Seems interesting, not too bad. Like some others, not a fan of sex without choice.
Plus, it didn't make any sense to have that happen. Sharon breaks up with the guy cause she thought he was cheating (because of Julie's lies) and he goes and hops on the first available girl right after it happened? Guess he didn't really care about Sharon after all if he is jumping on another girl that quick. Didn't even bother to try and fix things either, just left. Hopefully in the future we are given a choice on that stuff.
Otherwise, decent start and curious to see how it goes from here. Best of luck with your game!