VN Ren'Py Abandoned Once Upon a Time in Dream Town [Ch. 5 Add.1 - SPECIAL EDITION] [VIGOR]

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Scoobax

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Are there any pictures for this thread that can be used as signatures or only the pictures from the first post?
 

VIGOR GAMES

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Scoobax
I did some signatures to support the game.
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If you want to use them just copy the respective url of the sig, then go here, go to insert image option and paste it.
 
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PietruccioTheHilander

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I waited a while before reviewing this game, I was very interested in it and wanted to see how it turned out with more updates:
the structure of the game is good and also the idea, the fact of having the photos of real actors effectively eliminates the construction time of the scene, just take a picture ... but this is not true; a lot of post-production work and control of light and environments are needed; many photos are sparse and taken in natural light with no effects; many environments are standard (certainly you don't have luxury homes to take pictures) as well as clothes that are in normal common use (marge's dress when she opens the door is really hideous).
The first part of the game (the phone call) is really boring, photos of Marge could also be inserted and interposed with the text.
The same goes for the phone call with her friend Maya.
Some facial expressions also leave a little mhee; I don't know if they are professional actors but in the photos during the dialogues, they may even have their mouths open as they are talking.
Also in some photos there is a predominance of the red color, I do not understand if it is a deliberate choice.
Let's move on to the story:
Why would the guy faint when he practices massages?
Is it some weird syndrome?
Many situations seem forced.
The facial expressions of the guy in the elevator are hilarious.
Does the protagonist usually wear that type of underwear? I don't find it consistent.
The spin the bottle part is the best so far but a little lacking in events.
obviously the game is in the early stages of development.
having real actors has great power but it is also the Achilles' heel.
will they always be available? especially to follow the script in sex scenes? (if ever there will be)
Will there be possibilities of other places? or will we always stay at home?
The parts of the animation?
mini video?
many questions for the moment.
Overall great idea and great potential; more attention should be paid to the photography part and that of the contents of the dialogues.
Pay more attention to facial expressions.
 

PietruccioTheHilander

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Hi, the problem was that you posted it in italian (as far as I remember). Actually your review was fine, you should write it again in english.
wow really? it seems strange to me, it is the same message that I put in the discussion.
copy paste,
but if so, they are right then.
but now I can't write another one ...
 

ashitanojoe

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wow really? it seems strange to me, it is the same message that I put in the discussion.
copy paste,
but if so, they are right then.
but now I can't write another one ...
Yeah, your review was in another language for sure. I was going to say just copy and paste the same message you wrote here. I have seen those kind of comments in another languages several times in this forum when someone quote a comment. Sometimes, the comment quoted appears in another language despite the comment was posted in english.
 

PietruccioTheHilander

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Yeah, your review was in another language for sure. I was going to say just copy and paste the same message you wrote here. I have seen those kind of comments in another languages several times in this forum when someone quote a comment. Sometimes, the comment quoted appears in another language despite the comment was posted in english.
I use google's automatic translator to read, maybe it was translated automatically.
thank you for the clarification
 
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Ceesko

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Sorry guys I have a question, if there is no porn and no sexual content planned, why is this here on this site? Or are regular non Porn games/VN are allowed to be posted here now?
 
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