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Vollezar

Gingers are love. Gingers are life.
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Congratulations!
Thanks, bro.

okay I just played it and I love it I'm hoping it doesn't turn into a Mindless fuck Fest

where the mc has to fuck every girl he meets

I'm hoping there's an option to turn them down if you're not interested

but I have a good feeling about this game

so I know this game is going to be good
No. It's not going to be a fuck fest. Thankfully.

Just a tip, at the beginning as narrator don't just tell people not to judge her too harshly let us know what actually happened and why, let us make our minds first then decide whether she deserves to be judged harshly or not
Thank you.

"Animations are beyond my current abilities so I'll be looking for someone to do that for us."

Daz can interpolate images between two end points of an animation. So, simplified, start and finish renders and Daz does the rest.
I did notice that Daz does a good job at predicting the movement. Open the door a few degrees and Daz will accurately move the door to that point without skipping a frame. I just need to keep practicing with the positioning of characters.

What's with you people and sex without the player consent? You give such a nice speech at start about relationships and shit... It's a porn game, I don't think it's too much to ask for, give the player the choice of who the MC fucks? Fuck, I was loving the story.

Thank you and good luck.
Story is fairly linear. I did, initially, intended to let player have more control over that and a few other things, but this is the first time I am making a game and things got a bit too complicated for me fairly fast with the amount of choices I was creating. So I dumbed it down for myself.
 
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Thanks, bro.


No. It's not going to be a fuck fest. Thankfully.


Thank you.


I did notice that Daz does a good job at predicting the movement. Open the door a few degrees and Daz will accurately move the door to that point without skipping a frame. I just need to keep practicing with the positioning of characters.



Story is fairly linear. I did, initially, intended to let player have more control over that and a few other things, but this is the first time I am making a game and things got a bit too complicated for me fairly fast with the amount of choices I was creating. So I dumbed it down for myself.
bro you don't know how happy that makes me just because I'm a Guy doesn't mean I want to sleep with every girl I see

just because it's an adult vn doesn't mean it has to be that way you know

just give me a good story with some good optional love interest and I'm good

but between me and you I have already chosen the best friend as my love interest

you know the one in the picture
 

Vollezar

Gingers are love. Gingers are life.
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bro you don't know how happy that makes me just because I'm a Guy doesn't mean I want to sleep with every girl I see

just because it's an adult vn doesn't mean it has to be that way you know

just give me a good story with some good optional love interest and I'm good

but between me and you I have already chosen the best friend as my love interest

you know the one in the picture
There might be some things happening starting in chapter 1 that people will really dislike, but it couldn't be helped within the story. However MC will never become a man whore. I got tired of that as well.

P.S. Dat Bella ass. I just wannna plant a smooch on them cheeks.
 
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What's with you people and sex without the player consent? You give such a nice speech at start about relationships and shit... It's a porn game, I don't think it's too much to ask for, give the player the choice of who the MC fucks? Fuck, I was loving the story.

Thank you and good luck.
yes I agree with you. I wish that sex scene was optional but I think it's a one-time thing and it won't happen again I think going forward all the sex scene will be optional from now on

and who knows maybe that's sex scene will be fixed in the next update and it will be optional

I know Vollezar he's a friend and he hates Force sex scene just like we do
 

SpyderArachnid

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Seems interesting, not too bad. Like some others, not a fan of sex without choice. Plus, it didn't make any sense to have that happen. Sharon breaks up with the guy cause she thought he was cheating (because of Julie's lies) and he goes and hops on the first available girl right after it happened? Guess he didn't really care about Sharon after all if he is jumping on another girl that quick. Didn't even bother to try and fix things either, just left. Hopefully in the future we are given a choice on that stuff.

Otherwise, decent start and curious to see how it goes from here. Best of luck with your game! ;)
 

Vollezar

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Seems interesting, not too bad. Like some others, not a fan of sex without choice. Plus, it didn't make any sense to have that happen. Sharon breaks up with the guy cause she thought he was cheating (because of Julie's lies) and he goes and hops on the first available girl right after it happened? Guess he didn't really care about Sharon after all if he is jumping on another girl that quick. Didn't even bother to try and fix things either, just left. Hopefully in the future we are given a choice on that stuff.

Otherwise, decent start and curious to see how it goes from here. Best of luck with your game! ;)
He did try to fix it with Sharon. He spent the whole day calling her and leaving her messages. That's what he is doing, yet again, at the start of bar scene. I do, sort of, agree that he jumps Bobbie's bones without much thought. But I just put myself in his state of mind. He is seriously messed up at that moment. His best friend put out a huge lie and portrays him as a cheater. His girlfriend won't even talk to him. And he has absolutely no one left in this world. Bobbie is the only one who offers some comfort away from this mess. So, without much thinking, he just goes for it.
I'll take the shot because I see that I did not do a good job at showing his current state of mind and situation he really is in.
I'll try to do better going forward at fleshing out this things.
My excuse is that when I used to write stories I always wrote only for myself so I didn't have to write too many details as I knew what was actually happening. I need to change that now, since I am writing for others. Hopefully I can break that bad habit fast.
 

kartolas

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Good start. I think we might be missing like some renders between scenes. Something like the MC walking to the coffee thinking a sentence or two, maybe thinking about the new city he's living in now, just to make the entire thing more fluid instead of jumping between scenes. Just a thought. Pretty good for a first time.
 
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Seems interesting, not too bad. Like some others, not a fan of sex without choice. Plus, it didn't make any sense to have that happen. Sharon breaks up with the guy cause she thought he was cheating (because of Julie's lies) and he goes and hops on the first available girl right after it happened? Guess he didn't really care about Sharon after all if he is jumping on another girl that quick. Didn't even bother to try and fix things either, just left. Hopefully in the future we are given a choice on that stuff.

Otherwise, decent start and curious to see how it goes from here. Best of luck with your game! ;)
trust me my brother today is a great day

how many times have we begged and begged

for a vn that is more than just MC fucking every girl in sight just because he is a man whore

and he has no control over his dick

but now things have changed one of our own has become a game developer and he feels exactly the way we do

when I think about all the great games Vollezar is going to make in the future

besides this one my mouth is watering

because I'm starving for a good story that has more than just the mc fuck her because she hot

I am talking about love stories with actual love in them
 

Vollezar

Gingers are love. Gingers are life.
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Aug 14, 2020
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So, Julie and Mike are late teens or early twenties and Sharon is what, 40? It appears Mike is into MILFs, she looks as old as the aunt...
I was going to make her look young, originally. But I just couldn't find it in myself to like her. She thinks highly of herself but all that jumping from guy to guy in the trailer park did take it's toll on her.
 

Roninsoul7

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One lie is all it takes to create a butterfly effect and ruin lives. So no I can't not judge her too harshly, because for all the mistakes I've made in my 46 years of life, lying to my best friend has never been one of them, even when they wanted me to lie to them (kind of why my best friend wasn't surprised when his girlfriend didn't last). If you accept someone who lies in your life, they will never be trustworthy, because they will lie again because you let them get away with it.
 
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