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I've been looking at the latest reviews and it's not fair to give low scores just because Mrs Parker is a slut. It's normal to feel uncomfortable, but it doesn't make sense to turn it into a bad evaluation.
People screaming ntr here are also not normal because our main character was not cheated in any way. The only thing that hasn't changed anywhere in the world is that Mrs Parker is a slut, but she's not a lover right now, so her sluttiness cannot be considered ntr.

As for Evelyn she's still a virgin dammit, she's never had anything physical so she's not ntr.
Riley is a normal girl with a sex life, not enough to call her a slut. Moonsong is also a normal girl with a normal life.
Actually, the main problem here is our main character. Every woman around her is an adult with a past life and sex experience, but our main character is a virgin and a teenager who gets hard when he sees a piece of breast. That's why he stands out as a passive character in the story, if this man was a little more established character, he would not attract so much attention. Another problem is that people are used to playing unrealistic VN. These games, where almost every girl is a virgin Virgin Mary, have created the wrong perception. Thus, players were stunned to see a real-life character in front of them.
 

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I've been looking at the latest reviews and it's not fair to give low scores just because Mrs Parker is a slut. It's normal to feel uncomfortable, but it doesn't make sense to turn it into a bad evaluation.
People screaming ntr here are also not normal because our main character was not cheated in any way. The only thing that hasn't changed anywhere in the world is that Mrs Parker is a slut, but she's not a lover right now, so her sluttiness cannot be considered ntr.

As for Evelyn she's still a virgin dammit, she's never had anything physical so she's not ntr.
Riley is a normal girl with a sex life, not enough to call her a slut. Moonsong is also a normal girl with a normal life.
Actually, the main problem here is our main character. Every woman around her is an adult with a past life and sex experience, but our main character is a virgin and a teenager who gets hard when he sees a piece of breast. That's why he stands out as a passive character in the story, if this man was a little more established character, he would not attract so much attention. Another problem is that people are used to playing unrealistic VN. These games, where almost every girl is a virgin Virgin Mary, have created the wrong perception. Thus, players were stunned to see a real-life character in front of them.
As far as the MC, I think he's going to develop more as the story goes on. Sure in CH1, he was at a disadvantage given his lack of experience and lack of manifestation but that's already changing as of CH2. Besides that, I never got the impression that he was weak willed. He takes teasing and insult in stride and doesn't let it get under his skin and remains confident. That to me shows strength of character.

This line stood out to me in regards to that:
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By CH2, he's a sexual natural that instantly has some of the most powerful superheroins after his cock and he's probably one of the most powerful supers in the story with a hot girlfriend that lets him fuck chicks to gain more powers. So I really don't get the criticisms saying the MC is weak. Doesn't seem that way to me. Maybe he starts out like a pervy simp that masturbates too much, but I think it's fair to say he can save money on tissues now.

As far as everything else, you're spot on. Most of the girls aren't even romantically involved with the MC yet so whatever they do sexually is of no consequence. They're grown ass women so it's normal for them to be sexually active. It's dumb that some people are so butthurt about it that they'll leave bad reviews, so I'm thinking about leaving my own 5-star review to offset the review bombers.
 
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Yea, mc is a wimp right now, it's surprising he had a chance to fuck some of these confident & outgoing girls.
For both it's more that they wanted to fuck him... Well, him and his "magical dick", and was as much for plot reasons.

Hope he will develop and start behaving like a normal man, because he as a "harem master" looks unbelievable with his current personality
Well he's pretty normal for most porn game protagonists, especially the "harem masters".
 
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Basically, a lot of people need to get the egos in check.
They'll get hung-up on their own interpretations of the netorare rule (not helped by its ambiguousness) and their interpretation of what makes a character a LI for the MC.

Even the game's intro screen with the "Default/Safe modes" choice explains the real problem... :sneaky:
I don't know what you are attempting to say.
 

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Yeah.
And if a dev gets rattled left and right by people's outcries left and right and tries to cater to all of them, it generally leads to the decline of the game.
Seen it happen with couple of the devs.
The Dev(s) should make the game he/she/they want, and not bow to pressure from a small group of disgruntled posters.
Before I download a game I always check the tags. If a game has tags that I don't want, I give it a pass. I don't immediately go on the forum thread and trash the Dev(s) for having or not having the tags that I want. It's the Dev(s) game and they can include and exclude whatever content they wish. If a game doesn't suit my tastes, then I just move on and look for something else.
Whining about what a game has and does not have just makes you look pathetic.
For those who don't like what this game offers, well, you are free to ignore this game. Better yet how about you create your own game with the tags that you want. Upload it here and let other whiners trash your tag decisions, and see how you like it.
 

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Before I download a game I always check the tags. If a game has tags that I don't want, I give it a pass.
I'd say, maybe that's a bit extreme. I mean the game can have tags we don't like, but those can be optional.

