Actually, I have no such abilities. So I would not write the story.
Of course they do. We aren't writers.
Absolutely.
Freedom of artistic expression belongs to those who have such abilities.
Right, a while back I was accusing one
Canto Forte of causing me to feel intelligent person vibes, and thinking that my advanced age might prevent me from even being able to speak their language. Metaphorically.
Fine. I was expressing the bind I feel in this story relative to Lydia's well being, understanding, of course that issue is entirely in your hands. But I still feel.
And my point was that there might be a way to resolve that tension. My suggestion of how that might be possible was not intended to be exhaustive of all possible resolvings in any sense. I leave that entirely to your creative juices.