Ren'Py Abandoned On the Hunt [v1.6] [On the hunt]

[kileos123]

Hello.

The samples made me come and the result is fun but repetitive.

The worldbuilding is limited but fitting.
The characters are few and could be developped better.
The plot is simple and easy to follow.
The photos are well chosen but some are blurred so be careful.

The summoning to another world vibes is nice though we don't have to fight against an overlord but girls.

The fight system is easy but bugged :
An error appear if we want to use an item;
When we want to use a skill, we're asked to equip it :
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The skill system needs more explainations, particularly on how to equip them.
It's impossible to equip a magic skill, so we can't use them in a fight.

The same with the traveling merchant : the different uses (temporary trait increase, portable items...).
How is it possible for the same potion to have have different costs since the effects are identical?
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Also, it's useless to repeat each encounter the family history behind his choice for business. He shoud also keep the same avatar.

During their introduction, some bro have introduced themselves with their first name. So we should use them when we speak to them instead of "bro" (like this, we may think they are all called "bro").

There are spelling errors left.

You said you don't want to add gay content (I'm already glad you decided to have other male characters) but it's a little sad that their only purpose is being the princess needing to be saved.
Also, we should rest at the house after each battle to recover (health and pleasure).
You should choose another default name for the mc ("player" is strange and I don't want to be X again...).

Good continuation.

Thanks for the honest and detailed review. I appears I jumped the gun by releasing way too early. The bros have been reworked into their own characters and most of the combat bugs mentioned should be fixed. There was also a bug that made it impossible to equip skills as the button changes from 'unlock' to 'equip', which is also fixed. A cleaner version will soon be available as well as bringing a few new pictures, hunt events and newer bromance events.

And for Inppo, I have already played and love moster girl dreams and I know the sexual writing for now is quite flat. This is something I will try and fix when the 'bones' of the game are sturdy.

Thanks for the replies, I am always watching.

 

[Sural Argonus]

The whole "Bro" thing turns me off. It reminds me of this piece of shit.



Vince Russo says "Bro" almost every other word...

I usually don't get into Real Porn games, because most people use the same sets...and immersion/consistency takes a hit.

However I will give it a fair shake.

 

[PCPrincipalBro]

Interested to see the android version

 

[kileos123]

I don't use sets, I download high quality videos (1080p is the target, anything worse leads to smaller images) go through them, screen shot what I want and use that.

I will release an android version next time, didn't know I could do that but now I do.

 

[kileos123]

Alright, next update is up. New images, bro changes and the game works! Probably.
Also, couldn't make an android version. Said I didn't have a JDK or something, downloaded the file it sent me to, installed it, still says I don't have it, spend some time trying to fix it then give up. Will try to figure it out before next update, sorry PCPrinciplebro and Brocken.

 

[redrdrsbro2]

Hey guys, new to posting here. I'm the developer of this renpy game, been a lurker on this site for a long time and for the last half year I have been making games in renpy and twine in my free time. This is the first of those games that i'm sharing online and i'm quite excited what this game might bring. I've made the game as easy as possible to add new content to, meaning updates will be quite frequent.

lots of potential nice work

 

[Noirroc]

Funny game, if you managed looping gifs or videos for some of the actions that would look great!

Still a few code bugs when buying health potions and if you choose the fuck option for Amy at the end and last a certain period another code error happens. keep up the good work bro

 

[Elf Truck]

This has potential, screenshots from videos instead of pictures is odd, but if the quality is good then I guess it works. The problem is the random "video uploaded to" watermarks and site names in some of them, it's distracting. Maybe there is a source without them? One picture has a black bar in the bottom, that could be cut without losing anything. Also, many pictures don't quite cover the whole screen vertically, there is a small part of the background sticking out in the top.

 

[Deleted member 421975]

Nice game. When we will get new enemies?And how often do you plan to update the game?

