhail has no female version (like Mikayla in Spain) and when you see a girl that is called Misha... it's like Lana Wachowski became Larry again. Not a comfortable feeling. At all.