VN Unity Abandoned One More Simple Story [v0.5.1] [EVGART]

[coffeeaddicted]

I like the game. The idea isn't new but it looks great.
Here are some things that should be changed.
a) dialog. The dialog needs to go through grammar correction. In the newest update the imp talks about the girl but talks about himself as he were the girl. If i could i would help to correct it, though i am not a native speaker.
b) in one of the last pictures when she wakes up, there is something wrong with her feet. I thought they maybe socks but i think there is some texture problem.
i think that was the dialog box. I did not see that the first time. My mistake.

I do really like the building. It looks pretty trashy but fits the environment. Overall the game is really interesting and i hope it continues.

 

[iEVG]

I like the game. The idea isn't new but it looks great.
Here are some things that should be changed.
a) dialog. The dialog needs to go through grammar correction. In the newest update the imp talks about the girl but talks about himself as he were the girl. If i could i would help to correct it, though i am not a native speaker.
b) in one of the last pictures when she wakes up, there is something wrong with her feet. I thought they maybe socks but i think there is some texture problem.
i think that was the dialog box. I did not see that the first time. My mistake.

I do really like the building. It looks pretty trashy but fits the environment. Overall the game is really interesting and i hope it continues.

Thank you for your comment, we will try to fix the translation. Probably not many people read the story, so this is an important note. We do not have enough experience in translation, but we hope to become better at it during the work on the project. Thanks again.

 

[Envoye]

Any update planned?

 

[iEVG]

Any update planned?

Yes, soon.

 

[HPZAT]

This one was updated three weeks ago:

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[kino4ka]

isn't translated.

 

[Hullahopp]

Would it actually be a good idea to subvert that expectation ? Like make a game with a female protagonist, coming back home to a recently widowed man and his two sons ? Oh shit, never mind, I just read myself out loud

And a game in which the FEMALE protagonist returns home to a recently widowed woman and her two daughters?

 

[iEVG]

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isn't translated.

Yes, it's already been fixed.
Thanks for the feedback

 

[lemaro]

mac links are still .apk?

 

[iEVG]

mac links are still .apk?

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[LeeHanSolo]

several new scenes? Theres is nothing new on my side of things, is it dependent on choices you make?

 

[Deleted member 4995612]

Yes actually.
You can skip all sexual stuff and become the president of You-Wish-Istan. But only after 400 Days realtime of studies and bookreading and graduating. Its so freakin realistic I got calls from the NRA offering bribes.
I was really surprised, caus the title clearly didnt state what to expect already. "...More S I M P L E..."
Dont ask for Lambo when you knowingly walk into a Mitsubishi Store.

I like you.

 

[iEVG]

several new scenes? Theres is nothing new on my side of things, is it dependent on choices you make?

New scenes compared to v0.1.15_Beta.
If you have already seen version v0.2.1 - then yes, no new scenes.

Some scenes are choice-dependent.
For example if you're not interested in what happened to Katya, you won't see the continuation of the scene in the morning.

 

[HGR11957]

I like but the scenes are so dark

 

[mephisto80]

I like this game very much.

 

[Klaabu]

Белая стрекоза любви

 

[iEVG]

Белая стрекоза любви

Где-то слышал, что это песня про сперматозоид

 

[Priappus]

the game crashes

 

[iEVG]

the game crashes

What system?
Аt what step?

 

[Seanthiar]

I've only seen the teaser pics, but I remember to have seen the same scenes in another game here on f95zone.
Only difference another girl. Don't remember the name of the game. In the orig game it's a blonde naive very young looking flat chested girl always carrying a doll with her she got from her father and just died. And she always talks with the doll in the game and dream of her. She visits at the start the grave, then catches the train, is grabbed in the train by some thugs and got angry, because nobody helped her. Then follows the scene with the luggage we see here in the teaser pics etc.....