So I just started this game and I have two immediate thoughts:
1. I really like the use of actors. Normally I hate "real porn" games, but this looks really nice. I'm literally only through the first scenes but I really like it. This must take a lot of work and I commend the devs for putting some real effort into it.
2. But the dialog/text is riddled with errors and is very stilted. I know not everyone is a native English speaker, but the sort of issues that I've seen in just the first scene have taken me out of the game. It makes an already ridiculous premise (Elina is going to be a tutor and...escort, for $60 a week?) really difficult to accept. And it's not just simple typos, misspellings, or syntax errors, it's also a matter of structure and proof reading. Just look at the very first two lines of dialog from the second scene with Elina walking up the stairs: "That's how I ended up in this house. I wonder how this will turn out for me?" "That's how I ended up here, unsure how this will turn out for me." There's all this work being put into beautiful photography, but it's undermined by really sloppy text editing.
Anyways, I'm going to keep playing for a bit, maybe the dialog will get better. I don't mean to be a bitch, I'm sorry, it just drives me crazy.