Like, I am not a great fan of lesbian content for example, but it's optional here, you can opt it out, not only that, but you also can get alternative scene instead, isn't it great?

But yeah, 100% agree, even if the game has smth I don't like, I don't complain or demand smth from Dev, nobody forced me to play the game. I chose it and played it. It's like to get a new TV at home, but then send a demand list to the company asking to change their production line because I didn't like some things in that TV. A bit exaggerated example, but still.

And considering that Dev really gave it all to the game (it's a really HQ product), it's really upsetting when he gets swarmed like this after every update.
I saw it before, unfortunately not everybody can hold still under all this harassment. It's mentally exhausting and has impact on motivation in general.
 
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You know, I might be reconsidering my suspicion of Parker with all of those probing questions at the end of Chapter 3. I'm replaying Chapter 1 and I just got to the Fortune Adebowale story. I completely forgot that Parker has a really deep grudge against the MTF and she doesn't trust the Sisterhood.

It kind of puts a different context to the questions. When MC's doggo growled at her (because always trust the doggo), I was thinking maybe she was a secret antagonist. I still think she's up to something but now I'm thinking she has her own motives.

I was thinking at first that maybe she's the one working with Scarlet Shadow, but I'm not sure Parker would have risked the MC's life by siccing a crazy tiger dude at him like that.
 
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am i the only one who thinks it's weird as fuck that MC betrays Moonsong's trust at literally the very first possibility? like, sure, he's excited that he got to screw around with her, but she told him, explicitly, that he should keep that a secret because it's something her job depends on. not only that, but he heard her tell Evelyn the same thing, and he heard her tell Isabella as well. you could argue that if she's letting so many people know she isn't a virgin that he might feel it's okay to do the same, except that it isn't his secret to tell, it isn't his job and reputation on the line, and he was still asked specifically to keep it a secret, which he agreed to.

but then, the first thing he does when he gets back home is tell someone about it? like, what the fuck? my opinion of him just dropped immensely. sorry if this has been gone over already, i only looked back five or six pages.
 

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You know, I might be reconsidering my suspicion of Parker with all of those probing questions at the end of Chapter 3. I'm replaying Chapter 1 and I just got to the Fortune Adebowale story. I completely forgot that Parker has a really deep grudge against the MTF and she doesn't trust the Sisterhood.

It kind of puts a different context to the questions. When MC's doggo growled at her (because always trust the doggo), I was thinking maybe she was a secret antagonist. I still think she's up to something but now I'm thinking she has her own motives.

I was thinking at first that maybe she's the one working with Scarlet Shadow, but I'm not sure Parker would have risked the MC's life by siccing a crazy tiger dude at him like that.
Dogs generally tend to growl at strangers they are not familiar with until their owners gets them used to the new people though, so Midnight (technically both her and Elijah are wolves, but I'd assume given they're in a similar family of animals, they still share those traits), not to mention Riley was also present.
So I don't think that aspect alone could be an indication of whether Parker is an antagonist.

Having said that, I was actually a little bit surprised there wasn't even an inner monologue by MC thinking "Why is she asking me all these questions?"
Even if he didn't outright question her saying "Why all the interrogation?" etc because he lusts for Parker, I do think it would have been plausible for him to think to himself why and get slightly suspicious.



My theory on it is, the Tiger dude attacking MC may have something to do with Parker's past with MC's parents.
Cause from what I remember, didn't MC's parents and Parker all used to work together?

Tiger dude could feel he got wronged somehow from possible experiments Parker and MC's parents worked on in the past. Those experiments could have been to create a best possible metahuman, an empath able to absorb all powers.
MC as we all know is a success, and tiger dude, guess he can be classified as a failure (perhaps this failure resulted in him getting stuck in his tiger form).
Hence him having the whole vendetta against MC, and how he knew MC's name saying "You ruined my life" or something iirc.

And even if Parker is not an antagonist, it may possibly be that she's at least complicit in putting MC in danger.
She didn't actively command the tiger dude to attack the MC, but by having him go through an experiment which ended up as a failure, pushing him towards the edge to join Scarlet Shadow's organization.

This also could possibly open a whole lot of windows of possible villains (failed experiments like the tiger dude with the attempt to create an empath) that have vendetta against the MC -
Basically the case of MC himself didn't do anything wrong, but he's paying the sins of his parents and Parker.

Of course, this may make some folks hate Parker even more (as if enough folks don't hate her already :KEK: ), but would be an interesting development, ngl.
 