 

[kileos123]

For elf truck, I like when the images are 1920 x 1080 resolution so that I can square the image and allow the forest background location to show just as an aesthetic thing. The smaller images are due to a lower resolution video which I use when there is no better alternative. I have an xvideos premium account, which is where I source my images, and some videos just don't have a high enough resulotion for what I'm looking for. Now because i'm not just looking for sex, but soft core porn stuff like the sexy strike images, not every videos has what i'm looking for, and because I want to keep the same actor for Amy I settle for the lower resolution and smaller picture.
Since this is distracting, I have bad news. The next enemy, Daisy staring Dillion Harper, I had already saved and sorted all her images 2 days ago so it was ready for the next update, but most of the videos are in 720p. Not good, I realize now, as most of those images are going to be too small. Yikers.
For Terrana, expect the next enemy to be available within the week. I'm not quite sure what my release schedule will look like in a few weeks but right now, pretty frequent, like 1-2 times every 2 weeks.

 

[Deleted member 421975]

Better use 720p videos (file size saving) And keep it up. I suggest you to do weekly updates /or monthly. If weekly do it every sunday for example for monthly every last day of the month.Thanks for your work

 

[kileos123]

Funny game, if you managed looping gifs or videos for some of the actions that would look great!

Still a few code bugs when buying health potions and if you choose the fuck option for Amy at the end and last a certain period another code error happens. keep up the good work bro

Fixed and fixed, thanks for the report Noirroc.
edit:
Also, gifs and videos are planned and implementation "should" be easier down the line thanks to a clever back end image showing thingie. But for now images are quicker for releases.

 

[kileos123]

Good news! Most of Lilly's' images were good to use and she is well on her way to the next update. Just got to do... all the other coding for her. She will be done by tomorrow but at the same time I want to revamp some Amy stuff and add more traits, skills, magic, bro events and ect and also ect. The update will almost Guaranteed to be out by this Wednesday at the latest.

 

[kileos123]

Question: As the owner of the thread is there a way I can have my updates come up in latest updates or do I have to go to the game requests forum and contact an admin again?

 

[Ottlivia]

Add Bella Rolland

 

[kileos123]

Good news! Figured out the android version and it will be available with the next update.

 

[kileos123]

New update is up!

 

[Oliz82]

Hello.

I tried the new version but there's a bug, even more present in the medium difficulty :

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Though we can ignore it each time, it occurs too much to be a pleasant play.

Some remarks from what I could see :
If we dodge the pink smoke, the image isn't found and we stay in the forest :

When we hunt Amy, we can stumble on her trying to give Francis a blowjob. But after chasing her, he is called "Stranger" or "Bro" though we already who he is :


During the fox conversation with Kevin, there are 2 sentences that are missing :


After the first night and the beautiful scene with Alistar about the stars, the day cycle seems broken since, when we wake up, we can already end it :

And after one click :

Also, enchanted and entranced level 1 seems to last on many days (if we can't trigger the fox event, we're unable to resist Amy anymore...).
The skills, even if equiped, doesn't appear while fighting. Also, once equiped on a slot in the skill tree, the skill should be tagged "equiped" and not "equip" like it wasn't done to prevent any confusion.

Thanks for adding a default name.

The same with the traveling merchant : the different uses (temporary trait increase, portable items...).
How is it possible for the same potion to have have different costs since the effects are identical?
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Do you have an answer to that since it's still there? Not being able to know the use of an item and the difference between 2 potions at different costs (why would I spend more money if it's the same one?) isn't practical/convenient.

You've added more spelling errors with the new events without correcting those that were already present (not hindering the comprehension but it's too noticeable).

Good continuation.

 

[kileos123]

Hello.

I tried the new version but there's a bug, even more present in the medium difficulty :

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Though we can ignore it each time, it occurs too much to be a pleasant play.

Some remarks from what I could see :
If we dodge the pink smoke, the image isn't found and we stay in the forest :
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When we hunt Amy, we can stumble on her trying to give Francis a blowjob. But after chasing her, he is called "Stranger" or "Bro" though we already who he is :
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During the fox conversation with Kevin, there are 2 sentences that are missing :
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After the first night and the beautiful scene with Alistar about the stars, the day cycle seems broken since, when we wake up, we can already end it :
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And after one click :
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Also, enchanted and entranced level 1 seems to last on many days (if we can't trigger the fox event, we're unable to resist Amy anymore...).
The skills, even if equiped, doesn't appear while fighting. Also, once equiped on a slot in the skill tree, the skill should be tagged "equiped" and not "equip" like it wasn't done to prevent any confusion.