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am i the only one who thinks it's weird as fuck that MC betrays Moonsong's trust at literally the very first possibility? like, sure, he's excited that he got to screw around with her, but she told him, explicitly, that he should keep that a secret because it's something her job depends on. not only that, but he heard her tell Evelyn the same thing, and he heard her tell Isabella as well. you could argue that if she's letting so many people know she isn't a virgin that he might feel it's okay to do the same, except that it isn't his secret to tell, it isn't his job and reputation on the line, and he was still asked specifically to keep it a secret, which he agreed to.

but then, the first thing he does when he gets back home is tell someone about it? like, what the fuck? my opinion of him just dropped immensely. sorry if this has been gone over already, i only looked back five or six pages.
One glaring flaw of the MC is that he's naive as fuck and kind of blabber mouth. Take the scene where Parker is asking him about the Sisterhood HQ. He just answers every question in detail never once stopping to notice the pattern to all her questions. If he ever finds himself in an interrogation room, then he's fucked.
 

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One glaring flaw of the MC is that he's naive as fuck and kind of blabber mouth. Take the scene where Parker is asking him about the Sisterhood HQ. He just answers every question in detail never once stopping to notice the pattern to all her questions. If he ever finds himself in an interrogation room, then he's fucked.
haven't got there, yet, though i'd gathered something like that happened.

i think if the player has the agency to not pursue a love interest he/she doesnt like and to not interact with her beyond the necessary, theres no BIG problem and no need of too much drama...
the issue with this is that, in Parker's case, MC is constantly thinking about how she's so attractive, about how she's literally his dream girl, about how he's fantasized over her more than every other woman combined... and then we actually see several of his fantasies. if we could actually opt out of content with her, we wouldn't have any of that, beyond maybe a couple lines about how it happened in the past or something. instead, we're constantly being told that the MC does like her, more than any other woman in fact, and we're given content with her with no choice to avoid it. and yes, dream content is still content with that character.

now, i don't actually have an issue with her sleeping around, because i don't like her anyway (i'm usually not into the mother/landlady archetype, and in Parker's case i think she's pretty ugly to boot); i still think it would have been nice if the dev's promise of letting us opt out of LIs we're not interested in was actually upheld. stuff like this makes me lose trust in a dev; now that one promise is broken, who's to say what other promises will be as well?

i do think the game is pretty good overall, there are just a few issues that hinder my enjoyment.
 

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the issue with this is that, in Parker's case, MC is constantly thinking about how she's so attractive, about how she's literally his dream girl, about how he's fantasized over her more than every other woman combined... and then we actually see several of his fantasies. if we could actually opt out of content with her, we wouldn't have any of that, beyond maybe a couple lines about how it happened in the past or something. instead, we're constantly being told that the MC does like her, more than any other woman in fact, and we're given content with her with no choice to avoid it. and yes, dream content is still content with that character.

now, i don't actually have an issue with her sleeping around, because i don't like her anyway (i'm usually not into the mother/landlady archetype, and in Parker's case i think she's pretty ugly to boot); i still think it would have been nice if the dev's promise of letting us opt out of LIs we're not interested in was actually upheld. stuff like this makes me lose trust in a dev; now that one promise is broken, who's to say what other promises will be as well?

i do think the game is pretty good overall, there are just a few issues that hinder my enjoyment.
There's no reason to believe that the Dev isn't going to let you opt out with Parker if that's what you want. This is from the dev notes:

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There have been two forced scenes. One was the Amber HJ because the fact that she swallowed his cum was important. The other was obviously nutting inside Moonsong. All other sexual involvements have been optional thus far. Even Evelyn is optional if you opt to go solo with Moonsong and break Evelyn's heart, you monster!

Parker herself is not actually a love interest yet, but she undoubtedly will be later on. When that time comes, you'll have a chance to opt out.
 
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am i the only one who thinks it's weird as fuck that MC betrays Moonsong's trust at literally the very first possibility? like, sure, he's excited that he got to screw around with her, but she told him, explicitly, that he should keep that a secret because it's something her job depends on. not only that, but he heard her tell Evelyn the same thing, and he heard her tell Isabella as well. you could argue that if she's letting so many people know she isn't a virgin that he might feel it's okay to do the same, except that it isn't his secret to tell, it isn't his job and reputation on the line, and he was still asked specifically to keep it a secret, which he agreed to.

but then, the first thing he does when he gets back home is tell someone about it? like, what the fuck? my opinion of him just dropped immensely. sorry if this has been gone over already, i only looked back five or six pages.
Well, I mean it's actually Lady Steel who went on to say initially "He steals powers from others after fucking them." when MC had trouble explaining.

That pretty much opened the can of worms where Parker and Riley could literally piece together who he fucked by showing his new powers.
Granted, if he was less naive, then he could have just shown Emerald's powers and kept Moonsong's powers hidden (hence keep that promise to her to make people think she's a virgin).

But Lady Steel certainly didn't help things on that matter; to add more fuel to the fire, after Parker and Riley says "You have Moonsong & Emerald's powers?" one of the first line Lady Steel says is "Moonsong is such a slut, but I'm surprised she opened her legs to him easily."

So in this aspect, MC takes some of the blame yes, but part of the blame should go to Lady Steel as well for not being as careful with her words.
But given her character is brash and impulsive, I'm not too surprised.
 
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