Thanks for adding a default name.


Do you have an answer to that since it's still there? Not being able to know the use of an item and the difference between 2 potions at different costs (why would I spend more money if it's the same one?) isn't practical/convenient.

You've added more spelling errors with the new events without correcting those that were already present (not hindering the comprehension but it's too noticeable).

Good continuation.

First, thanks again for the honest and detailed review. From top to bottom...

Fixed the bug by re-making my lists, blah blah, splicing is annoying, blah blah blah, is fixed now.

The show image was incorrectly named, fixed.

Missed those stranger and bro dialogs when I went back and changed them all to Francis, fixed.

Dialog not missing, was making an awkward silence, has been changed to better reflect that.

Not broken just very short and sudden, has been changed to better reflect that you are going to sleep and waking up.

Forgot to add Enchated and Entranced resets when you return home, fixed.

I don't know why your skills/magic are not showing up in combat as it works perfectly for me. I think you might have unlocked a magic ability as it is the first screen when you click on "Skills/magic" and thought you bought a skill, clicked the skills button in combat and then there were no options. This has now been changed, skills and magic have been separated into two different stores for clarity.

If you have unlocked a skill/magic and have it equipped it will now say "Skill/Magic is equipped"

For the shop and items, whoops missed that, the cost for the items is set for each slot, so slot one is 10 gold, slot 2 is 15, slot 3 is 20 ect ect. There is no difference between the items and all items are going to be balanced equally. The reason for the cost being fixed is because I like the idea of the player having to choose between the cheapest options and the best option, and if they happen to be the same, lucky you!

As for spelling, I might have a couple people to help me by play testing the game and being on the lookout for them as its a lot harder for me to find spelling mistakes in my own work.

Thanks again for the detailed review, hope to hear more from you after the next update.

 

[Vanity]

Even if it´s barebone so far, i do like the promise of it and see potential

Most knowing bugs already are reported, but i may have two more

1. Flame Strike does no damage

2. If Lilly grabs you (where you have to wait til you struggle free) she does 0 pleasure dmg

Generally there are times here and there, where text says you deal take dmg/pleasure dmg, but in reality you dont :O

Things i wish to see:

1. Description for what Stat does what, the game says it in the intro, but if you don´t memorize it there, you never will know, unless you play the intro again

2.Unequipping traits/skills, right now you can equip them, but well that´s it, after you do you are stuck with it, no way to unequip

3.Reseting my Stats, same as with traits/skills, the second you level a stat, there is no way to reverse it

For 2/3 i mostly wish for it for freedom, like if i want to play around with amy, i would like to make my char weaker, instead of oneshotting her, also might be helpful to have this for testing

4. More Content obviously

Difficulty:

Believe you asked for this on your patreon, as of now the Girls are super weak in my opinion, basically the only time i lose, is if i do it on purpose xD

That said, i don´t even know if they have all there planned skills in battle yet or not, so they might actually be stronger then they seem right now lol

Extra:

There is an Image for Amy with a "Succubus Tattoo", this made me thing they could evolve in some for, tried everything i could think of, but never got the image to show up, guess whatever it is for, isn´t implemented yet...

Speaking of evolve, Amy sucks of this one dude and says she grew stronger, again making me think there is a way for them to evolve, but i don´t feel any difference in the fight itself, she still is as weak as i remembered her lol

Overall:

Like i said i do like the Idea for this, it´s fun to play and i look forward to more

Also you may want to throw out updated Version of the Game if you have fixed the majority of bugs (call it 1.1a or something), rather then saying you did and keep the bugged version up for the time being, this will make it look better for people trying it out and also prevents people from reporting the same bug over and over again